Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviews For CAST (Citizens Against the Slave Trade)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2016 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 5: Getting Acquainted

I have always found this story so intriguing. Was loving it! Disappointed that it hasn't been updated. I do hope that you will come back to it some time. I really miss it! ~Kim

Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2016 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 5: Getting Acquainted

When's the next chapter? I've been postponing reading this one until you had the next one out...but curiousity won. Now I need the next chapter.

I read you had some computer problems, so I'm curious if that's solved.

Eagerly waiting for more. :)

Happy New Year!

Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2015 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 5: Getting Acquainted

Just to let you know, I'm still waiting! ;-)

Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2015 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 5: Getting Acquainted

Where are you? We are missing you and your story :((

Author's Response:
I'm here!!! But my computer is not. For the last week or so, my computer has been slowly crashing and won't save a damn thing... Until I get to the bottom of it or find money for a new laptop, I'm more or less out of luck. The next chapter WAS half written... but it never saved. So I am here... and I haven't forgotton the story... I'm just without a way to write it. However, I'll get my POS computer fixed here soon though. Sorry for the delay. Don't abandon me!

<3

Reviewer: nolane (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2015 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 5: Getting Acquainted

excellent story ! a little sad but i hope Justin will feel better

Brian doesn't know where he stands and it's really touching

thank you

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2015 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 5: Getting Acquainted

This chapter wasn't a gap filler at all. There were so many revelations and feelings exposed. I love this story

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2015 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 5: Getting Acquainted

Why do I see this not going the way Brian wants it to like not at all? Poor Brian and poor Justin what a mess they have. I will only hope that things get better soon for them. Looking forward to more!!

You aren't the only one who thinks that about songs. I do it too all the time with these two. In fact I wrote my first story on here the other day because of one lol

Well done!

:)

Reviewer: BritianLover88 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2015 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 5: Getting Acquainted

Can't wait to find out what will happen next :)

Loving the slow and smei unspoken bond forming betwen Brian and Justin :)

Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2015 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 5: Getting Acquainted

So Debbie made a long awaited appearance. I love her here, already in a full mother-hen protective mode, although she could be a bit more considerate and sensitive and not so accusatory towards Brian. But why she insists on Brian taking Justin's virginity soon? Sure, it's necessary if he was to be sold, but I'm sure it won't be the case, especially after the conversation in which Justin basically begged for it not to happen. Anyway, I'm glad that Brian and Justin are not alone in this mess.
I'm also very curious about Justin's story, about his parents etc. It's a pity that this conversation was interupped, hopefully they will continue it in the next chapter. I hope so much that only Craig is responsible for Justin's being slave and that Justin can meet Jennifer at some point and keep in touch with her, even as a slave.
Brian's vivid description of what would await for Justin were he with Sap was kind of cruel. But I understand his frustration - he is walking on a thin ice, very small things done or said are triggering Justin's unconscious reactions. Maybe it wouldn't hurt for Brian to talk with the trainer to find out more about Justin.
I so love this story, I can't wait for more! Hugs.

Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2015 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 5: Getting Acquainted

Hi, Frances! Your story is getting better and better with each chapter! It so intense that I can barely take my eyes off it while reading. I'm enjoying it immensly!

Justin is so vulnerable now, and Brian is so caring - I just love them this way. Justin's outburst made me worried for a second - it was a relief when Brian managed to handle it. Actually, it's pretty natural that Justin is acting out right now - he's still scared, unsure of himself. So it's even more pleasurable when he shows the rare glimpses of trust towards Brian. I loved it when Debbie scared him, and he felt the need to seek protection from his Master. It was touching.

The conversation about selling was very emotional. It's obvious that Brian is already doubtful of his decision, so what is going to happen when he discovers his feelings to Justin and admits them? I don't think he'll be able to let Justin go by then.

Thank you for this wonderful journey! Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2015 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 5: Getting Acquainted

First I have to say great update...even if I am a little nervous about what's to come. Debbie flew in like a hurricane and started throwing around accusations without knowing the full story. I'm glad she was able to see reason here with the situation being such as it is. I've noticed that some readers are afraid of this turning into a BDSM type of story and are adverse to them having a Dom/sub relationship because of inequality between the two. I'm hoping I don't offend anyone when I say that, having a Dom/sub relationship doesn’t put them on unequal footing...as a matter of fact, Justin would really hold the power in that situation because he can stop any and all actions with just a word (Brian has given him carte Blanche in that respect) That kind of dynamic would actually serve them perfectly in this instance. Justin wouldn't be confused about what he could or could not do, and Brian will learn Justin’s limits and understand him quite a bit better. And all the while, the trust between them will get stronger as well as their bond to each other.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2015 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 5: Getting Acquainted

I love Brain's confusion about the situation and his protectiveness. I don't get Debbie and Michael - we do need more slave background which I'm sure you've got in store for us. I definitely want some harm to come to Craig. It's a scary world when a family sells off a child because the child isn't what they want or doesn't behave as they think they should. Any child could become a slave - no one would ever really feel safe. Time for some serious reform. I can see Brian falling for his blond - to hell with society. Looking forward the next instalment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2015 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 5: Getting Acquainted

Now that's a twist. Deb telling Brian he needs to fuck Sunshine. I can see why though, if the kids no longer a virgin he won't be wanted as much. Good luck!

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