Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2015 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 2: Coming Home
Liking this so far, full of angst and quite disturbing - not least being Mikey the one giving advice. This is one weird universe:-)
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 2: Coming Home
Very well written. This story looks very interesting. I guess Michael will be acting like a dick, as usual. I just hope that Brian and Justin end up happy. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue enjoying the story! And you know Michael. ;-)
Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2015 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 2: Coming Home
I'm waiting impatiently for the update, although I know that creativity needs time... Anyway, so impatiently that the other day I missed my metro station because I was daydreaming about how the next chapter could look like. And today I even had your fic in a dream :P I have QAF-related dreams sometimes but rarely connected to a concret fanfic. Anyway, I saw a scene where Brian took Justin to the diner, but was drinking only coffee, and Justin didn't eat anything. Later when asked why, Justin told Brian that as a slave he is not supposed to eat if his master is not eating as well at the time. Apparently a thing they told him wherever he was before bought by Brian. You can use this piece of something in the story if you want.
So this is official now: I have a compulsive obsession over QaF. As if I didn't know. :D
Author's Response: lol!!! That's so funny!!! I'm glad my story is dream worthy! ;-) That scene you discribed reminded me of another slave QAF story I've read. It was a lot different than mine, but I wonder if we've read the same one? I wish I could remember the name off the top of my head. But your dream isn't super far off for my story either! We shall see where it takes us!
I'm so glad you're liking the story. I was afraid people would think it was too far off the norm. Next chapter will HOPEFULLY be out by this weekend. :-)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2015 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 2: Coming Home
Still very much enjoying this, Frances, and intrigued by the storyline. I had the same question as Astrid; I assume, too, that Michael is being so caustic as a way to hide his true feelings, and not draw suspicion to him and Brian? And I love the hints of feistiness in Justin already, even though we know he's still very scared of what will happen to him.
I will certainly be looking forward to the continuation of this. Very glad you chose to post this story. Thank you. ~Kim
P.S. Marny has agreed to help you with a banner. Please contact her, and if you want to email me, I can provide you with her direct email address. Let me know if I can be of any other help.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot that you like it because... well, I'm a little obsessed with your writing... lol... you may have noticed. ;-)
Michael's intentions will be revealed very soon and I'm glad you picked up on the conflict going on in Justin's mind. I mean, here he is, trained to be a slave, but he's still our confident Justin and has 15 years as a free man to come to terms with. I hope I can write this the way I invision it... It should be kinda different than what people think will happen.
And yes, the banner! I would love Marny to help. I did see your email. I'm just slow. Ha.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2015 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 2: Coming Home
The first chapter I read on my vacation on my smartphone. And I was hooked immediately. I'm glad there is still some fire in Justin and I hope he can get himself of.
Please need another update.
* hugs *
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! At the end of the day, slave or not, Justin is the same Justin... He's not afraid to stand up for himself.
Btw, I'd LOVE your help with a banner. How do we do that?
Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2015 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 2: Coming Home
Hi, Frances! Thank you so much for such a captivating work!
Actually, I love such stories very much, so I had big hopes for this one while starting reading. And it has definitely intrigued me.
The plot is interesting and unusual. The characters are well-written and alive. I’ve already fallen in love in Justin. He is so strong and brave, he tries to fight for himself (even despite of knowing where his rebellious attitude might lead him). It was really painful to see him like this – helpless, desperate, humiliated.
Brian is amazing as well. He’s already so protective of Justin. It’s always a pleasure to see how much he cares – I’m sure this feeling will only become stronger in the future.
The auction was breathtaking. I couldn’t take my eyes off it! Such powerful tension… And it was so touching when Justin feared to find out who had bought him eventually. Of course, he doesn’t trust Brian now yet, but I’m sure that he was somehow relieved that it wasn’t someone else (even on an intuitive level).
I understand Michael’s concerns – this entire thing is not going to be easy for them. However, I wonder how he’ll behave towards Justin in the future.
Thank you once again! Can’t wait for the update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Michael's intentions will be brought to light soon and Brian and Justin are still canon Brian and Justin. lol. Wouldn't change them for the world!
Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2015 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 2: Coming Home
This story really has a potential, because the storyline is new. You have so many possibilities. Do I have a right impression that Michael is saying all those terrible things just for the appearance - because the driver may hear them?
And I have a feeling that Debbie will be very proud of Brian for saving Justin, especially when she founds out that Sap was going to buy him.
I hope though thatyou will focus not only on Brian and Justin but on a bigger picture as well - which the title of the story would suggest. Will Justin be a free man in the end? Will the slavery be abolished? I know I will have to wait for these answers, but I wish the story went in this direction.
I'm looking forward for the updates!
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2015 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 2: Coming Home
It's not lame at all. Not every chapter can be action packed. Sometimes it is just to move the story along and that's important too. I mean at least Brian has gotten Justin out of there and back to the loft. I look forward to more. This is so very interesting!!
Well done!
:)
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the next chapter and all the rest as well!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2015 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 2: Coming Home
There seems to be a lot more to owning a slave than Brian knows. Now it's up to Michael to educate him.
Author's Response: You got it. Thanks for the review! :-)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2015 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 2: Coming Home
Great update, just one question...what the hell is up with Michael? One minute he seems opposed to Brian's new situation, the next he's making sure Justin knows his place in the harshest of ways.
Author's Response: Well, we all know Mikey can be a little shit, but he may have his reasons this time. ;-) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Miki (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2015 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 2: Coming Home
Anxiously awaiting chapter 3
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2015 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 2: Coming Home
That's so evil. Why stop there? :(
Note I hope the next chapter will be posted soon. Justin's smart mouth will get him in trouble. Pour Brian having no clue what to do. That's not nice of Michael... Telling Justin what to do. He's Brian's.
Author's Response: Haha! Don't worry. The next chapter have some more bulk and I think it'll be apparently why I had to stop chapter two where I did. :-) Next chapter should be out by this weekend and Michael's intentions will be brought to light. Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: neff (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2015 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 2: Coming Home
Intriguing.
Author's Response: Why thank you ;-)
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