Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Exhibitionism
Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2016 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hot and hilarious!!! Great job :D

Reviewer: Frances (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2016 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow.  I don't know how I've never read this before, but omg, so freaking sexy.  Love protective Brian.  Love nervous Justin.  Love blackout orgasms.  lol.

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2015 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

There is so much about this story that I love. First, I love first time fics, I also just read your phone sex one and I am wondering if this is a sort of theme/series you have going on. We need a first time they cyber sex fic too ;) Just throwing that out there LOL!

ANYWAY, back to this fic. I loved it. Brian was so hot with Justin on the dance floor, but omg the bit that got me was his bit in the back room, about how he can only bring tricks in to that part, as the corridor area isn't safe - he freaking loved Justin from the start, he just didn't know it yet, But I seriously love it when Brian gets all protective and "this is MY boy," with him. It's really hot.

ALSO, I loved his little surprise for Justin - and his story about getting fucked in the back room, I definitely think something happened to put him off being a bottom, and you kinda "confidrmed" that for me.

Love love love this. How does this not have a million reviews? x

Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2015 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well, I have a need to leave one more comment. This is really überhot. And i really ADORE all kinds of gapfillers for Season One, because for one, this was still a relatively carefree time for the boys (there were problems, I mean, but not as serious ones as the bashing or cancer or Ethan) and for another, this was the precious time when Brian's feelings were being formed. And I especially like it described in gapfillers like this one, because it is as if we were given another scene or episode. So cool. I hope you will write something more, set in a similar time! Xoxo



Author's Response:

. . . Thank you for coming back to comment again - you've motivated me to post some more of my Season One gapfillers.  I love Mid-Season one for all ther reasons you do (which you put so eloquently).  There's so much to work with and so much room for humor and playfulness.

Reviewer: femmegirl49 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2015 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

Just...beyond hot.  But sweet at the same time.  I love when Brian teaches Justin and then goes into protective mode.  Is there anything better?  I think not.

You have a gift and I am so glad you share it with us!!!  Thank you.



Author's Response:

You're very welcome!  I'm glad you enjoyed it :)  I love Brian in protective mode, too.  I think he really enjoys the role of protector/mentor.  Sex is important to him and Justin is important to him and the two together bring out the playful sweetness in him.

Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wooow, this was great. Hot, of course. Sweet, because Brian is so protective and caring and actually communicating with Justin about doing something or not. And funny too. Simply perfect.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you enjoyed it . . . . now on to your second comment . . . :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

Omg that. Was amazing and sinfully hot lol

Author's Response:

Thank you, my dear!  I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

I like how Brian isn't the asshole everyone thinks he is.  So good.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'll post another smutty little Season One gapfiller soon :)

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

God damn Fray this was HOT!!! Love that you wrote from Justin's POV which you excel at and don't do nearly enough for me!! Amazing gap filler and well it makes total sense that Brian would teach Justin the ropes as it were about the Back Room and that he would also take him to the place back there that he would be safe in. Love any story about season one Brian and Justin especially when Brian is teaching Justin. So very  very good. This is for certain a top three favorite for me of your stories about the boys!! Makes me wonder what other amazing stories you've not posted!

Very well done my friend!!

:)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it :)  I have a whole trove of stories just like this that I'll post at some point.  I love writing Season One gapfillers - there's so much room for playfulness (and sex, of course - first times are so much fun to write).  I can imagine that Brian loved playing the role of Sex Mentor to a bright, eager student :)  Also, thank you for the compliment about writing from Justin's POV.  I feel like I've got his voice nailed down for Season One, but after that, he slips away from me a bit . . .

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