Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2019 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 35 - All over again

Sorry it took so long to read this chapter I was in hospital for a bit. 

 

This was wonderful I loved the trip they took and I loved them getting ready to go to Debbie’s for Christmas. Lol Brian really can’t resist Justin can he. His bond with his dad gets me in the heart more and more you have written it so beautifully. I’d love to see more.

 

The date has to be written and of course lots more as well this is such an incredible story. Xx



Author's Response:

Never apologize for something like that. I hope you're feeling better now. How are you ? I saw the post on FB, I'm so happy you're finally out of there. And sorry it takes me so long to respond to reviews, I'm quite busy these days and mostly away from my computer.

I'm glad you stille enjoy it. And I know you read the Date already before. Remember Gus bringing a date on Valentine's day in a restaurant and going to see the King Lion with Brian, Jack and Gus? That's the one :D

Sending a very special giant hug your way my friend <3 <3 <3 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2017 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 35 - All over again

I have truly enjoyed your story--going back and forth with the past and present was a challange for me but it finally worked out. This is the first story I've read that let you feel joy about Jack and Brian as father and son. I so wanted a memory for Brian of a time his dad loved him and for Brian to be proud him, even with his restrictions.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much :) I'm very glad you enjoyed this story and Brian and Jack's relationship!

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2016 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 35 - All over again

Hi my friend! It's been a while, i'm so sorry... First, thanks for asking, me and my family are okay. Friends of my parents had been at the christmas market this evening, but they are also okay. I think religious fanaticism is one of the worst. There is so much hate in this world and it's such a waste of time. Are you from Paris? I hope you've had a peaceful christmas time and I wish you a good start to the new year tomorrow. Now, this chapter. It's great how things has developed. I feel very happy for Brian and Jesse and of course for Brian and Justin. The scene with Brian and Gus is so cute and their talk... And you are right, I would love to see this "double-date" :-) So, there is only one chapter left. To be honest, I have kind of occupied myself with other stories these last days because I don't want your story to end. Hm, I think there's something weong with me... :-) A big big hug and and bye for now! a.  



Author's Response:

Sorry it took me a while to respond to you. First of all, Happy new year! I'm so glad you and your family and friends are okay. I'm not from Paris but my sister and friends live here (I visit regularly), and I have family at Nice, too. So, I'm sadly familiar with the atrocity of the recent attacks. This is insane.

Aww, I'm so glad you're postponing to read this because you don't want this to end. But you have just the epilogue left! I hope you will enjoy it. 

Thank you again, SO MUCH, for your amazing support with this story. You make it writing it so much more valuable, because I know some readers like you really enjoy it and for me, that's the main reason why I'm not giving up on this fandom. So, really, thank you.

A big hug!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2016 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 35 - All over again

This was wonderful! I am so glad that I waited to read this when I actually had the time to enjoy it. The meeting with Jesse went well, there's so much hope that they will be able to rebuild their friendship. Reading about Jack and his reactions to every little thing never fails to make me smile. The easy-going banter between Brian and Justin is so comforting... they will be fine. More than fine!

Off to read the epilogue...



Author's Response:

** smiling ** I'm so glad you have enjoyed this so much. I had a great time writing this chapter, especially the easy-going banter going on between the characters. And yes, they will be more than fine!!!

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 35 - All over again

Dear readers, 

Due to the last restoration of the site, I was unable to respond to your comments. From memory, the reviews missing are from Laura, Sandy, mcm, Kim, Chris, aglada and two other reviewers, one who reviewed on the epilogue, and one on chapter 2. 

I would be very grateful for you to repost your review, so that I can respond to you. If you don't I will post a response to your review myself by tomorrow (luckily, I have a good memory and honestly, I love reviews!!).

Thank you so much!!!!! A huge hug to all of you :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2016 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 35 - All over again

Hi, my friend!  I will be so sad to see this magnificent tale end.  You have woven such a masterful story full of ups and downs, growth and change, with such moving emotion.

I am glad that Jesse and Brian are mending their relationship; I think they both needed that.  It would be unrealistic, IMO, to not need some time to fully reinstate their previous bond, but they seem to be well on their way.

And Jack and Gus - what a delight to watch them interact together!  I never in my wildest dreams thought I would ever LIKE Jack Kinney's character, but through tragic but lifechanging events, you have managed to do that.  And that moment when father and son hugged was so poignant.

I will truly miss this story when it is done.  Thank you for taking us along for the ride.  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

You're so kind with me, Kim :) Still not sure I deserve all the compliments, but I'm sincerely touched by your words.

Brian and Jesse need time, but they will get there, because they both want to. And, yes, falling in each other's arms too soon would  have been unrealistic or fake. I'm glad you approve their reactions.

Jack and Gus are a delight to write. Well, Brian and Justin too. Or Brian and Jack. Hey, even Justin and Jack lol. They're all a family now.

Thank you for having supporting me all along the ride, Kim, you know how much it means to me :) And if I don't have any occasion to say it, I hope you have a wonderful Christmas!! * Hugs back to you *

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2016 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 35 - All over again

excellent chapter-  love the scenes with Gus and Jack-  such playfulness-  happy that Jennifer and Jesse are both moving back and Brian is finally admitting that he is happy



Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked it! Brian is one lucky guy :)

Thank you as always fro your support Sandy! ♥

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2016 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 35 - All over again

Christmas was great, especially for Jack.  Brian and Justin together.  A double date with Gus seems in the cards. 



Author's Response:

Christmas spirit is certainly in the air. Gus is irresistible, isn't he?

Thank you as always for your amazing support!!!♥♥♥

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2016 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 35 - All over again

This was beautiful!  The love demonstrated between Brian and his father was touching.  Brian has changed so much and grown so much emotionally throughout this story.  

I agree.  I think the date deserves coverage as well.  I will miss this story so much!



Author's Response:

Hi my friend!

You're right, Brian has changed a lot, I think I have a tendancy to make him grow up in all my stories. I'm happy that you were touched by his relationship with his father here :):)

LOL, I think I will keep that idea of a double date under my belt, in case I suffer from a huge withdrawal once I will post the epilogue. It shouldn't be too long now.

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for all the support you gave me!!! ♥♥♥

Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2016 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 35 - All over again

Hi Alois...beautiful chapter! The Brian and Gus love discussion was hilarious, I imagine I smiled like a fool through the entire scene at least it sure felt like I did lol. I'm saddened that this wonderful journey is nearly over😔. Thank you for writing and sharing such a beautiful story. Definitely one I plan to read again from start to finish. Looking forward to the epilogue!



Author's Response:

I'm thrilled you liked it! I should have put a sweet overload alert haha. Brian and Gus conversation was hilarious to write, too. I feared that the whole chapter was too sweet and I struggled to write Brian in this last one but hey, he's happy, so, he deserves to be sappy LOL

Thank you so much Laura, for your support on this story. It had been a great help anytime I wanted to quit :D

* A big hug 'à la Jack' * :)

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