Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2019 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Give it time

I could feel the tension jump off the page. I can also feel the pain Brian is feeling at seeing Jesse. It’s understandable that things went the way they did with this meeting it will take time I guess and I hope they can resolve this. I’m glad Brian turned to Justin they really can help each other. 



Author's Response:

Brian has really grown up, right? :D 

Thank you again, Vicki!!!!

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Give it time

 Wow that had to be a huge surprise to see someone after eight years and he's walking. To bad Brian didn't ask him to sit causing Jesse considerable pain. I figure after the shock wears off they will re-build their friendship.I'm sure Brian still feels a lot of guilt that he got hurt.



Author's Response:

Yes, talk about a shock. Brian will need time to process that Jesse is back. And of course, a part of him will always feel guilty, even though he now understands it wasn't his fault.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2016 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Give it time

Hi again! Why have you been unsatisfied with the chapter “Broken”? I think it’s perfect. The emotions are so palpable. So, now Jesse and Brian meet again! And as always, you are amazing. How you express their feelings. Brian’s anger as he learns that Jesse has been able to walk again for several years. Haven’t expect him to be so angry, but somehow it’s understandable. Jesse should have talked to Brian earlier, but again, we all make mistakes. Just Brian should know that and although he doesn’t do regrets and apologizes he has asked Justin for forgiveness -  and received it. But okay, as you said “Give it time”.

The scene between Brian and Justin is beautiful. “Your” Justin is incredibly, amazing. He loves Brian just as he is, always feeling what he needs and giving it to him. He knows when to keep silent and just be there – and thereby again Brian opens up. And again, it’s also good to see that Brian’s really grown up, not being angry or shutting himself off. They are just so beautiful together. Big hug and a thank you! Hm, I think I don’t want this story to end….



Author's Response:

I have no idea why I was unsatisfied with it. Maybe because it was an important chapter,  that I wanted to have it right and that of course, when you're writing it, it's hard to take a step back and to analyse it with a more critic eye. But now that I have reread it, I like it :)

Brian is surprised in this chapter. He never imagined Jesse coming to see him in his office. And he wasn't prepared. That's why he is reacting like that. He is not really angry, more perturbed and well, he is trying to deal with his feelings and have no clue what they are. But I have a feeling he just needs time to process it lol I mean, I'm not sure how I would have reacted in his case, but I know I would not have welcomed the person with open eyes at first sight. Time is essential here.

As for Justin, I said it before, he is an amazing character in this story. And I really love him with Brian in this chapter. They are beautiful together, I couldn't agree more.

As always, A huge hug my friend! And I'm thrilled you don't want this to end LOL

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2016 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Give it time

I'm caught up now, and I'm left wanting more... I'm loving this fic, and I can't wait to see Brian and Justin fall completely in love all over again...

Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Thank you again for all your comments on this fic. I'm so glad you're liking it! I think by the time this story ends, Brian and Justin will be more in love than ever. After all they went through, it's the least I can do ;)

* Big hugs * And thank you again Kathleen :):):)

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2016 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Give it time

I really like the title of this chapter... both Jesse and Brian need to give it time. There's obviously still a lot to work out between them, but after the initial shock of the first meeting, hopefully it will go smoother. As much as Brian was hurt by what Jesse said at the time, he's got to realize that Jesse wasn't in his right mind when he said them. I'm glad it didn't seem to interfere with the Brian and Justin reunion!



Author's Response:

Hi my friend!

Time can heal the wounds. Jesse and Brian need to heal, together. They both know it, even if Brian needs time to sort out his feelings. It's a good thing he has Justin to push him in the right direction ;)

The old Brian, the one who couldn't deal with his demons, would have probably pushed Justin away at that point. But Brian isn't that man anymore and I doubt he will ever do anything to jeopardize his relationship with Justin. On the contrary, he is even more grateful, and aware of how lucky he is.

Thank you as always for your wonderful support!!! * Hugs from France *

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2016 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Give it time

Hi, my friend!  OMG, loved, loved, loved everything about this chapter!  How you wrote both Jesse's and Brian's emotions, how you showed that Brian still loved his friend, despite his words and pain, and how Justin was there for Brian, no questions asked, when he needed him. 

 

I think this is one of my favorite chapters!  You write so exquisitively.  I will really hate to see this story end, but please never doubt what a lovely, poignant tale you have woven here.  XOXO  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim! I'm soooooo glad you liked this chapter! I like Brian and Justin becoming so close again, and of course, Brian is really a big softie when you think about it. It's painful, but it's also the reason why he and Jesse's friendship is so sincere and true. And Justin is a wonderful man to be there for Brian without pressuring him. He knows him, loves him and believes in him. It's time they have their happy ending.

Your comment makes me so happy, you have no idea :):):):) XOXO

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2016 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Give it time

Loved, loved, loved this chapter.  I'm kind of glad Brian is making Jesse work for his forgiveness even though he still loves him.  There is no way anyone would just forgive and forget instantly in a situation like that.  Brian has mellowed a lot and it is so heartwarming to see how much he respects and depends on Justin now. 



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you liked this chapter! * happy dance * I couldn't see Brian just saying 'okay, let's be friends again!' right away, although, I always saw him as a very forgiving man, so there is little doubt about the outcome. But yes, Jesse needs to work to regain Brian's trust, and I think he actually wants to prove himself, too. As for Justin, Brian could have freaked out that Justin knew about Jesse walking again, and didn't tell him. But he understands, and mainly, he loves Justin more than anything and he is willing to fight for him now. I'm glad it's as heartwarming for you as it is for me :)

Thank you as always for your never-ending support!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2016 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Give it time

Loved loved this chapter thank you

Author's Response:

That makes me sooooo happy!!! Thank you Chris :)

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: October 07, 2016 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Give it time

Great chapter-  loved the interactions between all parties and especially Brian and Jesse.  I love how Justin reads Brian and understands when not to push-  he has been reading hte Brian Kinney operating manual and paying attention.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed their reunion, even if Brian needs time to process it all. And Justin knows how to let his man come to him. He has faith in them, which is a wonderful evolution of their relationship. They're both where they're meant to be. Thank you as always so much for your support!! :)

Reviewer: Glo (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2016 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Give it time

Well I think that went as well as it could, considering the circumstances. Like you said, Brian just needs some time to process it all.

So glad he & Justin are having fun again! Can't wait for the next one! 



Author's Response:

Yes, considering, it wasn't so bad. As Debbie once said, Brian's bigger organ is truly his heart. As for Justin, I doubt Brian will ever let him go again! Thank you so much for reading and especially taking the time to leave a comment. I hope you're okay my friend after all the hard times lately. And I saw congratulations are in order for the marriage of your daughter, so congratulations !!! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2016 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Give it time

Everybody has come full circle now.  Let's hope that everything works out.



Author's Response:

As always, a huge thank you for your support my friend :) Hopefully, their happily ever after is within reach

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