Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2019 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 26 - This is just goodbye

Oh man my heart shattered reading this chapter so much pain in their hearts. It’s so hard to see the struggle within them and stubbornness. I can feel Justin pulling away even though he loves Brian so much I don’t know how much more he can take. This story is so amazing and powerful. 



Author's Response:

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 26 - This is just goodbye

 Brians a mess, Jesse is a mess, Justin is heatbroken and a mess-chapter had no hope for anyone, when does it get better ?



Author's Response:

It will, I promise. But we're not here yet.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 26 - This is just goodbye

Hi again! I’ve already written a review the first time I’ve read this chapter and there isn’t so much more to say about it. It hurts and I suffer with both Brian, Justin and Jesse. I somehow admire Justin and his strength. You’ve said it before in one of your answers and I agree. He’s a saint! J I don’t know if I could handle such a situation. And when Justin says “I hope you will find what you are looking for…” – It shows his deep true love for Brian and it’s somehow so altruistic. Warmest regards, a.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2016 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 26 - This is just goodbye

“Do nothing? Oh, believe me, I will do plenty tonight..."

I'm always astonished how cruel words can be and how much one can feel the hurt while reading. But I think that's the proof of the author's great talent. You are amazing! Also the fact that one can totally understand how they behave and react... Justin, Jesse as well as Brian even if one wishes for a different way to act. Don't stop! It's awesome! Warmest regards, a.



Author's Response:

Hi my friend!

 

Thank you so much for all the reviews! Made my day again :)

Words are a weapon for Brian. I agree with you one hundred percent about how cruel words can be. But *happy danse* I'm so glad you're enjoying it so much! I don't judge my characters, they all have their reasons to act the way they do, and I'm so, SO, happy you feel it in my writing. Thank you so much for your feedback, it means a lot to me :)

* Hugs *

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2016 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 26 - This is just goodbye

Oh god this is so painful!!!  I can't even decide who I feel worse for between Jesse and Justin.  (Definitely NOT Brian though, since he's the one causing all the problems here!)  It's just...Justin is trying SO HARD!  It's painful to see him want so badly for things to be the way they were before.  And it's not like it's even wistful longing - he's doing everything he can to be supportive and make things right, but all of his efforsts are just rebuffed. 

And Jesse!  Poor Jesse.  At least he has Aaron but jeez...it must be so hard for him for his life to change so drastically.  You know, I take back what I said about his refusing to forgive Brian being so strange.  I guess it didn't really hit me how badly he was injured and just how much his life had changed because of what Brian did.  He has every right to hold a grudge.

God why does Brian have to be so dumb?!  Why does it have to take him so long to realize what he's doing? 

Thank you so much!  This story is so beautiful and emotionally charged.  I love every second of it.



Author's Response:

Hi Kristine!

I think this is the most emotional chapter so far, or at least, I felt that way while I wrote it. It's interesting to see that you're on Jesse's side; I think you're the only one who has told me so until now. I know some readers hate him right now, or don't understand his reaction. I love to read the reactions of every readers, so thank you so much!

And thank you so much for the praise! Coming from you, it's a great compliment :)

Reviewer: magita1234 (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2016 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 26 - This is just goodbye

Last time i wrote to you i told you you dint need a pat in the back from me well after this chapter i tink i need to give you one ,thank you for cont to write QAF and this story i really love to read what you have writen ...



Author's Response:

Hi Magita,

I love you for patting me in the back ;D

Thank you very much for your feedback, it means a lot to me. More to come as soon as I can :)

* hugs from France *

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2016 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 26 - This is just goodbye

Wow! So much going on in this chapter! I can feel the "moment" approaching... the moment when Brian & Justin reach their breaking point.

Happy to see Jesse has the support of Aaron... 



Author's Response:

Hi my friend! You're absolutely right about the 'moment' approching fast. We're not there yet, but unfortunately, not far from it either. The good news is, once we will have reached this point, the major angst will be over.

Aaron is being a great partner to Jesse, who is a lucky man to have him in his life; Who would have thought...

Thank you as always for your support and comments :) More to come soon! * hugs from France *

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2016 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 26 - This is just goodbye

Great job Alois.  I'm so glad you wree able to get past your block and write this excellent chapter.  It is poignant and really explains why Justin left.  You successfully have tied the present to the past.  WEll done.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Sandy! I'm so grateful for your support and so happy you liked this chapter, even if it's really angsty. I had some help for this one, and i'm quite proud of it ;P and being inspired again is a great feeling.

Thank you again. I'm eager to work on the next one now, which should be lighter and *ahem* more sexy LOL

* hugs from France *

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2016 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 26 - This is just goodbye

This is sooooo sad.



Author's Response:

It is :( But it will get better, I promise!

Happy birthday my friend! I hope you're having a wondeful day :)

Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2016 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 26 - This is just goodbye

This chapter is so intense and moving. The angst is palpable. My heart breaks for Brian 😶. As always, I'm anxiously awaiting your next installment.



Author's Response:

Hi Laura!

I'm so glad you 'enjoyed' the emotions of this chapter, even with all the angst unfolding right now. Brian is completely fucked up and it's painful to witness how far he closes himself off to everybody around him, even Justin. I promise they will eventually come out of this stronger, even if it takes them years to learn from their mistakes.

Thank you so much again for your feedback and support, it means more than I can say :)

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2016 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 26 - This is just goodbye

Brians abject misery is palpable and I'm really not sure what's worse .. experiencing it or having to stand by helplessly and witness it. This is primo angst .. brilliantly done. 



Author's Response:

Hi Carol,

There is definitely a lot of angst in their past, and I'm not done yet. Good thing you can bear the angst! Hopefully, the present will make up for it and they will eventually come out of it stronger than ever.

I hope you're okay. Thank you so much for your never ending support :)

Reviewer: Gloria (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2016 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 26 - This is just goodbye

Heartbreaking....at least Jesse is realizing he shouldn't have blamed Brian. I just hope they get together before he & Aaron actually leave for Baltimore.

Your storytelling is intense & gripping, looking forward to the last chapter(s).



Author's Response:

I know... It was heartbreaking to write :( But if I promise you it will get better (eventually LOL), am I forgiven? :P

Thank you so much for the compliment and for all your support, it means a lot to me. I hope you're okay my friend :) * hugs *

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