Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2019 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 23 - That night

What a way to make me cry again, Jack is really touching my heart the way he was talking to Brian, asking that he find a new name for him like dad, oh man that really got to me big time. There is so many more emotions to come I think with those two and it’s painful for them I’m sure. I hope their relationship will get stronger. 

 

Brian needs Justin by his side and I think Justin is the same it’s thoe baby steps they are taking I think is good because jumping in to fast could crush even a friendship between them. 

 

Man oh oh man I’m loving this story x

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 23 - That night

  The pain that Brian has to live with is horrific.The burden of his guilt (in his mind) he just can't get past it.It makes you wonder how people manage to pick up their lives and continue on.



Author's Response:

I agree. The pain Brian experienced helps to understand why he is so fucked up in this story. And no, for now, he hadn't dealt with it at all. I agree with you that dealing with that kind of drama seems nearly impossible. It takes a lot of courage.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2016 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 23 - That night

Hi again! I like how you combine the present with the past. “You’ve always used my body to make me talk about my feelings” - one chapter before Brian had just done that. It’s a very interesting chapter mainly because there are lots of detailed information’s about Brian’s past. It’s good to see that Brian and his father are approaching slowly more and more. It will allow Brian to heal better. Then, there is also this positive approach between Brian and Justin until this moment when the phone starts ringing. You are so mean. :-) No no, it’s very exciting and I must admit that I’ve also forgotten about that. So now, I’m curious…. Warmest regards and a big hug! a.



Author's Response:

Hey! This chapter is very reveling about Brian's past and also the point where Brian let go. Eother with Jack or Justin, Brian is ready now to move one with his life :) Of course, I coulcn't let them just be happy LOL.

Thank you as always for your wonderfuls comments !!! * Hugs *

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2016 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 23 - That night

Oh wow, the emotions are so intense.  Given their past I can understand, but holy shit!  Just when they were starting to find a groove again you had to go throw a wrench in the works.  :)

I'm with Brian here and hope that this little bump in the road doesn't ruin the relationship they're just barely starting to rebuild...

As always, I am thoroughly addicted to this story.

Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2016 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 23 - That night

Love this chapter, Alois! I especially loved the scene with Jack. God, that really got to me. He is a man who can't connect with who he used to be, a child almost, and he feels such guilt and so much love when it comes to Brian. I am glad to see Brian meet him part way a little here. Even though it is far from ideal, it is a beautiful relationship. 

And Brian's coping mechanisms at 18...fuck. That was a blow as well. To read of Brian that broken is hard but it is so believable, especially in these circumstances. 

Great chapter, as always! I am really glad that you are continuing to post this and are starting to find some inspiration again! Later!



Author's Response:

Hey Anne!

I'm so glad you love this scene between father and son, because as you know, it is one of my favorite storyline to write about :) Jack is not as simple as it seems and writing about him is actually inspiring.

Brian was completely fucked up at 18. If not for his friends and Debbie, he probably would have turned quite bad, or worse. 

Yeah!! Inspiration has come back, I'm so happy! Thank you as always for your never-ending support and most of all, for the friendship, it means a lot to me!

Reviewer: Fran (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2016 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 23 - That night

You definitely got me hooked up!

Alois, comment vas-tu, bien j'espère. j'ai juste lu ce chapitre, pas encore toute l'histoire depuis le début mais tu me vois déjà accrochée sérieusement là! Bravo et bonne continuation.

Veloma:)



Author's Response:

Trop contente de voir ton message Francine! Je vais bien merci, j'espère que toi aussi? Tu vas être spoilée si tu commences maintenant ;)

Merci beaucoup pour ton commentaire et à très vite!

Kenavo (Veloma dans ma langue régionale) :)

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2016 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 23 - That night

Intense chapter! So much going on - with Jack's memories, the revelation about what happened to Brian at the time of the accident, to the renewed spark between Brian & Justin... and then Jesse!

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Hi my friend! I feel like this is so slow lol. But the next chapter should be long and full of revelations ;) Things are going to spice up real soon!

Thank you so much for your support again :) I hope all is well for you!

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2016 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 23 - That night

Do we know what the problem between Brian and Jesse is?  Was it because he left for that job?  I forget what the problem is between them, or will we be finding out?



Author's Response:

We don't know for now. All we know is they had a falling out of some sort, but it hadn't happened yet in the past. Jesse traveling for his job has nothing to do with their estrangement :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2016 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 23 - That night

Glad to see this again.  Hope that Jesse, Justin and Brian can work things out and that Brian's memories can be delt with and hopefully be changed.



Author's Response:

Thank you! it will be a long way for all of them till the end, but it will be worth it :)

 

Reviewer: britinmanor (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2016 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 23 - That night

yay for the update.  still reading and enjoying it.  thank-you.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you my friend! I'm so glad to know you're still enjoying this :)

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2016 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 23 - That night

I cannot complain about slow posting, but really enjoying the story.  I was afraid Brian would throw Justin out when he saw Jesse's name on the phone-  so glad he at least is still there to listen to an explaination.  The story is so intricate and layered - really enjoying all the unfolding story-  even if it is taking a long time



Author's Response:

Hi Sandy! Thank you so much for bearing with me between updates * happy smile *

Brian was about to throw Justin out -, but fortunately, he refrained, even if considering the day he has just lived, he could have snapped.

And thank you dearly for your kind words :) I will try to write the next one faster, I promise

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