Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2019 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Seeds of Doubt

Oh Brian, Brian, Brian why do you do this to yourself. If you could only just talk out loud about your feelings all this wouldn’t happen to you. You are lucky to have Michael to pick you up and to tell you pull yourself together. Justin loves you and you love him. I fear you might lose him if you don’t talk. 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Seeds of Doubt

Well, Spencer showed his true colors! what an asshole, Brian finally said he was sorry but was it to little to late?



Author's Response:

Maybe not too late... this time. But Spencer isn't done, unfortunately.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2016 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Seeds of Doubt

Hi my friend! This is such a painful but also beautiful chapter at the end, but first, I would like to answer your answer to my review on chapter 20. I think you’ve misunderstood. „Brian is hurting Justin over and over again“ This only referred to “your” Brian and I understand that he’s only hurting Justin mostly because of his own past and insecurity and because of believing that he isn’t worth being loved. And “your” Justin isn’t hurting Brian. I think he just tries again and again to deal with the shit Brian’s sometimes throwing at him but I think it’s so hard to endure it all. With their relationship in the show it’s different. I agree, they are hurting each other. In my opinion, Justin is too young, too unexperienced and therefore not able to deal with the kind of relationship Brian is offering. And Brian, yeah, it’s difficult, because on one hand his very mature, he knows what he wants, giving Justin so much, trying not to expect something, being honest, but on the other hand, there are moments when he is hurting Justin so much (I remember this picnic-scene where Brian refused and nearly laughed about him). There would be so much more to say about it… It would have been good if they would have talked more to each other, but okay, it was the show and it was sadly meant to be this way.

So, again, you have done a real good job in showing Brian’s inner conflict. Not able to deal with this situation in another way, but also never forgetting about Justin no matter how drunken or in what a state of mind he is. Would have been cute if it isn’t so sad. And the last sentence nearly broke my heart “maybe he was enough” – if he just could have a little more trust in Justin and more important self-confidence! As always, brilliant! Thanks and a big hug!!!!!! a.

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I undersatnd what you're saying. Brian in that story is so fucked up, even more than in the show (haha). He also is 'only' four years older than Justin here, which change their dynamic of course. But you got it. Brian's inner conflict is dictating his life, and preventing him from being the man he could be. He will change eventually, but the journey will be a long one, full of heartache and uncertainties. But in the end, it will be worth it, I promise :)

Thank you as always for your detailed reviews. Always a delight to read your thoughts! A big hug my friend :):):)

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2016 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Seeds of Doubt

So much pain there!  No wonder they end up imploding...;Seeds of Doubt' is the perfect title for this chapter because we can now see the cracks begin to form.  I just want to shake them and point them at their future selves to show them how they're supposed to behave!!  But I guess the both have some growing up to do...I just hope it isn't too painful while they do it.

As always, I am loving this!  Every chapter reveals a little bit more and more of not only what happened, but also why they are who they are.  It's so beautifully written!  



Author's Response:

Kristine! I'm so glad you're back :) I saw you posted your next chapter of Rear Window, yeah!!

Brian and Justin have so much to learn still. This is actually going to help them, but will it be enough in the end? Well, unfortunately, it seems unnlikely. 

* I just want to shake them and point them at their future selves * LOL! exactly!!

Anyway, it's always a great pleasure to read your thoughts on this :)

PS: I got your email, I will respond to you very soon!



Author's Response:

Kristine! I'm so glad you're back :) I saw you posted your next chapter of Rear Window, yeah!!

Brian and Justin have so much to learn still. This is actually going to help them, but will it be enough in the end? Well, unfortunately, it seems unnlikely. 

* I just want to shake them and point them at their future selves * LOL! exactly!!

Anyway, it's always a great pleasure to read your thoughts on this :)

PS: I got your email, I will respond to you very soon!

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