Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

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Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2019 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Moving On

Hate that fucking Lindsey

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2019 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Moving On

That was brilliant and beautiful. Loved their conversation in the diner you could feel the nerves and the flirty banter between them. Their love is slowly creeping back into their lives I think they just need to open up a tad more.

I love they went to see Gus and Lindsey but mainly Gus of course the moments between His dad was so sweet I so want to see more and more of this. I laughed when they were teasing Justin while playing football that was the best. Omg Jack is missing I hope they find him safe and sound.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Moving On

Brian and Gus love their soccer and Gus was delighted when scored a goal against Justin, wonder what happen to Jack? Brian will make heards roll is an understatement.

Author's Response:
Brian and Gus have a very special relationship :) Having a child has changed Brian for the better

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2016 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Moving On

Hi again! Yeah, I think you’re right with what you wrote about Brian’s friends. Furthermore, in the show they are mainly Brian’s friends against what in your story Justin first gets to know Emmett and started a friendship with him before he gets to know Brian. Michael – yeah, this is a different story. There are moments where I get so angry about his behavior as when he told Brian that they know about the cancer, but on the other hand he tried to repair his mistakes when he spoke with Justin about Brian’s behavior. But I think also this is life – we all make mistakes.

So, this chapter. I really like how you describe Brian’s thoughts while waiting for Justin at the diner (that he was always on his mind – ridiculously romantic :-) ) and their conversation, teasing one another. It’s great to see that “it was only time” and that it seems as if their separation hasn’t destroyed too much but was necessary in some way.

Justin is very mature – how he handles the one-night-stand between Brian and Lindsay. And I’m glad that he has forgiven Brian and tries also to forgive Lindsay, ‘cause in the end there is Gus – best what could have happened to Brian – besides Justin of course!

I know I’ve written this before – I really love your writing-style! Big hug!!! a.

Author's Response:
Hi my friend! Sorry about the delay in my response, I'm on a trip and typing on my phone (thank you wifi!!) so this won't be too long but I promise to respond to you properly as soon as I get back!

I just love your revieww :) Thank you so much for that and for the compliment on my writing :) it makes me soooooo happy!!!

a big hug me dear friend!!! And I promise to respond with more details as soon as I will be back to France next week! * hugs *

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