Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2019 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 17 - New promises
You had me crying here, the scene with Jack talking with the doctor and Brian was so emotional and heart wrenching. His innocence and his memories that are haunting him are just so sad. If I could hug all of them I would.
I love Brians relationship with Debbie she is a good mother to him and their talk I hoped helped him lots.
I lorcthat Micheal wants to work with Justin on his comic I really hope that Justin takes him up on the offer.
oooooh Brian asked Justin to go see Gus this has me exited I can’t wait to see how it goes.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 17 - New promises
I like this story and appreciate that even if Jack is brain damaged he and Brian can have some type of relationship and with Gus.Brian still seems frighten of Justin, that Brian can just maybe hook-up again and he needs someone special like Justin who can love him
Author's Response: Brian has come a long way since the time when he refused to even speak to Jack. You will understand why as you read, and more precisally, who has given him the strength to do so. And yes, Brian is still scared, but he has grown up a lot since his teens, so he will face his fears. Lucky us ;)
Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2016 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 17 - New promises
Hi again! It’s funny. Every time I ended reading a chapter I want to stay in that time, want to know what happens next. Then I start the next chapter and after reading a few sentences I’m again so fascinated by it that I forget that I actual wanted to stay in the other time. You always create such an intensive atmosphere. Awesome. I really like the conversations between Brian, his father and Dr. Collier and also between Brian and Debbie. Fortunately Brian has someone he can open up a little and ask for advice. And then this phone-call. It’s so beautiful to read how carefully they behave to each other. Warmest regards and a big hug! a.
Author's Response: That's actually the best compliment you can give me, so THANK YOU SO MUCH!
And yeah!!! So glad you like the scene with Brian's father, and Debbie. I really enjoy writing about them in this story :)
Thank you again :) You're awesome!!
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