Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2019 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Alive

I seriously loved the private moment with Brian and Justin on the roof. That was so powerful and moving. The quite moment without words gave me shivers then when they talked sharing past history that blew me away giving me goosebumps. Then you go and hit me with that kiss wow wee. That was someway to start my day. 



Author's Response:

I loved writing that scene :D

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Alive

 Hot chapter,Finally some of their secrets are being talked about , Justin is strong but the bashing made feel he was weak and Brian realizes that he was a victim of a hate crime he was to be blamed for some homophob's gutless attack



Author's Response:

They're making progress! Justin is a strong young man, but Brian is bringing back his will to live his life to the fullest. And Brian is falling for Justin :D

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2016 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Alive

Hi! Sometimes it’s good to re-read something. I already knew that the scene on the roof was great, but wow… It’s so cute, beautiful, awesome, hot… You really did an amazing job in showing how the come slowly closer and closer… step by step, but also it seems to be inevitably as if they belong together. And we know they belong together J And I really like how they open up to one another, also Brian to Justin. Great! THANKS again! Warmest regards; a.



Author's Response:

I loved that scene on the roof. One pivotal moment in the story and yes, they do belong together either in the past or in the present. THANK YOU for being so supportive, you're amazing!!!

Reviewer: Gloria (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2016 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Alive

So hot! You have a gift my friend, well done.

When a woman, a gay woman no less can get hot & bothered just reading

well written gay erotica, well that's saying something...and this was just the 

appetizer. lol



Author's Response:

Hi Gloria! I think you're the first one to tell me I have a gift regarding gay erotica lol That's funny because I'm not always comfortable writing sex haha. But I AM glad I had you all hot and bothered * innocent smile * 

I hope you're still enjoying this! Thank you for your feedback, I love reviews :)

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