Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Entwined
Reviewer: Estrelinha97 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2021 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

Loving it ghhjjghghgggg

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2019 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

Seeing this through all there eyes was unreal. The nervous and awkward Justin seeing Brian when opened that door stopped my heart waiting to see what was next. Then Brian reacting in the same way , it was like the cosmos was pulling them together through Emmet who was looking out for both of them. 

 

Justin knows his heart belongs with Brian’s but with Tyler in the mix and I know there will be angst this is gonna he a heck of a ride to read. 

 

Im always excited to read your work. Hugs from Ireland 🇮🇪 



Author's Response:

I love rereading the story thriough your eyes :D

Hugs from France <3

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

Nice chapter, Brian always had so many demons and shortcomings in his own mind, In some ways Brian is more damaged that Justin. It's no secret they still love each other but have a hard time communicating



Author's Response:

I must warn you Brian is very fucked up in this story, especially in the past. in the present, he needs to process that Justin has come back. And communicating? What's that? LOL 

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2016 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

Wow! Even after reading this the second time it affects me so much. It's amazing how you are able to let the reader feel this deep feelings between them. Their disruption, their longing, their insecurity, their love. I love this chapter, i love your writing style and I love these two cute, beautiful but also damaged guys. Thanks for sharing this wonderful work! Warmest regards, a.



Author's Response:

I remember not feeling very satisfied when I wrote this chapter, so I'm glad you like it. This story was a challenge, and still is, even if it's easier now; Thank you for all your comments!!

* Hugs *

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2015 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

I have finally been able to catch up on all the stories I missed while I was fulfilling my military obligations, and this was so beautiful. I think Brian and Justin have so much to work out between them and I want a front seat to the show lol.

Now my french is a little rusty so I would love the translation of your ending quote ;)

Author's Response:

Hi Tamara! I'm always very impressed knowing you work as a military. Anyway, your seat is reserved in the front row ;) Thank you for your kind words my friend.

"Never hesitate to get out a word from the silence so as to bring it to life" 😊

Reviewer: nolane (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2015 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

hi

i really like your story! i began "entwined" 1 hour ago and i'm here waiting for more ...

thank you 



Author's Response:

Bonjour Céline :) Et merci mille fois pour ton retour! Je suis très heureuse que tu apprécies cette histoire et j'espère que tu aimeras la suite. Les choses vont commencer à devenir intéressantes entre Brian et Justin très bientôt, bien que j'ai du mal à avancer très vite... Je m'en excuse! En tout cas, merci encore d'avoir pris sur ton temps pour m'écrire ces quelques mots, je vais m'endormir avec le sourire ;) A très bientôt j'espère :)

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2015 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

as always I am happy to see your update. Sparks are flying (again) let's see where you take us. My highlight this week? I met "Mother Taylor" ;)

Author's Response:

Elke, so glad you still enjoy this! There is a lot of revelations to come :) But that's not important... You WHAT?? LOL Let me guess...Rise 'n Shine? :D

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2015 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

Finally a quiet moment in RL to catch up on some stories. I've spent an enjoyable Sunday morning reading this story from the beginning. You've got me intrigued - lots of unanswered 'stories bits' to have me waiting eagerly for the next chapter to find out what happen in the past and to find out what's going to happen in the future.

Author's Response:

Monica, thank you so much to let me know you like this story. I can't emphasize enough how good it is for an author to see new readers joining the ride! As for the 'unanswered stories bits', I seem to have a problem with revealing things very slowly LOL. It's a clear road in my head, and I sometimes wonder if readers will not be too lost with my tendency to give answers very slowly. But I'm so glad you're intrigued! Thank you so much again :)

Reviewer: winetou58 (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2015 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

Wonerfull story

 



Author's Response:

Hi Winetou! Thank you so much for letting me know you enjoy it! **smiling widely** More to come soon :)

Reviewer: Vicky (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2015 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

That's one of the things I like most about you as a writer, your ability to portray these characters we know so well in a realistic way and feeling emotions and being placed in situations we can relate to and find plausible.Their motives are not hard to understand bearing in mind their personalities and true identitties, it's not that they do something just because or to serve purposes that have to do with the plot.

Finally, I wanted to point out something related to Justin's seemingly perfect partner:Imho, we tend to get bored with 'perfect' and feel natually drawn to messy and risky bacause that keeps things interesting ( I think we've talked about this my friend). Having said that, can't wait for Justin to finally get bored and curiuos enough to contact Brian ;). Looking forward a new update as always! HUgs :)



Author's Response:

You're way too kind with me. I do like to portray 'realistic' situations and I try to be as accurate as possible in my own head lol But I'm not always sure people will like it, because for instance, I don't write a 'love at first sight' story about B/J. So, I'm reassured some readers are not bored already lol

And I agree, love is definitely not about perfect. If Justin had to choose the perfect and most simple partner, he would chose Tyler without an ounce of hesitation. But Love is not that simple. The connection B/J share here will be more intense, more magical even if they're not perfect. It's what will make them feel alive. I don't like to write about imperfect love at all, you know me :D

Thank you so much for your amazing support my friend ***smiling stupidly***

Reviewer: Vicky (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2015 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

Hello my dear friend!

Here I am, as promised, trying to post my review...

What a big surprise in this chapter!This chance encounter neither of them had imagined.I was so excited when I read Brian was at Emmett's place :). I think the best thinks happen when  least expected and I'm sure their visiting him at the same time wasn't a coincidence bu the fact that they're meant to be together, destined to have one more chance.

I must admit I feel more tempted to find out what happens in the present even I can see their past is fundamental to understanding why they behave how they do now.

Hats off to you and your characterization once more! I SO love your characters! They are so SOPT-ON!

Justin is a smart man and a sensitive soul, thats why it's easy to imagine him being so curious about this more madure Brian and very attracted to him in every possible way (not only physically)



Author's Response:

Hello Vicky! I'm so delighted you've finally succeeded in posting a review :P

So, a chance encounter. Yes, definitely! They have shared so much in the past, and it's going to get interesting real soon between them. The past is fondamental to understand how they can be at this point of their lives now, and the fact that this time around will be different somehow. Also, I'm very happy you like their characterization here!

"Justin is a smart man and a sensitive soul" I couldn't agree more. Thank you my dear friend for this review, it means so much to me :D

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2015 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

RL is keeping me very busy these days, but I just wanted to stop by and put in my "2-cent" review... Great Update!



Author's Response:

This is gold for me. Thank you so much to take the time to leave me a review and I'm delighted that you like it :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2015 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

I liked this chapter a lot.  It is interesting the way you are revealing their past little by little.



Author's Response:

I'm very happy you like it! I might have a tendancy to reveal things very slowly lol. I'm afraid sometimes that it's not clear for the readers, so I'm relieved that you enjoy it. Thank you dearly for the feedback :)

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2015 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

There really aren't any versions of Brian that I don't like .. but it has to be said the 'Brian' you portray, who is not fundamentally changed (thank you) but who has learned from his mistakes and continues to grow and mature into the man we all know he is capable of being .. well who could resist him? Or compare .. Poor Tyler.



Author's Response:

This story portrays a Brian who have changed a lot in twelve years. I will hopefully make him grow because of the events he will face, the relationships he will share. Also, this story will focus a lot on his relationship with his father, which is completely AU. I'm delighted you like him there, even if he is different! As for Justin, he is happy in the present with Tyler but he is going to be troubled by Brian. Eight years is a long time. People change. Especially because in the story they were both really young when they met each other the first time. Past Brian will be...more like Brian season one, at least at first. We all know he will change a lot with Justin. Becoming a father will be a turning point, too. But I'm saying too much lol Sorry... Thank you so much for being right here with me Carol, it means more than I can say :)

 

Reviewer: Miki (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2015 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

so glad you are continuing - I love your stories they are very moving and even with other characters involved I feel you u defying connection between b /j that if course w

e all live for



Author's Response:

Oh Thank you Miki. Your comment makes me so happy, you have no idea :) I'm glad you can feel their connection, even in my last fic, especially in my last fic!lol Again, all my gratitude for you support my friend and hopefully, their connection is going to grow now, either in the past or in the present...

Reviewer: toniu (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2015 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

I was surprised and saddened when I started reading your story. I have been away from the fan fictions life for a time. Your story being one of the last I read. Business and life got in my way.

But I'm back and so happy to see you wrote another story. It is so good. Again I'm sitting at the edge of my seat.

Then I read that you were harassed and bullied for your story. It was such a sweet endearing story. I hope they learn that the QAF community will not support this type of behavior. All of the authors are people that give us many hours of enjoyment. Hang in there. I love your stories.

Your fan!



Author's Response:

Oh Toni, it's so good to hear from you my friend! I'm so happy *smiling*. I hope you're doing great and that life threats you well :) And yes, new story. So happy to know you enjoy this one. Thank you so much my friend. Unfortunately, trolls are there. This story will be undoubfully easier for me because it's a B/J story, but I know a couple of writers who are or have been harassed too. It's so sad to see such violence over fanfiction. But we will not let them win! Thank you so much for your invaluable support again

Reviewer: DANBRITIN (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2015 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

Merci de votre retour, je adore Votre histoire.Elle m'intrigue also with the flash back Mais Toujours with the same incertitude sur Ce Qui Se est passé réellement.Je suis impatiente de Connaître la suite, preuve de Votre talent.Ayez Toujours confiance en vous.



Author's Response:

Merci mille fois pour votre retour, cela me touche plus que je ne pourrais vous le dire. Je suis ravie que cela vous plaise et j'espère que vous aimerez la suite! Le prochain chapitre va être un tournant dans leur relation passée, les choses vont commencer à avancer pour eux. Encore merci, je suis si heureuse de vous compter parmi les lecteurs :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2015 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

Wow we are moving on from here both Brian and Justin feeling unsettled but are they brave enough to make changes towards each other. Although it looks Justin is even if he is doing it sort of unconsciously lol

Author's Response:

Justin making changes inconsciously? You think? 😉 You might be just right. Next chapters will have them getting closer again, even if the road will not be a quiet walk, so to speak. Thank you so much for your support, Chris :)

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2015 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

please, go on with this story. I want to know how Brian and Justin fell in love in the past and how they're going to deal with what is still going on between the two in the present. Also I can't wait for Brian's reaction to that Tayler 



Author's Response:

You will know more about that, and it's not going to be a long and easy ride for the boys, either in the past, or in the present. Also, Brian's reaction when he will learn about Tyler will be...well, I think you can guess ;) not sure he will be very open lol Thank you again for your amazing support on this, it made me so happy that you enjoy this story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2015 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

So we knew that Justin wasn't around for Gus' birth.  But we learned that Emmett, Brian and Justin were roommates?  That Justin left but not why.  I get the feeling that Justin wants to know the Brian that he is now.  And he wants the answer to something else as well.  But what?



Author's Response:

No, he wasn't around. And yes, Brian, Emmett and Justin were roommates, we will know more about that in the next chapter. Of course, a lot of questions will be answered...later ;) Thank you as always my friend for your support. * hugs! *

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2015 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Hesitation

I don't know what he must do. Okay leave Tyler, but is it so simple!? BUT you do know ... thus write ASAP so we will know too.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

I think he will figure it out. And yes, there is Tyler. It could be a problem ;) Chapter six is written, so it shouldn't be too long before you know more about their past. Things are going to get interesting... Thank you Marian, again. *hugs back!*

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