Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2019 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 2 - A New beginning

My nerves were shaking for Justin here I could feel everything he was feeling. I’m sure he will have an amazing friend in Emmet and boy oh boy what an introduction to Brian huh. 



Author's Response:

What I love about new readers with this story, is that I can read the story again through their eyes.  It's been a long time since I finished that one, so it will be a pleasure to read it through you :)

Explosive meeting, right? Justin has a long road to recovery in this one, but he will get there :) And Emmett is a hoot! :D

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 2 - A New beginning

I never would have thought of Brian and Em being roomates, I would have thought more than five hours together Brian would have hung Em in the closet-- you know Bri's personality and living with someone so totally opposite in most ways usually spells danger watch for the studs moods! 



Author's Response:

The beginning of the story is inspired from a book and Emmett and Brian were the closest to the roommates in that book. Fortunately, the place is huge and Brian is barely there LOL.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2016 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 2 - A New beginning

Second day, second chapter. Interesting chapter because of the background infos about Justin's situation. I like "your Emmett" very much. He is very sensitive. And this first encounter between Justin and Brian is good written (it's somehow funny but also a little sad). Warmest regards! a.



Author's Response:

Yes, this chapter helped to understand Justin's story. Emmett is a sweetheart, isn't he? As for Justin and Brian's first encounter, well, as a reader said, Justin had met the big bad wolf. And this is just the beginning :)

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2016 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 2 - A New beginning

Poor Justin (Little Red Riding-hood), he needed a friend and ended up with (the wolf) Big Bad Kinney...

Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

LOL. You should do my summary for each chapter ;)

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2016 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 2 - A New beginning

I am so intrigued by your storyline. It is going to be so interesting to switch back and forth from the present time to figure out what happened between Justin and Brian in the past. What a difference between Emmett and Brian. As roommates I see them as The Odd Couple😊



Author's Response:

Hi Kim!

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Brian and Emmett as roommates was an intriguing concept to me, but I loved writing about it! Thank you so much for giving this story a try. I hope you will like it :)

Looking forward to your future stories :)

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