Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2015 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 7
Ted, then Emmett, now Melanie. I like how you make Em a good fighter, he almost won.
Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2015 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 7
Omg! You're really my new favourite author lol ^_^ I don't mind a short chapter as long as you post everyday 2 or 3 times hehe. I'm greedy, right? ;D
Anyway, I love this action chapter. High five for the action and more action lol. I don't mind minor characters death or even Chris and Justin make out :p. I love to see some actions instead of sitting down and talking. It's boring for me lol. But you just write what you feel like, dear ^_^. I'll defenitly comment for your story muahh. :)
Ps. Add you and your story in my favorite list ^_^
Author's Response: Awe thanks :) I'm glad you liked this chapter and i'm glad they you don't mind some character death
P.S. thanks for adding my story
P.P.S I love your story Snow Flower read it in one night :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2015 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 7
Hmmmm....I don't quite know how to feel about this chapter. I mean Chris getting away with killing so many of the family...Hopefully Mel will be able to tell the police what they need to know.
Author's Response: Yea sorry...this might be that last of the deaths but plenty more violance to come >;)
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2015 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 7
" Don't worry Teddy, Em, Mel, I'm COMING!"
* you hear the sounds of rustling in the back round*
" Just let me get my Find my knife (box cutter) and I'll be right there! Hold on !!!!"
Lol, you see what you done did? You got me all upset and ready to write myself into the story and help the 'Family' out!! " Now I gotsto cut sumbody!!"
Author's Response: Sorry I got you so upset but don't worry everything will balance out ;)
Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2015 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 7
That MUTHA PUS BUCKET!!!!!! AAAAGGGGRRRHHHHH!!! He needs his ass WHIPPED!!!! Please let Brian whip him!!!! and then let the cops have him AND his wife! Loving that this is bringing the bad words out of my mouth while reading...LOL I have quite a mouth when I'm not reading but WHOA! I'm invested completely in this one!
Happy Writing,
Nichelle
Author's Response: Sorry for making you curse and yes soon Chris will get ruffed up a little
Thanks for being invested in the story :)
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