Reviewer: Lois (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2016 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
When are you going to update this story?
Author's Response: Just did :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2015 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
I do love a mystery. But who is the victem? I thought it might be Brian, but you said you'd let us know the killer when Brian and justin find out. If it was Brian it couldn't be Mikey, cause even with a wig and contacts Brian would recognize him. So if the victem is not Brian it could be Mikey?
Reviewer: taurus (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2015 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
What a story! Cani't wait for the other chapters. What made you decide to write this story? Very different. But I so like it.
Author's Response: I don't know it kind of just popped into my head but I'm glad you like it :)
Reviewer: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2015 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
Intriguing, very intriguing. The moment I saw the banner and read the summary my mind screamed Hobbs. But would he really be capable to do all that?
So looking forward to the next chapters. I do hope they are as riveting as the first three were. You provided a good look into the mind of a obsessed and dangerous man.
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response: Thanks I wans't really sure how good I'd be at doing the bad guy's POV
I'm happy you like it :)
Reviewer: Terri (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2015 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is intriguing!! At first I thought it might be Mikey but now with the addition of the construction site I am thinking Hobbs but that seems too easy. I guess I will find out.
Author's Response: I won't wait too long to tell who it is ;)
Glad you like it!
Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2015 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ok you have me hooked. More Please?
Author's Response: You're wish is my command ;)
Reviewer: Tonya (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2015 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
I like this already. I saw your comment at the end. Is this story complete somewhere else? If so where and under what name (author, if different). I would love to read more of this.
Author's Response: It's not complete somewhere else it's just a little more far along on another site. But they'll all be on the same page by tomarrow or today actually :)
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