Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2022 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 27
Just found this story. Any chance you'll finish it? Please
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 27
I can understand Ben's pain - I hope that he will eventually realize that the fault lies with Hobbs and Hobbs only and not with the boys. We all make choices and that choice was definitely Hobbs'. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: xJustSayingx (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2016 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 26
I'm so glad to see this story updated! :)
I'm totally looking forward to the wedding- especially since there was never a real Brian/Justin wedding in the series. *sniff*
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2016 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 26
Great update. Everyone dealing with the reality of what has happened will take a while, especially with Michael's funeral coming up. That will bring out a lot of emotions.
I can imagine Justin going into a food coma with all that 'tasting'....LOL
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2016 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 25
great story sad can not wait to read the next chaper
Reviewer: Acadian Proud (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2016 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 24
Great chapter.
Small typo: "I get to register us for weeding gifts" he said making me laugh.
Should be
"I get to register us for wedding gifts" he said making me laugh
Author's Response: Thanks I didn't even notice that :)
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2016 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 24
There's a lot Justin has to deal with and talking is definitely better than keeping it all inside and pretending it didn't happen. Being open with each other is a good place to start their future. Looking forward to what's next.
Author's Response: Yea I knew that they had to talk it out even if they didn't really want too.
Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2016 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 24
Great update, so glad they talked things out.
Author's Response: Yea they didn't want to but it had to be done. Really happy you liked the chapter :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2016 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 24
At least they are together again. And planning a wedding no less, but I have a question. Who gives shoes as a gift? lol. I know that was Brian being Brian and wanting Prada. Great chapter.
Author's Response: So happy you liked the update, and it was about time I got them together again right.
And I'm pretty sure only Brian would give shoes as a gift :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2016 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 22
More please
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2016 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 22
Oh dear. What is it that Justin hasn't told Brian. I could guess and be totally wrong.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2016 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 21
I knew it!!!! I knew Hobbs was not dead when he blew the garage lol. I was on the edge of my seat with that one! Well played!!! I finally cheered when Brian took him out! Now that I didn't see coming that way. I really enjoyed this story :)
Please dnt forget about Forbidden Desire!!!!! I have been waiting ( and will wait forever if need be lol) as I love Vampire stories and I'm enjoying that one!!!
Author's Response: So happy you love this story :) Don't worry I haven't forgotten about Forbidden Desire, when I wrap this story up I'll focus back on it promise :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2016 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 21
It's nice to see another chapter so fast. Good that Brian's back with us. Now we have to wait to find out what the surprise is!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2016 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 21
I'm all caught up now and it was well worth the wait.
Author's Response: Awww thanks hun I thought I'd lost you :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2016 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 20
Was Brian trying to fool him into not believing Justin was real? I'm glad that Brian made it through surgery, but was he trying to say Justin was an angel or an angle as in corner? Good to see more on this story and I can't wait for another chapter.
Author's Response: No Brian was just loopy on pain meds. It was a typo. and I should have another chapter up tomarrow hopefully :)
Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2016 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 20
Good chapter BUT
Typo:
You typed "angle", I think you mean ANGEL
Angle: the space (usually measured in degrees) between two intersecting lines or surfaces at or close to the point where they meet.
ANGEL: a spiritual being believed to act as an attendant, agent, or messenger of God, conventionally represented in human form with wings and a long robe.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: NightRose (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2016 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 19
Brian can't die, he has to be ok
Author's Response: Don't worry it's not over yet
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 19
Well one thing for sure Brian can't die. Now let's hope that Hobbs is finally going to where he belongs.
Author's Response: Oh Hobbs is absolutely going where he belongs
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2016 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 18
I should've know that Hobbs wasn't dead. Smoking can kill you they tell me. Looks like it might be true.
Author's Response: I love this comment :) lol
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2016 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 17
Brian and Justin are together again. Now what happens?
Reviewer: Lois (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2016 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
When are you going to update this story?
Author's Response: Just did :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2015 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 16
Things are getting complicated. So where are they?
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see ;)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2015 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 18
Okay...not only has Hobbs gotten away with kidnapping Justin not once, but twice, kill someone, hurt Brian and Daphne, now he's somehow able to survive a bombing and show up at the hospital kill someone else and attempt to abscond with Brian all while the police are teeming around the place? Hmmm...to say that Hobbs has had too much of an upper hand here is an understatement.
Hopefully there is light at the end of the tunnel for our boys...heaven knows they deserve some peace.
Author's Response: Huh I have given Hobbs the upper hand haven't I. Well don't worry he won't be getting anymore freebies ;) And our boys will absolutely have some peace soon
Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2015 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 18
Waiting for Hobbs' return lol. Pls update soon :)
Author's Response: He will make a small return. Just updated :)
Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2015 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 17
Thanks for the update
Author's Response: You're welcome love :)
Reviewer: NightRose (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2015 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 18
I had a feeling Hobbs wasn't dead
Author's Response: Well you were right :)
Reviewer: NightRose (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2015 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 16
What has Chris got planned? because he hasn't done all this just to let Justin go now
Update soon
Author's Response: Chris does sort of have one more thing up his sleeve but what will it be?
Reviewer: NightRose (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2015 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 14
Oh no i was so hoping for a rescue but things went downhill quickly and now not only has Hobbs got Justin again but Brian and Daphne are at the least seriously hurt
Author's Response: Yea it wasn't time for Justin to get rescused just yet >:)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2015 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 16
Ummmm.....Nope didn't work, still don't have the proper words.
Please update soon
Author's Response: Just updated hope you can find some words soon :)
Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2015 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 16
Woa I think they're coming to the plot. Hehe. I'm waiting for the next chap and you promise some exciting scene. Can't wait :D
Author's Response: Yup it's all coming together and I hope I can deliver on the excitment I promised :)
Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2015 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 15
Thanks for the update :)
Yeah I still love this story. Once I start, I'll never going back ^_^
poor Brian
Author's Response: Thanks for the support it means alot :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2015 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 15
That's scary. Hobbs stalking Justin and having pictures of him sleeping.
Author's Response: Yea uping Hobbs creeper factor seemed like the right thing to do. For some reason.
Thanks for being the first to comment :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2015 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 14
Again...not exactly sure how to respond to this chapter....I will say that it has left me feeling a little pessimistic. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Well I hope to stop leaving you so speachless soon. Two new (but short) chapters up now :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2015 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 14
Did you have to give Hobbs the upperhand?
Author's Response: As much as it sucks...yea I kinda did :(
Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2015 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 14
Short short short! :( I want the next chapter now lol. Really can't wait for the new chapter. Pls write fast :D the story is just getting good here. Hobbs gets Justin and Brian was injured, I hope. Pls update quickly >"<
Author's Response: I'm writing as fast as I can, promise really happy you're liking the story still :)
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2015 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 14
I suppose if Justin got rescued that would be the end of the story - or there abouts and there are so many questions still to be answered. As Brian and Daphne's rescue plan didn't go well at all I'm hoping Carl isn't far away. Definitely need more.....
Author's Response: And more you shall have ;)
Reviewer: NightRose (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2015 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 13
Glad your back :) love the update and the ending point, It's left me wanting more.
Author's Response: Good to be back :) and I'm happy you loved the ending point
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2015 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 13
I'm not even really sure how to respond....nope, can't find proper words
Author's Response: Happy I kind of left you speechlees that means alot lol :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2015 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 13
As a cut off point it's not bad. Keeps the suspense up. Justin should never have put the knife down.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2015 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 12
You get us so close the blamey. Love the twists. But let them please find Justin in one piece and alive.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2015 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 11
Darn Justin got so close to escaping.
Author's Response: Yea a swing and a miss
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2015 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 10
As long as he gets away who cares.
Author's Response: Good point :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2015 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 9
I don't understand. Emmett identified the man who attacted him, wasn't that enough?
Author's Response: No because he didn't see his face, Hobbs had it covered
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2015 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 8
Hopefully Ted, Em and Mel survive and they catch Hobbs.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2015 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 7
Ted, then Emmett, now Melanie. I like how you make Em a good fighter, he almost won.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2015 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 6
Hobbs is smarter than I thought.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2015 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 5
I was right. Good reason's, but I hope you have a plan to stop him and arrest his wife too.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2015 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 4
He is at the hospital watching isn't he. He's pretty sure Brian's going to tell everyone. Now Brian knows who he is, is it enough to save Justin?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2015 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 3
So Mikey doesn't make it. How sad. Justin knows who the killer is, can he stop him?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2015 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 2
So it's not Mikey. Whoever has a wife and she knows about the bombing and approves? Not nice. Must be Hobbs. Ironic that he donates blood that saves Mikey. LOL.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2015 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
I do love a mystery. But who is the victem? I thought it might be Brian, but you said you'd let us know the killer when Brian and justin find out. If it was Brian it couldn't be Mikey, cause even with a wig and contacts Brian would recognize him. So if the victem is not Brian it could be Mikey?
Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2015 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 13
Hi dear, I'm happy to see an update from you so I show my love to be the first one who review :D
I know you are busy and stuff. It had been a long time. Oh, there are some mysterious characters here who work for Hobbs, obviously. Is Gary the bad Gary ex owner of Babylon? And who is Derek? *blink blink* I like guys who have that name ^_^ Ahh, Brian is for the rescue. So is Hobbs will be in jail soon? And the story is going to an end? Pls update soon but don't rush. Take your time and mood... :) Big love for you to motivate and update xoxoxo Meo
Author's Response: Okay in order:
No it's not the same Gary I just looked up bad guy name and picked that one
Derek is the guy Hobbs was talking to on the phone
As for the rest we'll have to wait and see ;)
Thanks for reading and commenting love ya :)
Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2015 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 12
Hi dear, oh I'm so glad to see a new chapter. I have waited for so long *crying*. Your story is cool and I love Brian's dream. So gothic lol. Max sounds like a cool girl, make me imagine the girl in the crime movie Kite (2014) or Yolandi from Die Antwoord if you listen to that shit. It's mad though lol. I like the dark atmosphere the story products. I'm so so waiting for the next chapter. I know you're busy and stuff but pls try to stick with us until the end. :) Congrats for your summer job and good luck with RL and MW life :D
Author's Response: Sorry for the long wait I'm so happy you like Brian's dream
I'll try to update at the very least every week
P.S. thanks for the congrats :)
Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2015 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 12
Just glad you are back!!! have loved this story and looking forward to more~~~ Thanks for not forgetting us!
Author's Response: Glad to be bcak :) thrilled that you love the story
P.S. I could never forget you guys :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2015 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 12
Wow...hopefully everything works out and they can get to Justin quickly.
Author's Response: Yea their will be...some sort of reunion with our boys very soon >;)
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2015 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 12
I'd forgotten about this story - RL can be a bitch and time can disappear before you know it - so I feel your pain over a busy summer. After a quick refresh to catch up I enjoyed the latest chapter. Brian does need to listen to Carl though - surely with this latest information they should be able to storm the cabin, hopefully discretely , and rescue Justin before Hobbs knows about it. And who was the guy that shot John Haze and how did he know that Brain and Daphne were there - lots of questions.......... Looking forward to more to get the answers. Off to refresh Forbidden Desire so I'm ready for it's update....
Author's Response: So happy you enjoyed this chapter :) and the answers to the who and why John was shot will be in the next chapter
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2015 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 11
Ths is enthralling, I can't wait for the next chapter. Funny I feel quite bloodthirsty - hoping that Hobbs gets his very painful comeuppance soon.
Author's Response: So happy that you find my story enthrailling :)
And Hobbs will be getting some comeuppance soon ;)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2015 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 11
I just read both chapters back to back and I swear I wanted to scream DON'T LET HOBBS COME BACK TOO SOON!!! And of course that's exactly what happened lol. I really do hope Sunshine gets out of Hobbs' hold very soon. Chris is getting very sloppy and deserves to be caught.
Update soon please
Author's Response: Well I can't let Justin get away too soon >;)
Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2015 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 11
Haha it's so quick that Hobbs found Justin so soon but I like this cat and mouse game ^_^ . It's cool to read and imagine Hobbs took care of our blond beauty :p. I want to read more more. Pls don't make me wait for so long. Pls pls :D
Author's Response: Happy that you're loving my cat and mouse game >;)
I'm working on the next chapters now so hopefully you won't have to wait too long ;)
Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2015 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 10
I wait and wait and here is the new chapter :). It's short :( but I love to see Justin back ^_^. I know our sexy blond is not crazy. Even if he is, he's still so beautiful and kind :). Again, I love to see action in this chapter, the way you described the bush and Justin's escape. I like it! :D
Author's Response: Sorry for the wait but at least you got two chapters back to back :)
So happy you liked the action in this chapter and my descriptions
I really appreciate all the support hon :)
Reviewer: NightRose (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2015 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 9
Hobbs made a mistake talking to Brian, He got to cocky in thinking he isn't going to get caught.
Brian stabbed him him in the hand OMG! I just hope that Hobbs isn't now going to take his anger out on Justin.
Author's Response: I guess we'll just have to see how Hobbs feels about his new wound and what Justin does next ;)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2015 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 9
I think he made a big mistake in what he revealed to Brian...but I also think their alert should be higher than ever.
Author's Response: Yea it seemes our villan is slipping a little and Brian and the gang will be on red alert from here on out
Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2015 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 9
No no no, we don't need no "Unnecessary Abuse" lol.
Author's Response: Well I'll try not to have any unnecessary abuse but with a crazy person that might be hard >;)
Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2015 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 9
Thanks for a longer chapter ^_^ I'm glad I can read the chapters continuously :) Ahh Hobbs is so confident and he shouldn't talk to Brian like that. 10 scores for Brian to stab the asshole's hand hehe. I'm waiting for the next chapter if Chris takes revenge on our poor little blond or not. (I hope yes so I can have some action to read LOL). I'm bad because I'm into abuse and hurt Justin but I can't help it hahaha. (Laugh evilly :D)
I like this thrilling and love the way you make me feel goose bumps or shock with the characters' sudden motives. It's interesting to read. Thanks for the entertainment, love ^_^
Author's Response: You're welcome for the longer chapter and the entertainment :)
So happy you like this story :)
Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2015 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 8
Ahh thanks for the chapter. I love to see Chris and Justin's action :) I was a little shock when Chris kissed Justin but I like that action hehe. I waited for what happened next and was glad to see Chris locked Justin in the bedroom instead of... ^__^ but actually I don't mind that..thing you know? Haha. You had read Snow Flower and you know I really don't mind at all LOL.
Thanks for reading my story anyway :) all in one night is a hard work haha.
Author's Response: You're welcome for the chapter happy you liked it
And you're welcome I really liked you're story :)
Reviewer: NightRose (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2015 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 8
I'm really liking this :)
Now i'm just hope that chris isn't going to force himself on Justin I don't think my heart could take that but I will wait to see where you take this.
Author's Response: Glad you're liking this :)
As for Chris...he's getting a little cocky and alot less stable. So as of right now I don't think he'll force Justin....or will he?
Anything could happen right now >;)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2015 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 8
Shit is getting deep, please tell me that Chris won't do the unthinkable....can hardly wait for the next chapter;)
Author's Response: You won't have to wait long ;)
As for Chris doing the unthinkable...I'm not sure yet.
But I don't think I have the heart for that
Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2015 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 7
Omg! You're really my new favourite author lol ^_^ I don't mind a short chapter as long as you post everyday 2 or 3 times hehe. I'm greedy, right? ;D
Anyway, I love this action chapter. High five for the action and more action lol. I don't mind minor characters death or even Chris and Justin make out :p. I love to see some actions instead of sitting down and talking. It's boring for me lol. But you just write what you feel like, dear ^_^. I'll defenitly comment for your story muahh. :)
Ps. Add you and your story in my favorite list ^_^
Author's Response: Awe thanks :) I'm glad you liked this chapter and i'm glad they you don't mind some character death
P.S. thanks for adding my story
P.P.S I love your story Snow Flower read it in one night :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2015 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 7
Hmmmm....I don't quite know how to feel about this chapter. I mean Chris getting away with killing so many of the family...Hopefully Mel will be able to tell the police what they need to know.
Author's Response: Yea sorry...this might be that last of the deaths but plenty more violance to come >;)
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2015 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 7
" Don't worry Teddy, Em, Mel, I'm COMING!"
* you hear the sounds of rustling in the back round*
" Just let me get my Find my knife (box cutter) and I'll be right there! Hold on !!!!"
Lol, you see what you done did? You got me all upset and ready to write myself into the story and help the 'Family' out!! " Now I gotsto cut sumbody!!"
Author's Response: Sorry I got you so upset but don't worry everything will balance out ;)
Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2015 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 7
That MUTHA PUS BUCKET!!!!!! AAAAGGGGRRRHHHHH!!! He needs his ass WHIPPED!!!! Please let Brian whip him!!!! and then let the cops have him AND his wife! Loving that this is bringing the bad words out of my mouth while reading...LOL I have quite a mouth when I'm not reading but WHOA! I'm invested completely in this one!
Happy Writing,
Nichelle
Author's Response: Sorry for making you curse and yes soon Chris will get ruffed up a little
Thanks for being invested in the story :)
Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2015 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 6
Wow I love it even it's short. Pls update soon.:D I'm happy when I came home from work and saw your new chapter haha. I like a bad Hobbs with a lovesick heart for Justin oh la la ^_^ love your thriller story muah.
Author's Response: Love that you love the chapter and that you were happy to see the newest chapter :)
And I love.love,love that you love this story :) :)
P.S. Glad you like bad guy Hobbs, next chapter is all him >;)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2015 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 6
That is one nasty cliffhanger you've left us with my friend, we need the next update ASAP ;)
Author's Response: Yea sorry for the cliffhanger I'm suprised by how many of them I put in my stories
considering how much I hate them when I'm reading, but I find that their a necessary evil >;)
New chapter coming soon (love all your comments)
Reviewer: NightRose (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2015 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 5
I almost missed this story on FF (as i don't check there often) but now that it's here there's no chance i'll miss an update.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Yea I debated putting it up on here but after a little convincing from people who were reading it on FF I decided to put it up on here :)
Glad you're looking foward to more :)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2015 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 5
Omg I almost do not read any more this sounds so sad lol but I will!
Author's Response: Yea this story will be a bit sad and infuriating at times but I'm glad you'll still read.
Hanging in till the end will be well worth it, promise ;)
Reviewer: Koalared (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2015 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 5
This story is very intriguing. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Glad you like it more coming soon
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2015 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 5
Okay now I'm back on track here...I just hope that Chris (I knew it was him from the beginning lol) doesn't have anymore victories in the coming chapters.
Author's Response: Welcome back lol as for Chris's victories...we'll just have to wait and see
Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2015 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 5
I really really like this story. Please update soon. I always like a bad guy like Hobbs lol ^_^
Your plot is really interesting. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing it :)
Author's Response: I love that you're likeing the story, and that you like the plot. :)
More coming very soon :)
P.S. I'm Glad you like my bad guy
Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2015 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 5
Definitely a nailbiter so far!! I'm glad that Carl knows what's going on though so he can run interference in his own way. I can't wait to see what your diabolical mind conjures up next! ~Nichelle
Author's Response: I'm happy you're enjoying the story :)
P.S. I hope you like what my diabolical mind conjures up next >;)
Reviewer: taurus (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2015 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
What a story! Cani't wait for the other chapters. What made you decide to write this story? Very different. But I so like it.
Author's Response: I don't know it kind of just popped into my head but I'm glad you like it :)
Reviewer: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2015 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
Intriguing, very intriguing. The moment I saw the banner and read the summary my mind screamed Hobbs. But would he really be capable to do all that?
So looking forward to the next chapters. I do hope they are as riveting as the first three were. You provided a good look into the mind of a obsessed and dangerous man.
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response: Thanks I wans't really sure how good I'd be at doing the bad guy's POV
I'm happy you like it :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2015 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 3
You've completely lost me with this one...
Reviewer: Terri (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2015 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 3
Bring it on!!! This sounds like it's gonna be a good one. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks I'm very excited about sharing this story :)
Reviewer: Terri (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2015 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is intriguing!! At first I thought it might be Mikey but now with the addition of the construction site I am thinking Hobbs but that seems too easy. I guess I will find out.
Author's Response: I won't wait too long to tell who it is ;)
Glad you like it!
Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2015 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ok you have me hooked. More Please?
Author's Response: You're wish is my command ;)
Reviewer: Tonya (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2015 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
I like this already. I saw your comment at the end. Is this story complete somewhere else? If so where and under what name (author, if different). I would love to read more of this.
Author's Response: It's not complete somewhere else it's just a little more far along on another site. But they'll all be on the same page by tomarrow or today actually :)
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