Reviewer: fran (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2016 12:32 PM · On: Note from the author
Dear Fatima, I hope everything is getting well now. Take all the time you need, you'll come back when ready. Hugs<3
Fran
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2016 07:23 PM · On: Note from the author
So sorry to read about your RL problems. I hope you will get better soon. Take the needed time, we will wait for your return.
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2016 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 2 Thinkin' Bout My Ex
Nop, still depressing; and Ethan is back; you sure know how to put angst in our head.
Well done!
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2016 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 I Get Lonely
So depressing... I hope the next chapter will be happier.
I still love the way you write.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2016 10:46 PM · On: Note from the author
Good I was hoping it would continue 👍
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2016 07:59 AM · On: Note from the author
Oh! I am loving this story! I am so happy that Justin told off Ethan and let him know what he thought of the life he was leading. I am feeling sad for Justin and his dissatisfaction with his life and work. Hopefully he and Brian will reconnect soon.
Reviewer: feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2016 04:35 AM · On: Note from the author
Sorry to learn of your health problems...hope you are feeling better!
I really enjoyed the direction of your story and I really hope you are able to continue; it would be such a shame to forget your readers . Hope to your update soon
Thank you.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2016 12:20 AM · On: Note from the author
I hope things settle down for you and you can return to your story writing. Bill
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2016 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 1 I Get Lonely
I can't believe I haven't starting reading this one before. It's so sad and heartbreaking, but I know you'll bring them back together... You better! You will won't you?
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2016 08:26 PM · On: Note from the author
Hope you start feeling well. When you get back to writing it will give me a reason to reread the first chapters again. {HUGS}
Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2015 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 2 Thinkin' Bout My Ex
Hi Fatima!
I have been too busy with RL to read the beautiful stories posted here and didn't even see this one. And it was for the challenge! I love this so far. You know I love present day stories and I really feel sorry for Justin right now. I also would love to see what Brian's been up to. I am upset with Ethan for misleading and cheating on his wife but I am more upset that he can't be honest with himself, especially since he is no longer in the spotlight. I fell sorry for him, in a way, and hope that one day he can find happiness despite his mistakes. Of course, I am more concerned about Justin's life. ;) I can't wait to see where this goes. Thank you so much for dedicating it to me and Alois. I think both of us really appreciate it due to Intersect and Consequences.
Author's Response: Hello, my dear friend!
I dedicate this story to you and Alois was because she is somehow inspired by his work in "Intersect" and "Consequences". I already went ahead as you want to take it and I had never thought of writing something like that before reading the work you two. So as you are the inspiration, nothing fairer than dedicate it to you.
This story is mainly focused on Justin's point of view. There will be some references to Brian in the early chapters and he will be present from the middle to the end of the story, but the story is essentially about Justin.
As for Ethan, I was really too sorry for him. Some people make choices as he did because of career, family and religion and live unhappy lives. I never thought that Justin broke up with Ethan for his trespass. For me it was just the last straw in a situation of growing dissatisfaction that had been building since Ethan began to accept the impositions of his manager.
Justin almost died for being gay, then he would never accept to live in the shadows because of anyone. In addition, for me, Justin never really loved Ethan, it was just a very common craze for any teenager.
I intend to revisit the story soon and hope you continue to enjoy it.
A big hug, my dear friend, Fatima.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2015 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 2 Thinkin' Bout My Ex
What a surprise to find out that Ethan is Molly's teacher. How yecky is that. I'm surprised with all the yelling Ethan was doing it didn't disrupt Molly's performance. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hello my friend!
Justin really did not believe that Ethan was unaware of the connection between him and Molly.Na fact, Ethan is a professor of music Melody, Molly's friend. The sons of Ethan studying in school that Molly works and they became friends.
I always wondered how it would be a meeting between Ethan and Justin. What would happen? As at that time, Justin is so depressed and unhappy with himself, he reacted in a more emotional way than one might expect after so many years, but this will be beneficial in the long term for Justin.
The screaming near the stage, say that there were so many cries so (Ethan need to keep your image) and the table was not as close to the stage that could disrupt Molly's performance.
I'm sorry I delayed so long to answer your comment, but real life has been very difficult in recent months and I have not had much time to my writing and reading.
A big hug, my friend, Fatima.
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2015 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 2 Thinkin' Bout My Ex
I really like this storyline .. and the lack of detail on Brian's current circumstances is ramping up the anticipation/ apprehension nicely.
Author's Response: Thank you, Carol, for telling me that like my story.
The story is very focused on Justin's point of view, so initially we will have very little Brian, this first moment, since the two are far apart.
Justin has occasional news from Pittsburgh since he still keeps in touch with most of the gang. Contact with Brian will be restored at a difficult time for all of them and the boys will connect again somehow.
I'm sorry for taking so long to respond to your comment, but real life has been very difficult in recent months and I am slowly regaining my writing.
A big hug, Fatima.
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2015 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 2 Thinkin' Bout My Ex
Really enjoying this story. Certainly never envisioned Ethan Gold with a wife and family!
Hiding in the closet,yes.
Author's Response: always wondered what happened to Ethan. So I decided to write what could have happened to him from the decisions he was taking for his career. Many people still do it. They hide under disguises.
I think Ethan skirt with women to hide his homosexuality and had sex with them, of course he did not really want to get married, but was forced from an unplanned pregnancy and when he realized the situation was all made up.
Many people go through this and are very unhappy. So I used Ethan to portray it.
I'm sorry for taking so long to respond, but real life has been very difficult lately.
A big hug, Fatima.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2015 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 1 I Get Lonely
I love what you are doing with my little plot bunny lol...I admit I'm playing catch up, but I love it all the same
*hugs*
Author's Response: Hello , my dear !
I am very happy that you are happy with what I'm writing from your idea. I've never been a big fan of Janet Jackson and how not speak English, never sought the translation of your music, but when I started doing research to write the history, ideas have emerged and were suddenly taking a completely different path from idea original. I know where I want to go and I have set the final scene (as is common for me in all my stories), but what comes in the middle is still a little vague even to me. And I'm really enjoying it.
Unfortunately, real life has not been easy for me in recent months and the story should take a little longer, but I do not intend to abandon and retake it soon.
A big hug, my dear, Fatima.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2015 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 2 Thinkin' Bout My Ex
Hi Fatima!
First of all, I was deeply touched that you dedicated this story to me and Annie-Eliza :) Thank you! *smiling widely *
As for this chapter, very interesting! Justin is not in a good place right now and it's interesting to see him in that situation. Looking forward to the next chapter!
I hope everything is good for you and your family. Take care :)
Author's Response: Hello my friend!
I dedicate this story to you and Anne because she will take paths that I had never experienced before in any of the other stories I wrote and it will happen from the work of you. Then nothing more just than dedicate it to you, because my inspiration came from their stories.
The next chapters will take a while and you already know the reason for this to be happening, my friend. Things are starting to get it right and I'm gradually resuming my writing and reading.
Thank you for all the support in my stories and especially the personal support that you give me, my dear friend.
I also hope everything is good for you and your family.
A big hug, Fatima.
PS: Even today, I'll leave my comments in its new history.
Reviewer: rhonda (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2015 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 2 Thinkin' Bout My Ex
i ove the beginning of this story . cant wait to see where you go with it . looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thank you for your comment. I hope to resume the story soon. real life has been very difficult and I had to stop for a while with all writing, but soon will be returning.
A big hug, Fatima.
Reviewer: toniu (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2015 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 2 Thinkin' Bout My Ex
Oh my god, thank you. I have often imagined how Justin and Ethan would be when and if they met again.
I never liked the character of Ethan Gold, I found him to be a manipulitive. Justin would complain about something that Brian would or wouldn't do, then Ethan would give him the response that Justin wanted to hear.
I am totally enjoying reading your story. Thank you for this moment.
Author's Response: Hello! Thank you for your comment. I also always imagined it would be like a meeting between Justin and Ethan years later and what would happen. I'm glad you liked it.
I really do not dislike Ethan. I do not really like their attitudes, but it was not that bad and I think he really liked Justin.
As for it being a handler, I have to agree with you, but I believe he did this to show Justin that he was not Brian and Justin could trust him. Justin also complained all the time of Brian to Ethan. We have to be fair to the poor guy.
I'm sorry for taking so long to answer your comment, real life has been difficult. A big hug, Fatima.
Reviewer: sweetc (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2015 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 1 I Get Lonely
I live this update.I was nevery very fond of ethan but all fics are very mean to him.He was so young when he met justin and we put him to death for one stupid mistake.Yes he tell a lie and yes brian never tell lie....but he was younger than brian and has difference life and he was the opposite of Brian.I'm not trying to make him the perfect men but it is not the worse....and Justin did not need the cheating cause he was never in love with him never.Authors could have easily bring him to brian in different ways.....i think it could be better.I 'ma always Brian Justin but don't send them back together so soon....Justin need someone as perfect as Brian and then go again to him :) or maybe brian could do something to steal him back.Thank you for posting :)
Author's Response: Hello! I'm sorry for taking so long to answer your comment, but real life has been very difficult in recent months.
I do not dislike Ethan. I like Ethan period on the show, because I see it as a defining moment of the relationship between Brian and Justin. I think Ethan was very beneficial to the relationship between Brian and Justin.
As for the betrayal of Ethan, I do not see it as the main reason for their separation. Justin was already disappointed with Ethan, with all the history of hiding their sexuality, besides, I've never seen a stronger sense of Justin for Ethan than a passing enthusiasm, typical of adolescents. The betrayal was just a spark in a situation that Justin was increasingly dissatisfied.
The scene with Ethan, to me, reflects Justin's disappointment to see that Ethan continued to deny to himself and to others who he really is and it is inexcusable for Justin. After all, he almost died because of their sexuality.
A big hug, Fatima
Reviewer: Artfuleye66 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2015 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 1 I Get Lonely
I love it so far can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is being posted now.
Thank you for your comment and I'm glad to be enjoying the story.
Hugs, Fatima.
Reviewer: sweetc (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2015 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 1 I Get Lonely
sound promising :) keep going !!!
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter will be posted soon.
Hugs, Fatima.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2015 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 1 I Get Lonely
Hi my dear friend! I love this and will definitely be waiting for more. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you, my dear friend! You, in a sense, is an inspiration to me in this story. I'm very glad you're enjoying this story. The next chapter will be posted soon and I hope you like how the plot will develop.
A big hug, my friend, Fatima.
Reviewer: Who (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2015 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 1 I Get Lonely
I hope these some more where he goes back to brain and they are happy
Author's Response: Thank you for your comment. History is early and some things will still happen to reach the end. The next chapter will be posted soon and I hope you enjoy.
A big hug and thank you for your comment, Fatima.
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2015 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 I Get Lonely
more more more
please
Author's Response: The next chapter will be posted soon. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Hugs, Fatima.
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