Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2016 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 1 How to win on Liberty Avenue.

The entire gang was present and accounted for... loved it. Ted and Emmett are two of my favourite characters on the show. It would have been hilarious if Little Justin and Molly made Brian spill his own coffee down the other side of his Armani.   

Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 1 How to win on Liberty Avenue.

Hi, Fatima! I read this work a while ago, and I wanted to write a review since then. When I finished reading, I had only one thought in my mind – ‘'what a perfect story!'’. I definitely got everything I wanted – interesting plot, intensity, talented descriptions of feelings. It's so in-canon that it hurts :) I loved every moment of it, and though I don't actually read the works that don’t have Brian and Justin as the main characters, I'm always up for something like that – let alone that I really like Ted, and it's always fun to see how their friendship with Brian develops. I truly enjoyed their interaction in the show – I just couldn’t get enough! You described their first meeting perfectly. It’s just how I’d imagine that (if I actually thought of it before). 

And I liked Emmett and Godiva, of course! They were incredible! Actually – who would have helped Ted to adjust to his new life better than them :) I liked how they tried to shorten his name – it was hilarious!

And I was glad you mentioned Justin – it was a pleasure to see him. The entire scene was very beautiful.

The ending was amazing as well. I was really happy for Ted. You created a very special atmosphere. 

Thank you for this wonderful masterpiece! I’ll definitely re-read it!

Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2015 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 1 How to win on Liberty Avenue.

I really enjoyed this look into Ted's life. He's a great character. Definitely a well done story my Dear, thank you. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you, Mandi !. I am very glad you liked my story. I also think he is a great character and was a very important part of the show. I always liked Ted, I was also the "Ugly Duckling" and "intelligent" my group of friends and so I immediately sympathized with the character.
Thank you for your comments and let me know that liked my story.
A big hug, my dear! Fatima.

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2015 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 1 How to win on Liberty Avenue.

I enjoyed this and getting to know Theodore before he became Ted and Teddy. 

Dee Dee

Author's Response:

Thank you, Dee Dee! I always wanted to write something about the boys before you actually meet them and I loved doing it. I was very happy with your comment.
A big hug, Fatima.

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2015 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 1 How to win on Liberty Avenue.

Hi Fatima!

I really enjoyed your take on Ted's life and how all the pieces come together. Thank you :)

Author's Response:

Hello, Alois! Thank you, my friend! I am very glad you liked my story. Your comment is very important for me and I'm always very happy when you said my stories.
I enjoyed writing this story and I'm glad you liked reading it and found plausible the way Ted joined the gang.
Thank you, my dear friend. A big hug, Fatima.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2015 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 1 How to win on Liberty Avenue.

Very interesting. Good explanation for how Theodore became Ted. I love how you included everyone, even Justin. Good job.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Lorie. I wanted to play with the name of Ted and how I tried to show in history, he was starting a new life on Avenida Liberdade and the new life he needed a new name.
I am not able to write a story without QAF Justin. It is virtually impossible for me to do.
I am very glad you liked my story.
A big hug, my dear, Fatima.