Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2018 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 51- Opening Doors
I don't know how I missed this chapter. Michael is such a child. So glad that Emmett and Ted were there for Ben.
Dee Dee
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2018 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 51- Opening Doors
Good chapter!! Michael really needs to grow up!! No matter what anybody says to him, it just goes in one ear and out the other, as he only hear what he wants to hear. Everything everybody said to him was totally correct - he only thinks about himself and what is good for him, and not anybody else. That isn't helpful when trying to raise a daughter.
Author's Response: I don't think Michael will ever grow up unless he sees that his needs aren't being met. Since he has his comics and the life he wants, there is no incentive to change
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2018 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 51- Opening Doors
Great update. Love that Ben is dumping Mikey and taking care of JR. Terrific writing.
Author's Response: Thank you. I am working on the next chapter and hope to finish it by the weekend. Another update soon. (lol)
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2018 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 51- Opening Doors
Wow! Super super super awesome chapter. Good for Ben. He handled everything just right.
Author's Response: Thank you. I thought about what Ben would do and this is what I came up with. Glad it was believable
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2018 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 51- Opening Doors
I feel for Ben what he is going through right now is so hard. I’m so happy he has the support of his friends he is going to need them. Gosh Michael has never grown up and thinks he is the center of the world. I’m dreading to see Debbie’s reaction to the news I pray she is on Bens side but I doubt it.
this story can’t end its to good to.
Author's Response: Vickie:
Eventually all good things come to an end. I do have many more stories if you want to read some of my other work. Thanks for your comments. Debbie will not be happy, most likely.
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2018 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 51- Opening Doors
Ben went about the end of his marriage the right way, although I feel he should have spoken with Deb. Not to necessarily that he WS asking Michael for a divorce, but to inform her what was going o with JR.
It isn't looking good for Michael. Even his friends think JR is better off with Ben. Some people just won't grow up.
I do have one big question. When is someone, like Brian, going to explain to Michael that Justin has become Brian's best friend and visa versa?
Author's Response: Good point about Michael thinking he is still Brian's best friend. I don't have an answer for that, but will think about it. I toyed with telling Deb first, but thought out of courtesy, Michael should know first. Ben will want to tell her about JR and I think things may be different than if she just heard he was divorcing Michael.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2018 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 51- Opening Doors
I HATE the part about ending this story!!!! I know a story on MW that has 100 chapters so you could still add another 49 to your story. You did the impossible here, you made me feel a little sorry for Michael, very, very little but it's there. Another great chapter, I am always excited to get the update emails. Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Author's Response: lol- I don't think this story could support 100 chapters. I just got an email from a reader asking when it was going to be finished as they don't read WIP. Since it has been three years, I think maybe I need to stop. I will continue to write and I hope my next adventure is one that you will read and enjoy as well. I made you feel sorry for Michael, wow- impressive. I think Michael is not a character that I understand. I don't know how the writers came up with a marriage between him and Ben.
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