Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Fatherhood
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2018 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 43- Evening At Britin

Ben is so good with her, I love how she respects him and loves him. I got emotional when the brother and sister met again that really touched me. I hope Brian’s lawyer friend can help him. 

 

Brilliant work x

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2018 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 43- Evening At Britin

I wish Ben recorded JR on his phone. It would so help jis case. The same with talking to the idiot he married.



Author's Response:

That is an interesting idea.   I may have to incorporate that into future chapters.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2018 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 43- Evening At Britin

Ben is a good dad, and man. It is sad to listen to Jenny.

Author's Response:

Ben never thought he would be able to be a father and he is going to grab the opportunity.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2018 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 43- Evening At Britin

Wow what a selfish pig Michael has become. He should be thrilled his ‘honeybun’ is staying with them. I look forward to the next chapter to see what the lawyer says

Author's Response:

Michael has never really cared about Jenny as a child, more like an object to give him status.  Very sad for her.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2018 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 43- Evening At Britin

I love how Ben cares about JR.  Not so pleased with her mothers who feel that her doing their work is right.  Not too thrilled with Michael either.  He goes out and drinks rather than taking care of his daughter.



Author's Response:

Never been a fan of Michael or LInds and Mel.  I think everyone is glad that at least somebody is interested in her.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2018 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 43- Evening At Britin

Poor Ben, saddled with Mikey.  Hope things get better for JR.  Hate to hear you write about this story ever ending because I enjoyt ti so much.  Always happy to see my update email!  Bill



Author's Response:

Bill:

I've been writing this story for almost three years-  can't believe that folks are still interested in reading a story that has gone on for that long.  Glad that it is still holding your interest.  I've always wondered what Ben saw in Mikey.

 

 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2018 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 43- Evening At Britin

Yeah,, a new chapter.  Thank you for the quick update. Love this story.  And, took your advice.  Have finished Falling and am 1/3 thru Pain.  Great stories.



Author's Response:

WEll, we will see if I can keep up with the demand for new chapters but for now I have some time to write.

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2018 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 43- Evening At Britin

I am in no hurry for you to finish this wonderful story.  I am excited about this turn of events of Ben wanting JR and all that will entail  You can get rid of Michael at any time.  What an ass.  Brian and Justin will do all they can to help JR and Ben.

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

Dee Dee:

 

Thanks for the words of encouragement.  I just wonder how many readers are still interested in reading a story that goes on and on.  Evidently, you are not alone in wanting the story to keep going.   Brian and Justin will help since they want Gus to be happy.  Of course, they care about J.R. but I'm not sure they would help some random child unless they had a connection to them.

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