Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Fatherhood
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2018 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 40- To Be A Father or Not To Be A Father

Well done Brian he sure handled that phone call with Lindsey well. I’m glad he kept it together. She truly has no clue what the two of them did and I hope they don’t get Gus back. I hope Ben get ms J R that little girl needs a loving home as well. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

Brian finally stood up to Lindsay-  yeah-   Ben is the only one who really wants her. 

Reviewer: augusta70 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 40- To Be A Father or Not To Be A Father

This is such a great story. You've really captured the essence of the characters and put them in intriguing situations that feel truthful and keep me wanting more.  I'm so glad you've continued with this.  I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you are enjoying this story and find my characters true to cannon.  More to come soon.   My beta has the next chapter and I've started the following one.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2017 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 40- To Be A Father or Not To Be A Father

Wow things re now coming out into the light. Brian is feeling a little baffled that his two friends see their kids as a means to an end in getting to Brian. Ben has a full on fight on his hands with Mel and the Novotnys. Linds is just getting fed up not making any headway with the life she wants!

Author's Response:

I think you're right that Brian is seeing what his friends are really like at this point in time and he's not really happy with them.  He always fought for LInds and Mikey in his life, but now realizes they want him to stay the way he was, not the way he is.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2017 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 40- To Be A Father or Not To Be A Father

Hey Sandy! I'm so happy you updated this and not a moment too soon!

Well, it's certainly NOT hard to discern just why Lindsay wants Gus back in the household, now is it? Not only is he the built-in babysitter, he's also the long-hoped-for and free maid she's always wanted. It must kill her to know that if she wants a clean kitchen, she'll have to get off of her rusty, dusty ass and do it herself! I'm glad that Brian put the call on speaker so that Justin could here the conversation himself. Not only that, but it kept Brian calm and not apt to give Lindsay any ammunition she'd think she could use against him. Smart move!

As for his conversation with Ben, I really agree that he needs to spend more time with Jenny. Michael, as always, is a non-factor and unimportant in the grand scheme of that little girl's life. I really hope that if and when Ben has her, that he doesn't tell Michael his plans at all. He'll just use Jenny as an excuse to be all up in Brian's face, place and space. The arrangements should be between the 'adults' Ben, Brian and Justin while letting the 'kids' Mel, Michael and Lindsay keep playing by themselves. It's obvious that the latter three will NEVER grow up!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

So glad you are enjoying the story, Nichelle.  Gus is LIndsey's little helper or in her case, big helper around the house.She misses him for his work, not so much for being her child.  I hope my muses find a way to help J.R.  This story has a mind of its own and for a short ( supposedly 2-4 chapter tale) it has grown a lot.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2017 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 40- To Be A Father or Not To Be A Father

Brian is more thoughtful then Lindsay or Michael.  I hope Ben can work things out because JR is in a losing position.  Great chapter.  Very insightful.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Ben really wants an opportunity to be a father and Michael;s only reason to be a father is Brian.  So sad for J.R.

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2017 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 40- To Be A Father or Not To Be A Father

What  a wonderful surprise to see this. As always you have done a great job. I will be sad when this story comes to a end but maybe the muses will keep working their magic 😆

Thanks for update Sandy 😘💕

 



Author's Response:

My life is so busy and I'm often limited to weekends to write.  I have been super busy on weekends trying to get a side business up and running that it limits my time too.  I do have another chapter started so hopefully it will not take so long to post.  As for the muses keeping the story going- I do believe it has to have an end- but maybe a continuation in another story might be in order.,

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2017 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 40- To Be A Father or Not To Be A Father

Great to hear from you again. I love this story.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments-  It means a lot that people are still reading hte story.

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2017 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 40- To Be A Father or Not To Be A Father

As much as Brian loves Gus, he never should have flat out given them money. Any money for Gus' needs should have been payed directly by him. They're his parents and were to raise him without Brian, isn't that the way it was suppose to be from the very beginning? Why was it expected from him? No reason other than greed.

They won't give Ben anymore time with Jenny merely out of spite. He so badly wants to be a father but married an imbecile who only cares about keeping up with the Kinney.

Lindsay's fighting a losing battle. Doesn't she realize it yet?



Author's Response:

I so agree about the money.  I think he wanted to make up for his poor childhood, trying to ensure that Gus had everything, but he beleived in Lindsay's desire to offer that to Gus.  Instead she is more concerned about Gus being the money tree rather than the child.  Lindsay is anything but persistent.  

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2017 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 40- To Be A Father or Not To Be A Father

Always really happy to see a new chapter.  I LOVE your story.  Wish it would go on forever. Mikey is consistent if nothing else. Thanks for the update!!!!   Bill



Author's Response:

Bob:

  Thanks so much for your support and always commenting.  I don't know about forever, but maybe a sequel. 

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