Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Fatherhood
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2018 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 38- Reality Check

Oh god I can see a major fight coming one that nag get very ugly. The girls are still delusional as to what they did with Gus. I hope Gus goes home with the guys and not them. I pity Ben, he is a good guy and trying to talk to Micheal is like talking to a two year old. Micheal needs to rise up, not everything in his life should revolve around Brian. Brian has a new life he is different now. He is a family man. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

I'm not sure Ben has it in him to fight Michael.  AFter all, Brian Kinney can do no wrong and Ben has heard that so many times.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2017 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 38- Reality Check

Lindsay and Mel are in for a big surprise when they go to pick up Gus.  Michael is such a poor excuse for a father, partner and best friend.  Hopefully Ben is getting wise to that fact.



Author's Response:

Ben is quickly questioning his relationship with Michael and Mel and LInds will quickly realize that you cannot turn back time.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2017 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 38- Reality Check

Looks like Ben is finally realizing that he married a child.  I know he'll do whatever is best for JR.  Hope that Mel and Lindsay don't do something stupid in regard to Gus.  My God,  I'm talking about Mel and Linds, of course they'll do something stupid.



Author's Response:

J.R. is still a pawn to be tossed among her many parents.  so sad, but Ben has the right idea.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2017 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 38- Reality Check

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!  I was so happy to see your update.  Poor Gus, hope he doesn't get put in the middle at shcool pickup.  OMG, the munchers finally missed Gus, they must be on drugs.  Mikey so clueless, that is something we can always count on.  I wonder when Ben will have enough.  I thought it was great that he thought of Brian as Mikey's hobby - that made me laugh out loud - I may steal that line.  Thanks for the new chapter, can't wait to see the big showdown at school.  Bill



Author's Response:

Bill:

 

Again, as always, thanks for your continued support and comments on this story.  I'm so glad you liked the line about Brian being Michael's hobby-  it just really seemed to fit.  Gus and J.R. are the ones that are really being hurt.  It sucks to think your own parents don't have time for you.

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2017 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 38- Reality Check

The girls are definitely in for a shock when they get to school. Stupid women who care about themselves first.

Michael is a lost cause. Living like things never change in his world is pitiful. Or pathetic as Brian would say.. As for Jenny, I blame Mel. She picked him. He's too immature and selfish to be a father. I really never saw any endearing qualities in him that Ben should be attracted to.

Brian will be getting his new painting although probably not until Justin is done the mural.



Author's Response:

I never got why Mel chose Michael for the father.  It would have made more sense to go with Ted-  she's been friends with him forever and she knows he is solid ( he had cleaned up his act by the time she wanted another child)- 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2017 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 38- Reality Check

That was some chapter. Ben was awesome. Michael really is a child.I can't wait to see what happens after school.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the comments and I really appreciate you taking the time to write.  The girls will be in for a surprise once they get to school.  Never understood the Ben/ Michael dynamic.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2017 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 38- Reality Check

Lindsay, Mel and Michael = the most INEPT 'parents' ever to exists! I am almost salivating waiting for Tweedledumb and Dumbelina to arrive at the school, only to be told that they can't have Gus to go with them. And then when Mel finds out about the agreement Brian and Lindsay legally had BFEORE Gus was even born... Jumping Jehosephat's Jockstrap, I CAN'T WAIT for that bit of news to be made public, LOL

As for Ben's talk with Captain Asinine, I honestly feel sorry for the Professor. Trying to school Michael would be like trying to teach a sponge how to independently wash the dishes....Uh, it just ain't gonna happen! The good news is that he is mentally preparing himself to realize that being married to Michael is a waste of time (I've never understood their dynamic in the series). I find it immensely troubling that after all the years Brian and Justin have been together (longer than Michael and Ben, I might add even with the short-term breakups), Michael still holds Brian to some bullcrap double standard.

Okay, so Michael doesn't like change but when Ben points out just how much Michael's life has since high school, he's actually proud of those changes. Yet he remains willfully blind and DUMB when it comes to his friends? He can't blame his continued stupidity on the fact that he didn't go to college. Some of the wisest people didn't but they just happened to grow up, face reality and actually live their lives on and with purpose, not waiting for life to happen to them (look at Emmett, just saying). So all that said, I can't see why or how ANY of them, including Ben, are still associated with Michael. I know that may sound harsh but there it is... There is nothing in common beyond a shared past and if that's the only bind that is still holding them together, it's time to let it go and move forward while letting Michael continue to live in the past.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 



Author's Response:

Thank you for such a thoughtful review.  I see you have the same feelings about Micheal, Mel and Lindsay that I do-  ugh.  This story has definitely taken a lot of twists and turns that I did not expect.  I'm thrilled that folks are still reading-  especially with the slow updates and lenghthy time that the story has been out there.  Thank you again for commenting.  It means so much.

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2017 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 38- Reality Check

a86; Thank you for the update that was so great seeing that especially on a day like today.

Love how Lindsay  just went on how nice it was for Brian to keep Gus be they where to busy with  work. Mel didn't  really didn't  have  a  clue. 

It's going to be interesting to see if the girls actually show up to pick Gus up from school.(evil grin here)

'Teresa'



Author's Response:

Thanks Teresa.  so glad that I made your day.  I'm working to finish this but those pesky muses just keep giving me more ideas.

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