Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Fatherhood
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2021 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 36- Fallout

Guss is creddy,just llke Lindsy



Author's Response:

Not sure what creddy means?  

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2018 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 36- Fallout

Grrr Lindsey can go suck an egg with those tears. How on Earth didn’t they notice he wasn’t there. I’m trying to hold myself back from shaking those two girls until all their bones fall out. I pray all will be ok for the guys and Gus and the rest of the family back then ip. 

 

Brian and Justin are amazing dads. Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

Mel was so busy with her career and Lindsay just couldn't be bothered.  Since Brian had offered to take him, she didn't have it on her radar/

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2017 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 36- Fallout

Michael has his blinders on and his earplugs in. Why does Ben even bother?  Why is ben even still with him. No endearing qualities at all.

Brian IS happy with his life now.

Let's bring the girls' dirty laundry out into the open. Gus wouldn't miss mommy if Gus didn't see mommy. Let Lindsay know it's a possibility. 

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2017 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 36- Fallout

I don't put anything past, miss tears and madam bitch they are aways mean and nasty when they don't get their way,they don't think.. Brian could take care of a house plant much less his son



Author's Response:

I'm not a Lindsay and Mel fan-  and the way they treat Brian has always been questionable

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2017 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 36- Fallout

I love reading this.  Both Justin and Brian deserve to raise Gus.  They are such loving parents.



Author's Response:

thank you for your positive feedback.  Brian and Gus are truly dedicated parents.  I think they have to try harder since they are non traditional ones.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2017 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 36- Fallout

Oh dear it is going to get nasty but it has to so that Gus can be safe. Interesting that Carl managed to get bossy Deb to stand down for the first time in her life. Poor Ben he really struggles to get Michael to see him instead of Brian.

Author's Response:

Yes, things can get really nasty- so many things going on, all becasue the girls can't take the time to provide good role models and parenting

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2017 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 36- Fallout

OMG Thank you for the update!! I truly enjoy this story



Author's Response:

so glad that you are still enjoying hte story- 2+years later

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2017 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 36- Fallout

Loved this chapter but felt bad for Gus when he said he missed L&M.  Hard when parents can't get along.  Hope L&M can be reasonable but it may be unresonable to think that?!?  Can't wait for more.  Thanks for the new chapter.  Bill



Author's Response:

Bill:

 

Gus is like an abused child- thinking that if only he did this or that, his mommies would love him. Sad that they have convinced him that his father doesn't want him.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2017 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 36- Fallout

Ben is the voice of reason, but how long will he be able to tolerate Michael's attitude.  He doesn't think about his daughter as much as he does about the time he thinks he'll be able to spend with Brian.  Can I choke him?  I'm hoping that the truth will come out and everyone turns on the girls.  But that's just me.  Hopefully Mel won't show up at the school and try to take Gus.



Author's Response:

Ben is the voice of reason- true but I'm not so sure Michael is really ready for reason.  He "knows" his best friend better than anyone.  There are so many possibiities - just have to wait to see what happens

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