Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Fatherhood
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2018 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 11- Moment of Truth

I’m so incredibly proud of you for the way you write this chapter. You handled the Gus situation so perfectly. You gave him back confidence in himself and the reassurance his dads love him and that he will be an amazing big brother.

 

Out of this work good work d24;d24;



Author's Response:

Vickie.  I apologize for the length of time it took to respond. First, I'm so pleased you are enjoying the story.  Here will make a big brother

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 11- Moment of Truth

Finally Gus seems to understand that daddy and Justin still love him. Brian finally gets to have sex--life is somewhat better



Author's Response:

BRian/ sex-  what more can I say-  woot!!!

Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2016 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 11- Moment of Truth

Poor Gus, hearing many bad things.



Author's Response:

I hate that the family talk when he's around and think he doesn't hear

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2016 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 11- Moment of Truth

Great update.  Poor Gus trying so hard to convinence Brian and Justin to let him stay with them.

Hope Brian and Justin beat some sense into Linz, Mel, Mikey and Deb.

Thanks for sharing, RL can be very hard sometimes, take care.

JoAnn



Author's Response:

I think he really gets tired of his Momma and Mom saying bad things about his Dad, especially when there is more unconditional love from his Dad.  So glad you are still reading the story and thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2016 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 11- Moment of Truth

I'm glad that Gus is not disappointed about not living with his Daddy & Justin.  Families can be really "helpful".  I am thinking they might hear about that helpfulness from Brian.  Still really enjoying your story.  Bill



Author's Response:

Bill

 

So glad you are still reading and enjoying the story.  RL is a lot right now and I don't have as much time to write as I used to.  I'm committed to finishing the story.  I think Brian is tired of dealing with 'the family'

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2016 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 11- Moment of Truth

Just spent the last hour playing catch-up with this story, I really like this : )Someone needs to lock Lindsay and Mikey in a room and throw- a -way the key, wow, those two are obnoxious. Awww, Gus fixing breakfast for his dad and Justin was so sweet :  ) I sent you an email too ;  ) *Hugs* Janet



Author's Response:

Glad you are finding it enjoyable-  I don't have as much time now to write but I do love this story.  LIndsay and Mikey are very self centered when it comes to Brian-  even in my universe

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2016 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 11- Moment of Truth

I loved the conversation between Brian, Justin and Gus



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I wanted it to be reassuring to Gus and I'm glad that I got that across.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2016 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 11- Moment of Truth

Great chapter.  Someone needs to have a talk with all the busybodies running their mouth.  I almost wish that Gus could live with them.



Author's Response:

It would be nice for Gus to live with them, but I think he will have a big part in their lives

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2016 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 11- Moment of Truth

Loved the way they talked to Gus about the baby situation and made him feel both important and wanted.  They really are great dads.



Author's Response:

thank you-  I think they are ready to be fathers and Gus loves both of them-  he feels loved and protected by them and that is important

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