Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Fatherhood
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2018 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 9--Dolls and Zombies, and Baby Monitors

Ok bitch slap Lindsey is back she needs one not a physical one of course. She needs to butt out or she will actually lose Gus to them. Brian and Justin are really great parents they are really good with Gus and Jenny and need no help from her. I actually feel for Mel, she can see they are good parents. I hope they involve Jenny as well just as much as Gus. Brian buying that car for the baby well Justin was fantastic and such an amazing gift to get and the same with Justin’s gift to him. They both cared and got something to ease the others minds . 

 

Such sn amazing story thank you for it x



Author's Response:

I dislike LIndsay and Michael and you are right, they better be careful or they will lose Brian.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 9--Dolls and Zombies, and Baby Monitors

The fact that Lindsey thinks she can give Brian and Justin advice on child rearing is so far fetched I don't think she's much of a mother she puts herself and her wants and needs ahead of Mel Gus, and JR. She's the perfect example of a self centered person.  If they want advice the only one capable is Jennifer not only does she know how to love but she knows how to show it. She would know better to butt in telling them how to raise a child she would only help if ask.She could certainly teach Lindsey and Debbie how to raise a loving and respectful child.



Author's Response:

I totally agree.  Lindsay and Mel are filled with the idea of children not necessarily the reality of raising responsible children who will one day take over the world

Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2016 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 9--Dolls and Zombies, and Baby Monitors

Brian's biting back "Like you did when you encouraged Justin to go to New York".

So good to read that; take that Lindsey!



Author's Response:

Brian gets fed up with Lindsay

Reviewer: Ceci (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2015 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 9--Dolls and Zombies, and Baby Monitors

I love your stories. I'm so glad you continue to write. Thanks! Can't wait for the next chapter.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to let me know you are enjoyig my stories and my writing.  I write because I love to do so.  It is a creative outlet.  Unfortunately I do not have the time I used to have to do it, but I still always finish every story I start.  Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2015 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 9--Dolls and Zombies, and Baby Monitors

Lindsay is going to be sorry. Brian will distance himself from her if she isn't careful.
It's about time that they caught onto her jealousy. They'll make great parents, and no matter what, there will be Cynthia.

Author's Response:

Aboslutely.  Lindsay is walking on thin ice and she may fall in, only to find that no one will rescue her.   I think Brian and Justin will make great parents.

Reviewer: Larka (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2015 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 9--Dolls and Zombies, and Baby Monitors

Gus thinks he is going to live with Brian and Justin once the baby arrives?  I think he is in for a surprise.



Author's Response:

I'm not saying what will happen here-  my muse has not decided.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2015 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 9--Dolls and Zombies, and Baby Monitors

The baby should be here soon.  It's disappointing to see that Mikey and Deb are not being supportive.  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

The baby should be here soon.  I was hoping to have it arrive before the end of the year but it doesn't look like that will happen.  I think it will take as long to write the story as it takes to have a real baby.  ( lol) but regardless, thank you for taking the time to comment and let me know you are enjoying the story.   I would have hoped Debbie would be supportive, being the surrogate mom and all.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2015 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 9--Dolls and Zombies, and Baby Monitors

Nice happy chapter, wellthe munchers aren't happy but that doesn't matter.  I hope Gus enjoys his time with B&J.  Really enjoying ypur story.  Bill



Author's Response:

Bill:   Thanks for the comments and I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story.  It can't always be filled with angst.  lol.

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