Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2016 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
The way you handled this storyline was everything. If only Brian had given Justin a tiny bit of reassurance we would have been spared all the angst from the Fiddler Fiasco. Great job! 😋
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2015 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
What a touching, beautiful story! I love reading alternative versions of how things could have gone between Brian and Justin after this episode. I'm sure if Brian had told Justin even one word, 'stay', then Ethan would have been forgotten. Justin needed something, at least some encouragement, some belief that he's needed. You showed wonderfully how Brian forced himself to speak up. I also loved how he behaved at the party - watching Justin so lovingly, wanting to be with him and not afraid that people will see it. The ending was sweet. I applaud Brian for trusting Justin to go talk to Ethan.
Thank you, I loved this story!
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2015 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was great I love seeing Brian being able to express his emotions, and Justin being able to tell Brian what it is that he needs... That's all it would have taken... If only...
Love it ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: If only we could write the script, it would be so much easier for the boys. Of course drama and clifhangers are nescessary for a good tv show, but I think it's really a pity that they didn't communicate a bit more. Thanks for your review, I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: sweetc (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2015 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
I really liked your pov.But i know that brian was not ready at that point to show all of that at justin.I think however that he could do something not radical as you did but something like where the hell are you going? in babylon and stop him and justin would have stay with him and then brian would have actually play as you have written( more willing to show love).
Author's Response: You might be right and if you write a fic with your version of events, I'll be the first one to read it. I like all the fics that change the course of events regarding Ethan, whether it is season 2 or early season 3. But the idea to write this came to me when I saw a banner of some other story, which was the picture of the "bed scene", after Justin come's back from Ethan. So it just had to be this way :) Thanks for reading and commenting!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2015 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
If only it could have happened like this on the show.
Author's Response: I also wish that. Well, at least we can always write our versions of the most beautyful love story ever told ;) Thanks you for the feedback and for reading!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2015 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is what I much rather have occurred than what they filmed. You did a great job.
Author's Response: Thank you! Of course we all would like the alterative versions of the Ethan storyline. That's why we write so much of them :D
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2015 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this! If only they had talked some things out, they could have been spared a lot of pain and grief. I wish it had happened this way. So sweet. Thank you for writing it. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: I think we all wish ;) It was a very emotional exprience for me to write it. I almost felt Brian's despair. And I thought that what he needs to do is just to take this first step, say just one thing. After that everything was easier for him. Thanks you for commenting!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2015 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was wonderful. If Brian had done that, Justin never would have left. This was very realistic. Great job
Author's Response: I really don't like how the Ethan storyline ended up in the show, because it was so unnescessary. It would be much better if Justin really met Ethan, had an affair but at the end it would turn out somehow like I wrote it. Still drama and suspense, but everyone is happy at the end. Too bad that the CowLip didn't think like this.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2015 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was amazing, I love the way you got into Brian’s thoughts and displayed them in a very realistic way...great job.
Author's Response: Thank you! I did my best. It was much easier to write from Brian's point of view than as a "neutral" narrator.
Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2015 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this little one shot. It was nice to see them open up to each other, knowing that they needed to be aware of how the other one was feeling.
Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed it. I tink it was one of their problems on the show - no talking. But of course it's was easier for the CowLip and probably more attractive from the commercial point of view to show drama and breakups instead of the actual communication between the characters.
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