Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Intruder
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2015 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 39

Poor Justin... There's nothing worse than a sick and grumpy Brian...

Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2015 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 39

Oh no, two kids and Brian both sick with chicken pox!  Not fun. 

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2015 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 38

Yeahhhhh!!! Peanut is starting to warm up to Justin!

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2015 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 37

ROFL I love Patrick! He knows how to push his Daddy's buttons!

Reviewer: toniu (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2015 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 38

I Love This Story! Being the stay at home parent is a difficult job. I like that Brian is the one doing it this time. It seems to me that no matter how much you prepare the first child there will be jealousy.

Thank you for a relaxing good feeling story. Thank you for  a look into a normal day int the life of Brian and Justin.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2015 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 38

that munchkin he and peanut are going to cause Brian and Jus to go gray  anytime now but munchkin is so adorable and peanut and her new words she learn are not approved by dada and daddy, especially when munchkin ask people if they want to see his best new friend, his penis. This story after we knew peanut was going to make it has me laughing constantly. please, more chapters

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2015 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 38

LMAO!!!!

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2015 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 38

LOL I love it!! Ruby is cussing! lol. Patrick is indeed the Devil!

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2015 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 38

my youngest sister's favorite word at 2 was son of a bitch my father found it hysterical and encouraged it my mother was mortified but could not contain the smile. I called the person who cut my father off while he was in car with a client a son of a bitch I was 2 1/2 I am sur e my other sister did something but the only thing I remember is she used to call dump trucks dump fucks. So far my nieces don't curse it's coming we know it will and somewhere my father will be laughing

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2015 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 38

Funny chapter.  Kids always seem to learn the words we wish we hadn't said in front og them.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2015 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 38

Aww Love theupdate. What's going on between patrick and Briain relationship? Justin work with Brian. More please

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2015 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 38

I can't help repeting myself but I love this story. One of my favs for sure

Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2015 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

Kieth preggers with twins and Brian with a girl.  Poor wee Patrick all forgotten by his dad's. No wonder he's in a grump and worrying if they forget him  after the baby is born- what will they be like after?

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2015 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 30

I'm almost dreading the next chapter...almost but not quite enough to keep me from reading ;)

Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2015 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 30

Oh, so Keith is going to have twins! It’s a good thing that Brian isn’t the one to receive such news. Justin would be having a panic attack. 

I was a little surprised that Brian actually agreed to check on Black. It seems like their friendship with Ted is really important to him – he definitely wouldn’t do such thing if it wasn't. I like their interaction in the show, and I enjoy it here as well.

Poor Patrick… I can imagine what he must have been thinking. I hope Brian and Justin will make it up to him, so he won’t be feeling insecure when the baby is born. 

The conversation about Kiki was hilarious :) 

Thank you for this update! Can’t wait for the next one!

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2015 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 29

I love your story

thank you

 

Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2015 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 29

Thank you for another enjoyable chapter! 

Poor Brian… Having to deal with all these problems – a DJ at first and then this competition thing. I doubt he’d be satisfied if he had to give it all up in order not to overdo. Not the Brian we know, anyway :) I just hope everything turns out well. Justin isn’t going to be pleased, though. 

Oh, Emmett is something! Brian’s message made me laugh – I can imagine what Emmett will say :) 

Brian’s reaction to Patrick’s tears is so touching. I just melted! I adore the moments like that.

Thank you once again! Can’t wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2015 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 28

Great chapter! Loved it! 

Evan seems like a good teacher. Kids who keep forgetting their stuff can be really exhausting yet funny at the same time. 

I liked scene with Patrick’s picture. Hopefully, his passion for painting remains in the future. Really, why shouldn't he inherit that trait of Justin’s? :)

Emmett's complains about Ted and Black’s ‘assault’ are hilarious. I definitely love him here! 

And that ‘teddy bear’ moment is probably my favorite (though it’s really difficult to choose one). Debbie’s remark made me smile – a mixture between Brian and Justin is definitely not something you can deal easy with :) 

Thank you for writing such a beautiful story! 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2015 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 29

I do want Brian to win the account but not if he puts himself and the baby at risk. Loved Patrick wearing nail polish Brian is such a nutter sometimes you have to wonder about his gay card

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2015 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 29

Enjoyed this chapter.  Patrick is really cute and has his Daddy firmly under his control.  Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2015 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 29

Oh boy, Brian never learns, does he? In a way, I'm excited about the new ad campaign because he always kicks ass and the creating process is fascinating. However, Brian shouldn't work too hard and exhaust himself again. Thank you for saying you won't kill him, but I know trouble is on its way. Eeek! The scene with Patrick was so adorable, I could almost see them in my mind. Awwww!! The blue nail polish scene was hilarious!! Emmett in canon would definitely do this! LOL Loved the chapter and this story! :D

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2015 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 29

First Brian goes into a coma with the first pregnancy, then he gets pregnant again (by no fault of his own)...now he's causing himself more stress and potential danger to his health by overworking himself? It just seems to me that once Brian started suffering, he never stopped...it's just one peril right after another

I hope all of this ends soon for him.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2015 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 29

Poor Brian, he has a lot going on. I don't like him having to do extra hours while pregnant. If he does them Brian needs to be home where Justin can watch him. I'm loving Patrick and the calmness he brings out of his father. Please post more soon.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2015 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 29

I like that he's in touch with what people buy for kids.  This will make his campaign kick ass.  Vance doesn't stand a chance.

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2015 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 28

Spot on about stubborness, aka Patrick, stemming from Brian and Justin. ;)

I'm enjoying the continuing trials and tribuations of Brian and Justin, my favorite dynamic duo.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2015 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 28

Fun chapter.  Liked the part about the little girl forgetting her shoes at school.

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2015 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 28

Oh boy, we get to find out how the family takes the news. That wink with "everything will be okay" makes me nervous. This is going to be a wild ride! I like that Emmett and Mikey are good uncles (aunt and uncle?). :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2015 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 28

I want to be happy for them but....I can't seem to get past the unfairness of the whole situation. Brian going through it once was just circumstance, but him going through it a second time seems like too much.

I love the story though ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2015 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 28

Next chapter is everyone's reactions, right?  Love how Munchkin lets the cat out of the bag at school.  This times got to be different from last time, since Brian and Justin know what to expect.

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2015 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 27

Welcome to breederville, Lol, where birth control is always a concern. Poor boys, but they'll get through this like everything else. No comas this time, though, okay? ;-) I'm enjoying this story and thrilled that it will continue for a while longer! :-D

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2015 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 27

The April Fool's reference is hilarious....well, maybe not for BJ, right now. ;)  Thanks for supplying another "intruder".

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2015 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 27

Glad Justin came around. This should be interesting the 2nd time around and I love that Keith is also pregnant at the same time.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2015 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 27

I love this chapter but Justin come Brian didn't get himselfpregnancy. I believe he is lashing oout fear how the first pregnancy came out. He needs time to think and I don't think Brian went this long without seeing DR. Hmp on propuse. I need more. I feel for Patrick.

Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2015 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 27

Thank you for this wonderful update! I enjoyed it, as always :)

It was intense. Poor Brian and Justin. Everything is so difficult for them right now. I should admit that I got a little irritated when Justin said to Brian that he hated him. I can imagine what Brian must have been feeling. But at the same time Justin’s behavior is understandable. He is scared out of his mind, let alone he’s feeling guilty for what has happened. It makes everything even more complicated. Brian needs Justin’s support more than anything else, so it won’t be any good if Justin continues to distress himself (and Patrick, as a result). 

Thank you once again for this chapter! Can’t wait for the next one!

Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2015 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm probably over- thinking this.

Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2015 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

That maybe for both of them losing a prospective child yet to be born is every bit as hard as losing Brian or them both.

Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2015 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

 Funny that both Brian and Justin ignored Brian's early pregnancy symptoms and the  amount of time going by.

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2015 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 27

What more can I say.

Thank you for posting.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2015 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 27

Hmmm...not sure how to feel about this. Hopefully things get better between them, and they learn to leave Patrick out of their discord.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2015 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 27

It seems a shame that Justin is angry and Munchkin knows it when it's Justin's fault to begin with.  Justin better make it up to both of them.  What happens if Patrick doesn't get his sista?

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2015 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 27

At least Patricj is happy about the new addition.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2015 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 26

Hi! Thank you so much for your beautiful story! I like it very much.


You Brian and Justin are wonderful, I fell in love with them right away. Brian’s pregnancy… it was intense and touching at the same time. I loved every detail, verything was so well-written and interesting. I couldn’t keep my eyes off it even for a moment!


Justin’s e-mails are amazing! I can’t remember ever reading something like that. It was really hilarious and enjoyable – especially Brian’s reaction to it :)


And I also loved Keith and Leo. It’s good that they’re so supportive of Brian and Justin.


Patrick is charming! Brian’s love to him is something that’s just impossible to resist. Actually, I understood it’d be that way from that very moment when Brian slapped Justin’s hand off his belly fearing for his Peanut/Munchking’s safety. It was really funny, by the way – I was laughing so hard! :)


As for the second pregnancy, it’s really difficult. I can’t even imagine what Justin must have been feeling during the first one. I completely understand his concerns. It might be really dangerous for Brian.


I’m very glad you’re going to keep on writing :) Looking forward to the next chapter!


By the way, I liked you other works as well. You’re very talented.



Author's Response:

Hi! Thank you for the lenghly review and kind words. I haven't gooteen such a beautiful one in ages. I'm flattered.

I'm glad I could portray the characters the way I wanted. :)

See you next chapter!

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2015 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 26

I can understand Justin is scared about losing Brian but he should of thought about it before he did what he did.
So glad that Leo and Brian will be pregnant together.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2015 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 26

I think Justin overreacted and was quite out of line to even involve Patrick in that kind of conversation. As a pro-choicer who opposes abortion, I feel that Justin and Brian should discuss this situation very thoroughly.

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2015 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 26

Omg, both Keith *and* Brian have buns in the oven (maybe)? This is gonna be a wild ride! Lol I can understand Justin's reaction and think he will get over it, he's just afraid for Brian's life/health. Brian can't wait till the last minute like he did last time, though. I'm looking forward to what happens next! :D Patrick certainly wants to be a big brother!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 26

Lol oh dear what a drama these guys wrap themselves in. I get Justin's fear it's real and Munchkin isn't too old that they have forgotten how scary it is.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 26

Justin is scared. He scared for Brian and Patrick and himself. What if this pregnacy was like the last one. But Justin talk to Brian.

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2015 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 26

Well, I don't know what to say, but I think Justin might be right. The whole process was really hard for Brian, in any case Justin should be cooking Munchkin 2. Still, I want to know if they are going to be fathers again. Love this story

Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2015 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

'Breeder Central?'   I can remember someone's horror at that in the past.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 26

Understandable reaction but hopefully Justin gets over his fears and they turn out to be baseless.  If you even think about killing Brian I will hunt you down and make you pay for your mistake!!!!  other than that I love your story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 26

I know Justin's scared of losing Brian, but isn't it supposed to be easier the second time around?

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2015 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 25

Noooooo...you’re not going to put Brian through the baby walk again are you? Somehow I kind of saw Justin carrying the next one ;)

Author's Response:

Uh, it's going to be Brian...cuz if Justin could do it... imagine how many kids they'd have... lol



Author's Response:

Uh, it's going to be Brian...cuz if Justin could do it... imagine how many kids they'd have... lol

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2015 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 25

Uh-oh .. :)



Author's Response:

That sums it up perfectly :)

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2015 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 25

Oh, dear, poor Brian. ;0

I'm very glad this means at least 25 more chapters...more fun for your readers!



Author's Response:

Hehe! Yeah, poor Brian. :)

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2015 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 25

Oooooohhhhhhhhh I think someone is baking a Pink Cake in theOven lol!!!'

I am sooooo glad we get 25 or so more chapters, I sooooo love this.

p.s maybe we can also get some adolescent to teenage yrs continuity ! :)

Author's Response:

"Pink Cake" - that's so adorable! How did you guess? Shhh. :-P

 

There will be teenage kids...and much more. It's all in the outtakes...which I'm working on. ;)

Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2015 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oooh dear! that was a bit underhand of him,wasn't it? Me senses that Justin wants to be a  Daddy again, or can't resist doing it raw.



Author's Response:

Justin truly didn't think of whta he did. Adn we know how much he wanted to do it raw.

Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2015 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 24

I'm really enjoying this peek into Brian and Justin and little Patrick's family life. Patrick is definitely

a little bundle of energy.    In later life, a non- stop chatter-box and a label queen. Quite a mixture.

Do you think he'll give his Auntie Emmet a run for his money? I think Brian would have a fit if Patrick turned out like Emmet. The same dress sense.

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2015 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 25

Brian pg again? Not so good according to him, in fact never again he said.

Great update , thaks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Well, it's not always the way he wants it, is it? :))

Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2015 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 25

I'm guessing that Brian will be knocked up again? I must admit that I was hoping that if there was another pregnancy in this story it would be Justin who got pregnant. Well maybe the morning after pill would work for Brian.

Author's Response:

I'm trying to keep as plausible as possible...so Brian is the only one to get preggo. I may be persuaded to try my hand...in a different story...to make Justin preggo. :))

Reviewer: Therese (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2015 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 25

Really enjoying this story and looking forward to the next 25, thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2015 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 25

Lol oh goody more chapters I am thinking Brian is never going to let Justin near his ass again in the future

Author's Response:

LOL! You might be right. :))

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2015 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

Love this story!  Looking forward to more chapters.  Loving the way you have written Brian.



Author's Response:

Thank you! We are halfway there now. It's a long journey...and a real complex story. :)

I'm glad I could keep Brian in character. It's all I really wanted, especially with everything going on.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2015 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 25

uh oh is will there be Minchkin 2.  Great story, glad to here there is more coming.



Author's Response:

Munchkin #2 is on the way, definitely.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2015 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 25

Brian is going to have another baby yay. I'm loving Gus as a big brother!!!! More Please.



Author's Response:

Gus is precious. I love writing Gus. :)

And now Munchkin is going to be a big brother too.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2015 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 25

Shouldn't it be Justin's turn to be a fother, martha?  Whatever.



Author's Response:

They're both fathers.

To make the story as real as I can...I'll stick to Brian being preggo. If Justin could do this, I think we'd have known long ago...since he's such a bottom boy. ;)

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2015 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 25

Ha! The kids are such little rascals, Lol. Ah, domesticated Brian is a wonderful creature. He even put up the Christmas lights! Uh oh, what's gonna happen now after the shower incident? I'm happy that this story will continue! :)



Author's Response:

Hehe! I love writing this domesticated Brian, and try my hardest to keep him in character as much as possible.

What's going to happen...hmmm...a surprise. :-P

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2015 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 25

Wow! Oops! Giggles!

Author's Response:

Yep...giggles...for us. Brian is quite mad at Justin. :))

Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2015 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 25

I am not a huge mpreg fan but strangely change my stance when it's Brian. Perhaps it's because he is ultimately NOT one who would ever want to be in that state lol. I really do hope Justin knocked him up this time around. Can you imagine the gang's reactions? Brian being pregnant once could be a fluke but twice? Mwhahaha! He is going to have some explaining to do. Or avoidance. In his defense, it is Justin's fault. Looking forward to next chapter!



Author's Response:

Exactly! Brian is the last person to be into this...yet he's such a great parent, embracing all changes... :)

All Justin's fault, of course. and he is not exactly saying no when Justin tries to top him.

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2015 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 25

patrick needs a little sister



Author's Response:

He sure does. ;)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2015 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 25

* grins * poor Brian ... pregnant again!? Love this update. * makes happy dance * no epilogue, but more chapters YES.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Many, many more chapters. :)

How I love tormenting Brian...mwahaha :)))

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2015 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 25

I hope Justin has this baby, and it's a girl. They would make a beautiful girl together. Brian's dark hair and Justin's light eyes.

Author's Response:

Sorry to disappoint...Justin won't be the one carrying the baby... :)

Patrick has Jusitn's eyes, so it's Brian's turn to give his gene to the new baby.

Reviewer: Tammy (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2015 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 25

I think Justin should get pregnant this time around not Brian



Author's Response:

It's going to be Brian again...because it will be weird to have Justin do it all of a sudden. That might be another story.

Reviewer: Who (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2015 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 25

Another baby cool



Author's Response:

yup :)

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2015 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 24

I'm so in love with this story. I love Patrick missing his daddy. Daddy wanting time with Justin Hmm. Justin lets get Brian pregnant again so Patrick has a sibling.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2015 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 24

great chapter.  Not surprised Patrick kept his Munchkin nickname.  Can't wait to read about Patrick/Gus interactions.  Bill

Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2015 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 24

Cute chapter :) I like that Brian has taken to this new life and things are still going well five years later.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2015 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 24

That's parenthood for you.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2015 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 23

Lol very amusing loved how Brian thought he could leave Patrick heheheheh

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2015 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 23

Nice chapter! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2015 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 23

Munchkin is causing lots of abjustment for B&J. Fun chapter.

Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2015 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 23

 Is it possble to flesh these characters out more. You've done it perfectly. Hugely enjoyable.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2015 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 23

Hmmm. I love Brian being a tentive parent. I love him and Justin being in this together and telling Justin to being confident in himself with Patrick. Patrick seems like such a good back and just wants to be with his daddies.

 

Michael everything isn't about you. Brian can't make to your party because Patrick is sick and he is doing the right thing about staying with Patrick. I don't understand why you are being a bad friend. Let Brian be a good parent. Eithan leave Justin alone. Hmm I still hoping Brian will have more kids by Justin. Please more soon !!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2015 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 23

The Munchkin seems to be adapting pretty well.  Brian is back to his normal self almost.  So Ethan's in Justin's class?  That makes it interesting, even though he doesn't stand a chance.  Brian's smart to not take Patrick to the 'surprise' party if Mikey's sick. 

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2015 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 23

Lol, little Patrick puked all over Ethan, I knew he had good taste! Brian has such wit, and I love how he says Munchkin's "concerts".  Good for Brian in getting back in shape, it help him feel like himself again. I liked how he made Michael and Ben as godfathers of Patrick. Poor Mikey is getting sick so he won't have his best friend and the girls over for his "surprise" birthday party. Maybe they could postpone it? Great chapter, I really enjoyed it, as always! :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2015 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 22

Lol we have a couple of daddies vying for ownership over munchkin lol. I am glad Brian listens to their friends as this actually helps Justin lol

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 17, 2015 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 22

I'm not usually a big fan of Brian mpregs but I love this. Your writing style is very enjoyable and your characters are never boring.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2015 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 22

Aww such sweet chapter Brian might make me cry

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2015 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 22

Great update!

Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2015 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

Brian says he's given up clubs and tricking. Hmmm.....or will the call of the wild sound again?

Classical music at home drives him demented.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2015 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 22

Well Brian had to learn sometime that rock music isn't what you'd call relaxing for infants.  He's going to be tired for a good while, it's part of being a dad or is it a dother?

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2015 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 21

Keep it coming...I can't wait for the first check up.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2015 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 21

Lol I love the way Brian and Justin are sniping at each other but are totally united in caring and loving Munchkin. Their love for each other is evident but their fear and love for Patrick is a beautiful thing

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2015 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 20

Great chapter.
One thing though, I guess you are not American, 16 ounces is a pound so 8 pounds 20 ounces would be 9 pounds 4 ounces.
Love this story. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2015 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 21

Love it

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2015 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 7

OMG. This story is hilarious. I love it so much. I also love the baby being called Munchkin. I called my first son that, I still do, even though he is 38. I named him that in the hospital because to me he looked like a Munchkin (he is six feet tall now).

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2015 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 21

Awww, I loved this chapter. Little Patrick sounds adorable, and Brian and Justin fussing over him is so cute. I enjoyed the visit from Debbie and Michael, and how Brian likes donuts with sprinkles. :) Let's see how the boys do at home with the baby, and how Liberty Avenue handles the news. I loved that Brian said he was done with tricking, and that only Justin and Munchkin mattered now.

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2015 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 21

Daddies and Munchkin going home.

Great update, thanks for sharig!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2015 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 21

Very enjoyable chapter.  Brian doesn't know his troubles are just starting.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2015 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 21

With a story this good you don't need everything right.  Most enjoyable.

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2015 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 20

So happy Munchkin arrived safe and sound, plus Brian made it, had me woorried due to the previous chapter.

Fantastic update, thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2015 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 20

Awwww, so glad that Brian pulled through and was around to be with Munchkin a.k.a. Patrick and Justin! What a cute scene at the end of the chapter! I wonder how they will explain the baby to everyone who didn't know about the pregnancy. I liked how you wrote Brian's POV while in the coma, although I didn't enjoy that he was in a coma you understand. ;) Ha, Justin was sneaky in having Brian breastfeed the baby. Overall a great chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter with the family meeting the newest arrival. :)

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2015 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 20

Aww More Please.

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2015 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 20

aww finally Patrick is there with Brian and Justin, what a sweet momento for both.

Very nice chapter

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2015 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 20

Welcome baby Patrick! It's scary to think of Brian being in a coma though *shudders*

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2015 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 20

A coma!  For a whole week?  At least he's back and wants his munchkin. Now for the reunion chapter.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2015 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 19

Thank you for taking the time out to respond. I know you won't kill Brisn, but it will be a close call. I just love how you have written this chapter. I love this emotional part of Brian really caring for his baby and Justin. Please post more sion!!!



Author's Response:

I finally found a little time to answer my lovely readers.

Yes, it will be a close call. Tomorrow, next chapter :)

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2015 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 19

What a sad ending! I'm crying like a weeping willow but there's still hope if Keith could do it, Brian too. Besides he has Justin and now Patrick, it's a boy, isn't it? Hope there are two: a boy and a girl

Can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Munchkin is boy, of course. Not saying more.

Awww. Hugs. I knew it was going to be a hard chapter.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2015 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 19

Oh that was not as bad as I expected when I read your warning. Beautiful letters so Brian 👍 thanks. For this story I am enjoying it very much and I love the name Patrick Taylor Kinney

Author's Response:

Yay! So glad you like the name. 

The letters were very hard to write, but it's good they didn't turn as bad as they were in my head.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2015 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 19

Aww Brian preparing for the worest. Please say he will surive this. Please most more soon.



Author's Response:

Isn't that implicit? Of course, Brian is going to survive! Really. I will never kill him off, or any important character. 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2015 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 19

It's so nice to read a good non-angst fic. I loved the letters but I'm hoping they are never put to use.



Author's Response:

Aww. Thanks. I steer clear from angst, most of the time.

The letters will resurface later, but under different circumstances.

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2015 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 19

Ooh, I love the name Patrick! The baby shower and baby name game was really cute. The letters were very sad, but Brian would definitely plan for any situation. I don't think you'll kill him off, although it's good that he's looking out for Justin, Gus, and Patrick in case something goes wrong. Wouldn't it be better to plan a C-section so it's safer? I really like that Leo and Keith are there, and that everyone likes them too (and their little munchkin too).



Author's Response:

Don't worry. I won't kill Brian. No drama zone ;)

Glad you like Munchkin's name.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2015 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 19

Here's hoping that they never get read.  You did a great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you. The letter will make a reappearance later...much later, and under different circumstances. ;)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2015 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 19

I must admit I have mixed feelings about the end of this chapter. On the one hand I'm glad Brian was wise enough to prepare for the possibility that things might go wrong, but on the other hand, it saddens me that he has resigned himself to believe that it is a certainty that he won't make it through the birth. Hopefully his views change when the time comes.

Author's Response:

He's not sure what is going to happen, so Brian being Brian has to be prepared. :)

Reviewer: Frances (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2015 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 18

Adorable.  Sweet and emotional... I feel like Justin may start hovering over Brian a little more now.  lol.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2015 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 18

Hilarious!!! But also infuriating how the gang just barges in like that.

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2015 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 18

Lol, Brian dove for those cookies. They are both such drama queens! I'm glad our two boys made up. The "family" can be pretty intrusive even though they mean well. I admit I did roll my eyes a few times! Hahahhaha 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2015 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 18

Interesting chapter.  I thought everyone had left.  Makeup sex on the lawn, that's new. 

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2015 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 17

Ok I now we just got a chapter but ummmmm I'm need another one STAT. lol

Reviewer: Frances (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2015 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 17

I love emotional Brian.  I can't help giggling every time.

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2015 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 12

Bri's man tits.  Unstoppable LOL.

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2015 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 10

Love the email exchanges! :D

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