Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Intruder
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2019 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6

Oh dear Brian really wasn’t happy was he, I thought it was cute that Gus did that with Emmett

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2019 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6

Thank god Justin went to that meeting at the school. If Brian has gone there would have been a murder investigation. Lol Patrick is so funny I laughed so hard at this , you really made me smile so much thank you for that. 

Reviewer: The SNO (Anonymous) · Date: January 09, 2016 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6

The last scene is especially funny; poor kid needing his beauty sleep.

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2015 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6

I've been reading some heavier QAF stories, so I really appreciate the comic relief fom this "blanket hogs" update. ;)

I'm with you on not ending this story. :)

Reviewer: anym (Anonymous) · Date: October 19, 2015 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6

will there be a honeymoon? i really hope so since their wedding quite bland.. so i hope justin get a long superb perfect surprise honeymoon.

 

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2015 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6

LOL!!! That is a very creative explanation that Brian gave to the headboard banging... especially since they did end up fighting over the blanket! Munchkin is one funny kid. :D I'm curious about his drawing, though! Another hilarious chapter full of love.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2015 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6

Great chapter a mixture of angst and fun. Serious pain with homophobia at school and Brian's fear of Patrick standing out at school. This was balanced with the fun at home with the boys 👏👍

Reviewer: Marcia Malone lives here (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2015 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6

They must sound as if their fighting with a sumo wrestler and a cattle prod. Ha..uh! Thump!

Aah... landing out of bed! One of the charms of sharing a bed with a venerated sportsman of Japan. There is no sharing!

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2015 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6

ha, ha Patrick is so funny! I loved this outtake. Yeah, next time the wedding night

Reviewer: Who (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2015 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6

Patrick getting married

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2015 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6

I can understand Brian not wanting Patrick to be hurt by other people.  What if the shoe were on the other foot and those homophobics children were on the receiving end of such bigotry?  Shouldn't Brian have had their bedroom soundproofed by now? 

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