Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Intruder
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2019 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 39

Poor Ruby that’s going to suck for her and the other who catch it. Lol I love Beian showing his scars that had to have been OMG moment right there lol 

Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2015 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 39

Yes, it's amazing what life throws at us.

  I remember a discussion about the possibility of male pregnancy coming up one day and someone rather nastily saying if gays could get pregnant,that would certainly frighten them enough to give up 'what they do'. Huh! You could ask any of them and they would probably say 'As if!' ''Getting pregnant has never stopped straights so why them?'' A bit niaive for supposedly worldlywise people too.

 I'm surprised at Justin being afraid of a wild rat when his son has two pet ones.

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2015 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 39

I'm amazed Brian would deal with a rat, even a small one, so cheerfully. Chicken pox is evidently another matter... ;)

So, is Justin going to try and take care of 3 kids with pox at the same time? That's far worse than a small rat, especially the big kid. :D

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2015 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 39

 Ruh roh, chicken pox! I had that as a kid and still remember how itchy it was. I hope everyone else doesn't get it! :) How funny that Brian had to answer those uncomfortable questions yet again about how the kids came to be. Cute chapter! 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2015 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 39

 I thought this capter was really good, but those two at the school were awful. How could someone ask if munchkin was not wanted by his mother, in front of said child. these two trolls should be called on the carpet for acting so irresponsible. And to top everything Justin three babies with chicken pox! I had chicken pox when I was five in kindergarden, then at 40 I had shingles--NO FUN. I had to take six weeks sick leave. I hope for many more chapters.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2015 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 39

Omg you gave Brian chicken pox lol he is going to be an unbelievable bitch to live with. I see big BIG rows coming up as Justin tries to manage him and Ruby and Patrick

Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2015 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 39

Chicken pox is not just the red dots, these are small blisters all over the body, even at the private parts, and with the hair on his head, high fever and terrible itching.  If scratching hurt the envelope, leave scars.For all this really falls immunity, so if you can not keep, you can get pneumonia, then.


Now I feel like a public service information.


I like your way of illustrating B / J family life with children. So sweet interaction.    

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2015 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 39

OMG!! lol this should be really good! Cant wait for next update!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2015 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 39

I HATED having the chcken pox so I sympathize with Brian. Cute chapter.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2015 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 39

Yes More please

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2015 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 39

Brian is such a drama queen and a great father at the same time I love it. Luckily he has Justin to bring him down to Earth.

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2015 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 39

my mom did about 3 weeks of chicken pox when I brought it home from Kindergarden my sisters were 3 and about 9 months all of us got it the youngest got it the worst the only bright side as far as my mom was concerned was it was over. I feel for Justin a whiny sick Brian equals nightmare.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2015 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 39

Damn....this really is turning into the let's make Brian suffer show...smh

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2015 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 39

Poor Justin... There's nothing worse than a sick and grumpy Brian...

Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2015 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 39

Oh no, two kids and Brian both sick with chicken pox!  Not fun. 

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