Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Intruder
Reviewer: Ilovelife19 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2023 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 28

Yeah!!!

Reviewer: Ilovelife19 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2023 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 28

Yeah!!!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2019 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 28

I love Patrick he is a ball of energy isn’t he. Brian is brilliant here and I’m sure the brunch will be interesting lol I’m so lad Keith and Leo live near them now they will be great and I’m sure lots of fun ahead. 

Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2015 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 28

Great chapter! Loved it! 

Evan seems like a good teacher. Kids who keep forgetting their stuff can be really exhausting yet funny at the same time. 

I liked scene with Patrick’s picture. Hopefully, his passion for painting remains in the future. Really, why shouldn't he inherit that trait of Justin’s? :)

Emmett's complains about Ted and Black’s ‘assault’ are hilarious. I definitely love him here! 

And that ‘teddy bear’ moment is probably my favorite (though it’s really difficult to choose one). Debbie’s remark made me smile – a mixture between Brian and Justin is definitely not something you can deal easy with :) 

Thank you for writing such a beautiful story! 

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2015 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 28

Spot on about stubborness, aka Patrick, stemming from Brian and Justin. ;)

I'm enjoying the continuing trials and tribuations of Brian and Justin, my favorite dynamic duo.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2015 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 28

Fun chapter.  Liked the part about the little girl forgetting her shoes at school.

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2015 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 28

Oh boy, we get to find out how the family takes the news. That wink with "everything will be okay" makes me nervous. This is going to be a wild ride! I like that Emmett and Mikey are good uncles (aunt and uncle?). :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2015 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 28

I want to be happy for them but....I can't seem to get past the unfairness of the whole situation. Brian going through it once was just circumstance, but him going through it a second time seems like too much.

I love the story though ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2015 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 28

Next chapter is everyone's reactions, right?  Love how Munchkin lets the cat out of the bag at school.  This times got to be different from last time, since Brian and Justin know what to expect.

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