Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Intruder
Reviewer: Ilovelife19 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2023 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 27

Yeahhh another baby

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2019 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 27

I understand Justin’s fears heck anyone would be scared. I hope all will be ok for them all. 

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2015 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 27

Welcome to breederville, Lol, where birth control is always a concern. Poor boys, but they'll get through this like everything else. No comas this time, though, okay? ;-) I'm enjoying this story and thrilled that it will continue for a while longer! :-D

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2015 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 27

The April Fool's reference is hilarious....well, maybe not for BJ, right now. ;)  Thanks for supplying another "intruder".

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2015 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 27

Glad Justin came around. This should be interesting the 2nd time around and I love that Keith is also pregnant at the same time.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2015 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 27

I love this chapter but Justin come Brian didn't get himselfpregnancy. I believe he is lashing oout fear how the first pregnancy came out. He needs time to think and I don't think Brian went this long without seeing DR. Hmp on propuse. I need more. I feel for Patrick.

Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2015 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 27

Thank you for this wonderful update! I enjoyed it, as always :)

It was intense. Poor Brian and Justin. Everything is so difficult for them right now. I should admit that I got a little irritated when Justin said to Brian that he hated him. I can imagine what Brian must have been feeling. But at the same time Justin’s behavior is understandable. He is scared out of his mind, let alone he’s feeling guilty for what has happened. It makes everything even more complicated. Brian needs Justin’s support more than anything else, so it won’t be any good if Justin continues to distress himself (and Patrick, as a result). 

Thank you once again for this chapter! Can’t wait for the next one!

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2015 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 27

What more can I say.

Thank you for posting.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2015 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 27

Hmmm...not sure how to feel about this. Hopefully things get better between them, and they learn to leave Patrick out of their discord.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2015 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 27

It seems a shame that Justin is angry and Munchkin knows it when it's Justin's fault to begin with.  Justin better make it up to both of them.  What happens if Patrick doesn't get his sista?

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2015 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 27

At least Patricj is happy about the new addition.  Great chapter.

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