Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Intruder
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2019 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 23

Lol I can see Brian diving in to save the day at work. I could picture Teds face as he was holding Patrick it made me chuckle I must say. Patrick is really wrapping them all around his fingers isn’t he. 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2015 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 23

Lol very amusing loved how Brian thought he could leave Patrick heheheheh

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2015 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 23

Nice chapter! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2015 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 23

Munchkin is causing lots of abjustment for B&J. Fun chapter.

Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2015 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 23

 Is it possble to flesh these characters out more. You've done it perfectly. Hugely enjoyable.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2015 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 23

Hmmm. I love Brian being a tentive parent. I love him and Justin being in this together and telling Justin to being confident in himself with Patrick. Patrick seems like such a good back and just wants to be with his daddies.

 

Michael everything isn't about you. Brian can't make to your party because Patrick is sick and he is doing the right thing about staying with Patrick. I don't understand why you are being a bad friend. Let Brian be a good parent. Eithan leave Justin alone. Hmm I still hoping Brian will have more kids by Justin. Please more soon !!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2015 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 23

The Munchkin seems to be adapting pretty well.  Brian is back to his normal self almost.  So Ethan's in Justin's class?  That makes it interesting, even though he doesn't stand a chance.  Brian's smart to not take Patrick to the 'surprise' party if Mikey's sick. 

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2015 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 23

Lol, little Patrick puked all over Ethan, I knew he had good taste! Brian has such wit, and I love how he says Munchkin's "concerts".  Good for Brian in getting back in shape, it help him feel like himself again. I liked how he made Michael and Ben as godfathers of Patrick. Poor Mikey is getting sick so he won't have his best friend and the girls over for his "surprise" birthday party. Maybe they could postpone it? Great chapter, I really enjoyed it, as always! :)

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