Reviews For Raising Brian
Reviewer: Jackkevin (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2018 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: harperj (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2016 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 4
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2015 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 4
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2015 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 4
I'm sorry if I sound a bit redundant, but I am still confused here. I just don't understand some of the dynamics. I know there is more story to be told and maybe with the upcoming chapters things will start to become more clear. On another note, I do think Gus is starting to ask himself all the right questions and with Justin showing up, he could very well start to put two and two together.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2015 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 3
Reviewer: Alnwick (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2015 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2015 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 3
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2015 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 3
Wow...still looking for the positive aspect of this story. So far, the girls have died, Brian has discovered he has cancer and has been given custody of all three kids, Mikey's not happy about it and basically calls his supposed best friend a complete fuck up...something tells me there is more stormy weather ahead especially when Gus figures out that Brian is really his father not his uncle...which I still am quite confused about btw.
Reviewer: hpdc (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2015 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2015 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 1
A very intriguing start. Curious to know about Brian's appointment - doesn't sound good. The Accident is a painful start but I can see possible story elements falling into place - looking forward to more.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2015 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting start I look forward to reading more
Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2015 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Jase (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2015 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
I don't mean for this to sound harsh, but you have eleven stories marked as not completed (some from way back in 2011). Why don't you finish those before posting others?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2015 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2015 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
I am so totally confused by this. Why does everything and everyone seem so negative? I hope I'm not coming off as too critical when I say this one might be a little much for some readers. So far there are no bright elements to the story and many will be put off by that. Btw...why is Gus calling him Uncle Brian and not dad? That was the part that confused me the most. |
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