Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Knocked Up
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2016 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 12

Loved your sTory so much! One of my most favorite mpreg tales.  Keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2016 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 14

What makes me laugh the most-in spite of all the evidence-Mikey,Ted and Emmet have no clue whatsoever that Brian is preggers.

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2015 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 17

Too funny! Are you sure Brian wouldn't like to have another baby so that we could read about his adventures with Justin? ;)

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2015 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 16

Wow! You really show great interaction between Lindsay and Justin.

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2015 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 14

The love between Brian and his surrogate mother is special.

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2015 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 13

Oh, I like this outtake! Hilarious interaction between Debbie and Brian at the diner. And Brian's response to Justin: what a loving line. <3

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2015 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 12

What a delightful story, which I just discovered. I really liked the interaction between Ethan and Brian; I found it quite believable in this context. On to the outtakes. :)

Reviewer: jane (Anonymous) · Date: May 12, 2015 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 12

This is so wonderful.  I have read and re-read parts over and over. Please tell me you're planning on continuing to write and finish the stories that are WIP.



Author's Response:

I might . . . we'll see.  Probably.  I enjoy writing those little "out-take scenes."  I'm so glad to know you like the story :)

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2015 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 12

This was terrific! I love the extra scenes at the end.

love



Author's Response:

They're fun, aren't they.  Maybe one of these days, I'll most a few more.

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2015 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 17

That was absolutely laugh out loud BRILLIANT. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: Alnwick (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2015 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 17

The out takes were fabulous! I love your comedy writing especially the one with the fish and chips.  Thanks for the great story and keep new ones coming.



Author's Response:

I was giggling the entire way through writing the fish & chip scene.  I'm glad it made you giggle too :)

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2015 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 17

OMG - I couldn't stop laughing....brilliant.....poor Justin. Oh, and we please just shoot Michael and get it over and done with.

Those boys certainly have a one track mind - we women are much smarter but then we don't think with our - you know what.....dicks......LOL

Author's Response:

True! 

I'm glad I was able to make you laugh.  And the idea about shotting Michael and getting it over with might not be a bad one.  LOL!

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2015 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 17

I love the new chapter Michael needs to go somewhere and sit down. Please post more soon.



Author's Response:

"Michael needs to go somewhere and sit down"

LOL!!!!!  Yes.  That would help.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2015 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 17

How can Mikey be so densed.  And Ted along with Emmett are right there with him.  Love this little peek at what happened before that adorable baby made her appearance.



Author's Response:

She is rather adorable, isn't she, despite having Brian's attitude ;)

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2015 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 17

It's funny how much of Michael's self-esteem is tied in with Brian. So a change of appearance would be devastating to his sense of self. This out take cracked me up!! LOL You'd think the boys would just consider a baby as an option, but noooo, they went for diapers as a kink! Hahaha!! :D



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it, my dear :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2015 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 17

Omg you are twisted and I love it! The boys are going to dream/nightmare over the thought of Brian and Justins's sexual play. But omg if the boys cannot keep their mouths shut the gossip queens will go manic 😔

Author's Response:

Twisted, but you love me anyway :) 

My supsicion is that even despite the kinkiness of it, the imaginging will be more of a dream than a nightmare . . . with the exception of poor Mikey.  Lol!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2015 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 17

You are so evil lol...that was fucking hilarious.

Author's Response:

Evil, oh yes.  And then some ;)

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2015 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 17

No fair, you went from Justin's quite reasonable angst to snort toothpaste out my nose humor in just a few paragraphs. See if I ever read you while brushing again.

Author's Response:

I also advise not drinking soda either ;)

Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2015 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 17

I'm laughing hysterically. No HYSTERICALLY. It's 23:44. I'm afraid I woke up all neighbours



Author's Response:

LOL!  I'd apologize to them, but laughter is always a good thing - loud and hysterical or not :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2015 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 16

Why did you have to do this to my poor heart? This chapter was fucking scary very uncomfortable for me for reasons that I can't express here in my review...otherwise, it was a very eye opening chapter. Update soon please.

Author's Response:

I'm always threatening your poor heart - I'm going to have to pay for your inevitable pace-maker :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2015 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 16

Amazing chapter, Lindsay did vindicate herself in the end but omg it's all about her

Author's Response:

That's very often the case with Lindsay, isn't it.  I say that even though I like her. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2015 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 16

Poor Brian.  He was on the floor in pain for such a long time.  Lindsay was no help at all.  Thank goodness Justin kept calm up until they were at the hospital.  I know it turned out okay in the end but it sure was scary.



Author's Response:

Poor Justin was scared to death!  Everything had been going just fine up until then and then out of the blue, Brian's in so much pain he can't even sit up!

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2015 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 16

Only 2 😩. This story just gets better with every update.



Author's Response:

Oh God, don't tempt me.  I have other stories to write!  I'm glad you like it so much that I bummed out.  I'll take it as a compliment :)

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2015 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 16

Oh gosh, poor Brian (again), I wonder what was wrong? Lindsay made it all about her and not Brian! Ack. Good thing Justin showed up! He was calm and handled the situation even though inside he was freaking out, (I do the same thing, handle it, freak out later! Lol). I hope you'll let us know what happened. I'm excited about two more chapters! No surprise, I guess, since I adore this story. <3



Author's Response:

I'm so glad!  As is probably evident, I really enjoyed writing it :)  I haven't written an out-take scene that explains what heppened - if I had I would've said that Brian was having such extreme cramps in his abdomen and lower back that he was squashing the crap out of his insides *and* the baby.  If he hadn't gone to the hospital, the baby would've died.  Brian would've been okay, but he'd have lost the baby and he and Justin would've been grief-stricken.  It was a damn good thing Justin, despite his youth, was able to calm Brian and get him to realize an ambulance needed to be called.

Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2015 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 16

May I ask a question?

I'm not going to criticise but has ANYONE EVER seen at least ONE hyperventilating person?!

This hyperventilating travells from one fanfiction story into another. I just woner, has anyone really seen it?!

PS. The story is really funny. Thank you for writing and sharing!



Author's Response:

You're very welcome!

I couldn't catch my breath during an argument in front of a judge once and fainted.  It sucked.  I defnitely should've laid down.

I saw a women have a panic attack in a restaurant once during which she hyperventilated - it was really scary, I thought she was having a seizure.

But mostly I based this scene on the scene in Season Two when Lindsay falls apart because her and Mel's wedding is getting screwed up.  Mel has her lie down on the couch and gets her a paper bag to breathe into, which I guess is supposed help someone catch their breath, but I have no idea why.  It actuallu sounds rather counterintuitive to me.

My guess is that other fanfic writers are also drawing on that scene.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2015 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 15

I think this is the best story I have ever read on here. A pitch-perfect Brian, beautifully written and very, very funny. Thank you so much for the treat. I hope there will be more.



Author's Response:

Wow!  Thank you very much!  It's a huge compliment to hear I've written Brian in-character in an mpreg fic!  No small feat :)

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2015 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 15

This story keeps getting better. Brian and Justin are working through their issues. I can't wait for Justin to set Ethan in place. Please post more soon.



Author's Response:

LOL!  Everyone over at AO3 want me to smack Ethan too - sadly (or not) I haven't written any more scenes that feature him.

Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2015 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 15

These are so hot. Keep them coming...no pun intented...or maybe a little lol



Author's Response:

Lol!  Yeah, I pulled out all the stops on this baby.  I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2015 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 14

Deb is so sweet worrying about Brian and the baby



Author's Response:

She was always going to come around eventually, but Brian needed her to do it sooner rather than later.

Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2015 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 13

Awww I'm getting all mushy with this stuff... It's funny how Brian reacts to the baby moving...and how insecure he can get...



Author's Response:

I get mushy when I write these scenes too - that's one of the reasons I like writing mpreg - it gives me an excuse to indulge my mushy side :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2015 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 15

Well you did not disappoint, this was absolutely worth waiting for :)

Author's Response:

So nice to hear! I sweated over this (literally and figuratively).  I think it's one of the best sex scenes I've written for QaF.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2015 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 15

Wow.  A HOT sexy shower scene!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2015 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 15

Omg... *fans self* Like Brian says sometimes, that was hot. ;) Lol, trust these two to get very creative. Looking forward to the next out take! :)



Author's Response:

LOL!  I'm glad you approve.  I put my all into that one.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2015 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 14

*snap snap* I guess Brian told Debbie a thing or two lol. This just further shows how little the family really knows him.

Author's Response:

Yes, Deb needed a smack down - both in this story and in the show.

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2015 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 14

Good chapter! Can't wait to see the new PWP chapter.

Author's Response:

I just posted it :)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2015 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 14

Glad to hear the weather is lousy wherever you are so we get more fun glimpses into our knocked up Brian's life. TAG



Author's Response:

LOL!  Sadly (or not), it is starting to get better . . .

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2015 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 14

Love these little bits that we didn't get to see.  Can you straighten Mikey out while you're doing these?

 



Author's Response:

I've written one that does that - at least as far as Mikey is capable of being straightened out :)

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2015 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 14

LOL!! I'm loving these outtakes. I cracked up with Debbie's description of Brian getting into the car like a flounder. Poor guy, Lol. Could you write a scene when some in the know (besides Debbie and Justin) fuss over him too? From what I'm remembering, doesn't Ted and Emmett know too? <3 



Author's Response:

Ted and Emmett don't find out until the unveiling in Chapter 12, but I've written a gap-filler from Ted's POV in which he *almost* figures it out.

Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2015 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 13

Cute chapter! I was sort of disappointed that we didn't see more of Brian and Justin's time together as Brian carried their child so I'm glad you are adding moments between them.



Author's Response:

You'll see another one tomorrow that I think you - and everyone else - will enjoy ;)

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2015 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 13

I'm not sure if this seemed so good because it was unexpected or if it just is SO good. Either way Thankyou .. I'm definitely not ready to let this story go.



Author's Response:

Apparently neither am I!  I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2015 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 13

thank god for rainy days!  It´s a sad time with no more new chapters of this stunning story, I frankly admit:I´m an addict. Give me more - I love it!



Author's Response:

I have a few more scenes that I'll be posting every day until they run out.  I love addicts, btw - of my stories I mean, not crack ;)

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2015 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 13

I like Brian's answer about 2 heartbeats.

Author's Response:

It's a teeny tiny bit sappy - but then again Brian is pregnant :)

Reviewer: qafqueenbee (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2015 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 13

In chapter 12 Brian had given birth, now he"s still pregant in chapter 13.



Author's Response:

These are little take-out pieces - they're like missing scenes.  You don't have to read them to understand the story, itself, which is chapters 1-12.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2015 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 13

This was delightful.  Poor Brian!  At least he told Justin what he was feeling even if he didn't mean to.

 



Author's Response:

Can you imagine what listening to that phone call felt like?  Poor guy!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2015 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 13

Oh this is good..I like getting to see those in between moments. But when is Gus going to find out about his little sister?

Author's Response:

Ah good question.  I hadn't thought about that . . . we'll see if I can come up with something.  I the meantime, enjoy the gap-fillers - especially tomorrow's ;)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2015 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 13

I didn't think it was sappy I thought it was hilarious in the diner I actually lol because I had bought some shiitake mushrooms today and my husband thought I'd said shitty mushrooms!

Author's Response:

LOL!!  Seriously?  Omg, that's so hilarious.  Btw, thanks for reminding me that "shiitake" has two "i"s

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2015 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 13

Brilliant! Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

You're very welcome :D

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2015 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 13

I so love this story!! Thank you for the additional chapters. Can I say that I'm thankful for the bad weather? Lol, sorry, but yeah. ;) Hope all is well there. xo



Author's Response:

Yes, everything's fine, if buried in snow.  I love snow but NOT IN MARCH! I'm so ready for spring.  But in the meantime, I'm having fun entertaining myself with writing gap-fillers.  I'm glad you enjoyed this one :)

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2015 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 13

yay!!! I hate the snow my self, just got 10", the forecast was for 3-6. And still snowing.  On the upside you have given us more! Yay! 



Author's Response:

At least we're not in Boston!  And yes, I've written you guys a few little gap-fillers :)

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2015 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 13

Oh I love this story and I love Brian Emotinal.



Author's Response:

I just couldn't resist adding just a couple more scenes . . . .  :)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2015 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 4

I get the feeling Brian's little prank he's planning for the Bon voyage party is gonna backfire . . . Hehehe. TAG.



Author's Response:

Brian is a world-class trouble maker ;)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2015 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 4

I thought you said this wasn't going to be Uber angsty:/....Brian and Justin REALLY need to talk and soon. I will give Sunshine credit for starting to put two and two together.

Author's Response:

You're about to give little Sunshine even more credit . . . not with the chapter I just posted but soon :)

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2015 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 4

Okay I'm waiting for Justin and Brian to see eachother. I want ethan away from Justin. Justin isn't going with Ethan and I'm so glad Michael isn't aroundeither. please post more soon.



Author's Response:

I just posted the newest chapter . . . and yes, I'm keeping you guys in suspense for just a little bit longer ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2015 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 4

Brian pissing over the artwork was not my favorite episode.  Hopefully when Justin sees Brian he'll get over whatever he feels Ethan has for him.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that is a very hard scene to watch.  Of course, Brian's sober in this version because he's pregnant, but I'm hoping he was really really drunk in the original.  It makes it a little less awful.

Reviewer: chaval (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2015 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 4

Arrêter un chapitre comme ça, c'est de la torture ! Maggie Maybe, tu es une sadique.



Author's Response:

It's true, I confess ;)

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2015 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 3

I'm curious about the reaction of Justin. Will he believe that Brian is pregnant and is he staying. Hopefully he send Ethan away.
Can't wait for your next chapter.



Author's Response:

I just posted chapter five . . . . you'll have to wait a little longer for Justin's reaction, but not too long.

Reviewer: chaval (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2015 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 3

J'ai envie de frapper Justin derrière la tête, et pourtant je sais qu'il n'est pas au courant de la grossesse de Brian. Mais j'en ai quand même envie !



Author's Response:

I know it is tempting.  But Brian kept Sunshine in the dark.  He could've said something, and Justin never would've left.

Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2015 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hi! That's nice, start this new story.I do not mind, whether or not mpreg.

Last mpreg I read the Prego stud of Tagsit, which is crazy funny.

What Brian wants to achieve with this pillow, it will be over and Justin will it all the better to ignore.

I love our boys and I know that it would be boring to solve everything immediately, so I patiently read and enjoy the plot and resolution of the situation.

Orhida   



Author's Response:

I LOVE "Prego Stud"!  So much fun!  I was totally addicted to it while Tag was posting.

The last thing I want to do is bore my readers, but that means you guys are going to have to hang on for just a little longer ;)

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2015 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 3

I think Brian should just skip the cushion! That is bound to backfire on him at some point.  I do like the idea of Justin finding out, but Brian has to be honest with him, Justin will be crushed if the baby is adopted.  Look forward to what happens next. 



Author's Response:

Yes, he should skip the cushion, but we know Brian likes being a jerk sometimes - plus he's hormonal and thus even crazier than usual ;)

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2015 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hi I love the chapter  but I'm still sad Brian because has no one and Justin has everyone. I'm waiting for Justin to get away from Ethan. I don't think Ethan is any better for Justin. Deb didn't ever really ask what is going on with Brian. Please post more more soon. I need Brian and Justin to start working to get back together before Brian has the baby or babies.

 

How can Brian hide the pregnacy for four months?



Author's Response:

He's being as crafty as possible - and he's also starting to hide at home, poor guy :(  But he can't hide it forever.

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2015 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 3

Well that was fun! Deb's POV very interesting I guess she'll be in for a shock? Would pay to see both her and Mikey's faces when the truth comes out lol. I'm rather concerned about Justin and what'll happen when he sees Brian. Not looking forward to that fall out. Looking forward to more. Oh and I didn't think you were bashing Justin I think his reaction would be an honest one if MPREG could really happen.... 

:)

 

 



Author's Response:

Seriously!  Brian pregnant!  And keeping the baby!   Justin can be forgiven for being more than a little skeptical.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2015 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 3

Ouch that was painful my friend. I'm not sure there is a point of return from here but I'll stick around to find out ;)

Author's Response:

I hope so :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2015 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 3

You're not going to let Justin leave are you?  Want to read moooooore, pleasse.



Author's Response:

I just posted chapter five :)

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2015 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 3

This is like eating that third slice of pie, you want it, but it's making you uncomfortable at the same time!

When is the fourth slice coming? It can't be soon enough.

Author's Response:

LOL!  I love the analogy.

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2015 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 2

So very intrigued by this. I love a good Mpreg and when it's Brian that is expecting well that is just gravy IMO. Looking forward to the next chapter as I have a feeling it's gonna be classic Brian Kinney in seeing Justin again. LOL looking forward to more.

Well done!!

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you're enjoying it.  And, yes, you can expect some classic Brian Kinney :)

I just posted chapter three.

Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2015 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is an interesting story, You got me hooked! Very well written, I actually enjoy the language. Thanks and go on!



Author's Response:

I'm glad I've got you hooked :)  Just posted chapter three . . .

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2015 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

I understand tention and I can't wait for the new chapter. I can't believe Justin won't want to make sure Lindsay wasn't lying about Brian. I always felt Brian was bitter too. I'm just hopping Justin isn't with Ethan long, I was never an ethan fan so it's hard to read them together. Please  keep going.



Author's Response:

Don't worry - I just posted chapter three.  This story is writing itself :)

I agree with you - I think both Brian and Justin were bitter after the break-up although, of course, Brian tried to hide it.  As for Ethan . . . you'll see that I give his POV in chapter four.  It's hard for me to write about him and Justin because Justin leaving Brian broke my heart. But then again, I think it needed to happen so they could move forward.

Reviewer: kellankyle (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2015 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ouch…I totally meant "dignity". I'm forgetting words in my advanced age. *facepalm*

Normal childbirth is pretty messy, but "crapping out a baby" would just be, umm… pretty shitty. *g*

Next chapter please. :D

P.S. I love angst…but please don't hurt us! :)

Author's Response:

Integrity works too - certainly as far as characterization (and basic anatomy) is concerned!

I promise not to hurt you guys too much . . . just a little teeny weeny bit.  What fun is a story (particularly an mpreg) without at least a little tension and suspense?  All that matters is that we know they end up together in the end - which they do :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2015 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 2

Interesting premise. Happy but a little surprised Brian would want to keep the baby. I do hope this doesn't wind up as a 'let's bash/anti-Justin' story. Will reserve my judgment for now. He acted like a little shit in the first chapter. Personally I don't think he would act that way, but maybe he has his reasons. Will be interested  to see where this goes.



Author's Response:

This is definitely not going to be a bashing Justin story!  I would never bash *any* QaF character, and I don't read fics that do.  Especially Justin bashing!  No, I'm just sticking with canon.  After Justin first left Brian for Ethan he was pretty bitter about Brian - he makes it clear in a number of different episodes. Also, remember Brian was pretty shitty to Justin before he left.  Plus, Justin can be forgiven for not believing something as absolutely crazy as Brian being pregnant!  Also, what's a story without a little bit of angst?  Fluffy ain't my thing . . . actually that's not entirely true.  My story "A Feeling of Forever" is pretty fluffy . . .

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2015 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 2

I love the Chapter but I'm not impressed withJustin at this point. Wouls he really not want to see if Brian is Pregnant? I feel for Brian. Oh than you for writing Brian Menpreg because there aren't a lot. I hope you plan future stories where Brian Pregnant. Please post more Soon.



Author's Response:

You can count on another chapter this afternoon :)  As I said to Anon, I'm trying to stick to canon, and Justin was pretty bitter after he left Brian.  Also, there needs to be some tension in a story or it's bboorriinngg.

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2015 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 2

Oh man, poor Brian. This is so IC, although I'm wondering about his agreement with the baby. It's good that he at least told Lindsay. It's going to be interesting how Brian handles his appearance in public. I'm enjoying this story. :)



Author's Response:

Great, I'm so glad!  And thank you for the IC praise. The fun of writing mpreg is to keep the guys in-character as much as possible.  It's quite a challenge under the circumstances!

Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2015 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 2

I'm really enjoying this and can't wait to see how it unfolds. There aren't many well-written Mpreg Brian fics out there so I'm looking forward to the rest of this. :)



Author's Response:

I love love LOVE Brian mpreg.  It's so much fun imagining what Brian of all people would be like preggers and how he'd handle it.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2015 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 2

I'm not sure I like this, as it doesn't fit in how I like the guys to be towards each other, but I came back for this chapter, and am ready to read the next.

Author's Response:

Patience, young grasshopper, patience :)

Reviewer: kellankyle (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2015 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 2

Thank you so much for allowing Brian to retain his integrity by not allowing him to have an ass birth. That would hurt…a lot.

I can't wait for the next chapter! :-D

Author's Response:

Integrity? How about his dignity, poor guy! Ah, ass birth. The bane of all mpreg. Always gotta nip that possibility in the bud ASAP. The images are just wrong, wrong, wrong.  :P

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2015 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 2

Love this!  More soon please😃



Author's Response:

Look for the next chapter tomorrow.  I'm so glad you like it :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2015 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 2

Not sure what to think just yet...I need to read a couple more chapters before I can give a really honest opinion.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2015 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 2

Oh boy.  I hope Brian does show up at the party.  Justin is being such a dick.



Author's Response:

Well, we know Brian has a not-very-nice streak :)

Reviewer: chaval (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2015 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 2

Je suis restée perplexe en lisant le premier chapitre. Mais je dois dire que celui-ci me donne vraiment envie de lire la suite. Lindsay a souvent le mauvais rôle dans les fanfic, je suis plutôt satisfaite qu'elle soit un vrai soutien pour Brian dans cette histoire. 



Author's Response:

I'm actually one of those (sadly) rare people that likes Lindsay and her friendship with Brian.  He'd be alone in this story (at least so far) if he hadn't told her his secret.  But as usual, she's torn between her loyality to Brian and her support of Justin following his dreams (even if they're with another man).  In this story, though, she falls on Brian's side.  She wants Justin to find out about the pregnancy and stay in Pittsburgh.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2015 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

Fun premise. More, please! TAG



Author's Response:

Just posted the next chapter. Enjoy :)

Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2015 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

Love it!

How could I miss it?!

 

PS. Hmmm... I hope Justin will stay



Author's Response:

I'm glad it hooked you right off the bat.  I hope very much you'll enjoy the rest :)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2015 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great start. Next chapter, please !!

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Just posted chapter two.  Enjoy :)

Reviewer: chaval (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2015 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

Très bon début.



Author's Response:

Merci :)

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2015 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi I love the start. Is Justin really going to leave without seeing Briann making sure for himself. I'm hoping Justin won't stay with Ethan long. What changes will happen with Brian? Please post more soon.



Author's Response:

I just posted chapter two . . . and as for your wish list?  You'll just have to keep reading to find out what happens :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2015 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting start.  Can't wait to see where this goes and why Lindsay is lookng so bad.



Author's Response:

Poor Lindsay is Brian's secretkeeper . . . and as usual he's not making things easy :)

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2015 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh my, now I'm intrigued but not liking Justin's attitude. Poor Brian! And what's up with Lindsay's appearance? Can't wait to find out what happens next! :)



Author's Response:

I just posted the next chapter.  I'm very happy I managed to intrigue you :)

Reviewer: kellankyle (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2015 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow Maggie…you really know how to break a condom. I loved it and can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Remember, there's always Brian's POV of that night to . . . uhm . . . "explore."  Stay posted :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2015 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Okay, I'm gonna need to read more.  The Brian is pregnant I understand, the Justin planning to run off with Ethan I'm not sure I like.  It's the fact that Lindsay is so upset that has me wanting to know where you are going with this tale.  Hurry with another chapter, please!



Author's Response:

I just posted chapter two, which answers at least one of your questions :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2015 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

*sigh* Do we have to take this Uber angsty ride yet again? It seems like we have Justin leaves Brian fics stacked up to the ceiling right now...however, I am intrigued to see if Justin will have the balls to confront Brian about the situation. ;) update soon.

Author's Response:

But were those others written by me?  That's the big question.  LOL!  There may be some similar elements - not denying that - but this fic isn't Uber Angsty.  It's just angsty with a small "a"  Do not despair in 1.8K words.  Give it a chance.

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