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QAF Fanfiction - Brian and Justin - SSL Encrypted
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Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2015 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Surprise! I’m Back…

Hi hun!! Just re-read this one. (and will probably re-read others as well) Any chance of an update soon? 

Talk about massive manipulations! I've read on other fics where Micheal has done similar things as this, but I'm loving your take on it. where brian has really become more vulnerable, where Deb actually sees Michael in a differenct light. 

Would love to see what happens next. How's Ben? How do the others react? does michael try anything further? so many questions! :)


Author's Response: I really loved this one too. I didn't plan on it being a long fic when I started, but then I got such a great response so now I need to continue it. Just like all my other WIP'S, so many stories, and I'm so behind... But I'll try and get working on it this month, or next, it's already late August... Thanks for all your wonderful comments and support... Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2015 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Surprise! I’m Back…

This is such a heartwarming continuation of the BJ story! And, yes, it's great to see Michael get his comeuppance.

Can't wait to see how this story progresses. Any idea when you'll post chapter 3?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a great comment, it always makes me happy knowing other enjoy my writing. Yes, it is nice to finally see Michael get what's long overdue... I know I need to work on the next chapter. I haven't had time to get back to this one, but I'll up it on my list... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2015 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Surprise! I’m Back…

Great job with the new chapter. I am glad you decided to continue the story. Poor Debbie, finally seeing Michael for what he is, about time though. Just slight confusion, was Ben there, did he hear what Michael said about him and Brian getting together once Ben was gone? If so, poor Ben. And what is up with the girls? Can't they ever get anything right between the two of them? I look forward to your "TBC" :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad you're enjoying my fic. Yes, its about time Deb owned up, seeing what a selfish, manipulative bastard Michael is. But being his mother, will she really let him flounder on his own? What did Ben hear, and when did he hear it? Hmm, I have some work to do in the next chapter. What to do? The girls, well at least they finally realized that their marriage is over, that's something. Right now they're both focusing on their own personal lives, that's why the agreed to let Brian raise a teenage Gus. Right or wrong, it think its what's best for Gus, Brian and Justin. They'll make a strong family unit, just what they all need at this time in their lives... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: puanani (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2015 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ A Valentine’s Day to Remember...

Oh yeah the second chapter was good.  As much as I loved it Debbie still  needs a

awakening herself how she treated Brian to pay his way to a family that suppose

to take care of him when his own family was bad.  They just used him.  I am so loving

your chapter keep it up.  Poor Ben did he sleep through all that yelling.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, Deb's just beginning to see all the damage she's caused in both Michael and Brian's lives. But will she repent? She's never been very good at accepting her share of the blame. Poor Ben indeed, I'll have to think about where his character is going, and if he supports Michael or not. I'm so glad you're loving my story... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2015 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Surprise! I’m Back…

Hi I love the update and I'm so proud of Brian FOR putting Michael in his place and I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It was a long time coming... Michael so deserved the smack-down, he's not really Brian's friend if he doesn't care about Brian's feelings... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Alnwick (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2015 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~ A Valentine’s Day to Remember...

Nice to see that Gus grew up so well.  


Author's Response: Yes he really is a great kid, almost young man... I wonder how scary that is for Brian... He, he, he... Later ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2015 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Surprise! I’m Back…

Ouch...Michael had it coming though, he did the worst thing anyone could do to a friend.

Author's Response: For once Brian finally let Michael have it. It really is the worst possible thing he could do, plotting and planning to hurt him so deeply... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2015 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Surprise! I’m Back…

Oh I am so happy you've decided to continue this. Love it and especially love Brian kicking Mikey out of his Life. Surprised at Deb. I'm sure this won't be the last we see of Mikey. Can't wait for more as always.


Author's Response: Thanks so much! Writing this fic with all these emotional issues is therapeutic, its always good to get your rage out on Mikey... He so deserves it... Finally Deb seeing Michael's true-self, she really owes Brian an apology for all that she's blamed him for over the years... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2015 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Surprise! I’m Back…

Like the kitties!

Author's Response: Thanks! They're my sisters cats, making their fictional debut... He, he, he... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2015 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Surprise! I’m Back…

This was wonderful.
Brian locking Justin in the bathroom to protect him, so funny.
His reaction to his new pets, pure Brian.
Telling Michael off, priceless.
Michael, expecting that what he did was no big deal, typical Michael. Then asking Brian for more money, the man is totally oblivious to how much he has hurt his 'best friend'.
I feel bad for Debbie, it hurts to realize that everything you did for someone meant nothing in the end.
Great writing.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I know a protective Brian is so adorable, and once he gets over the shock of being a new pet parent he'll be great at that too... I know it's hard for Debbie to face the hard cold facts that Michael has intentionally harmed those that he claims to love, but he's always been a selfish prick... And Brian has finally been pushed too far, hurt too deeply and he's finally lost all sympathy for Michael... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2015 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Surprise! I’m Back…

More please. I just love an anti Mikey story!  Love Gus and that he lives with Brian. 

Author's Response: Yes, I promise come is coming... I'm having fun writing a teenage Gus, and Brian as a full time parent. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2015 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Surprise! I’m Back…

I really am enjoying this story, Brian finally the tells Mikey off, it's about time, his whine and being so rude and self-centered I can't stand the charactor, he has no redeeming values. As much as I love this story I really hope you'll finish "Christmas Presents" and "The offer still stands", they are both so good and I check daily to see if you have added a chapter.   

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I know what you mean about Michael being so rude and self-centered, obviously I really hate his character as well... I'm working on Christmas presents, and I posted a new chapter of The Offer Still Stands last week, I think? It makes me so happy knowing that you're enjoying my writing. I appreciate all the positive feedback... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: taurus (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2015 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Surprise! I’m Back…

More please. Nothing but LOVE.

Author's Response: Yes, I'll be writing more, and there's no need to worry, it's always all about the love in my fics... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2015 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Surprise! I’m Back…

I just had to read this once again.  I love it so much.  I do feel sorry for Ben and his medical bills.  It's not his fault his husbands a jerk.  What do you have planned for the next chapter?

Author's Response: Thanks, that makes me feel so special... Yes, poor Ben. But Brian probably will go and help him out financially, he just won't be giving Michael any cash. He really just doesn't trust him anymore. I'm thinking, that they take Gus with them when they go to New York to pack Justin's things. Then they spend the next year getting reacquainted with one another, learning how they've both matured over the last decade and maybe even have a very small wedding and make it all nice and legal. Thanks for all the wonderful and supportive comments, they really do keep me inspired to write more... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2015 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Surprise! I’m Back…

Great chapter, kind of sad, kind of happy.  Can't wait to see what happens next.  Bill

Author's Response: Yes I know what you mean, and I'm glad I continued it. Chapter one was really a departure from my usual writing, it really pulled on your heartstrings. So now I'm able to be ridiculous romance in the future chapters... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2015 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Surprise! I’m Back…

Love this.  Mostly love the TBC!!!  Adore the kitties and Mikey finally getting what he deserves.  Thank you!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm all about the love, as I know, you know... The kitties actually exist, they're my sister Patty's cats right down to their coloring and personalities... And yes finally Michael gets what he deserves... Thanks Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: jax (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2015 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Surprise! I’m Back…

As much as I like this story, I hope the ending is near so there could be more offer still stands and christmas presents update. I hope in this story that Michael is not as delusional and when BJ get married he really starts feeling pain and maybe regret his actions.

Author's Response: I know I have a lot of fics that need to be updated, and I really am planning to continue them... I appreciate your patience and understanding. I just have so many ideas floating around in my brain, that I need to get write... I'll try not to stretch this one out and update the other more often... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: puanani (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2015 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ A Valentine’s Day to Remember...

please write more this is a beautiful homecoming.  Please do a Michael hater in front of

his mommy.  Have them shock him and have their lives without the  novotny's .

I liked a very matured Gus whom loves his dad,

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying this story. I'm already working on the next chapter, and Michael is about to receive a major smackdown... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2015 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~ A Valentine’s Day to Remember...

Hi Kathleen,


I really have to say I really love this story and I have to agree I would really love another chapter to this story.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so happy everyone is loving this fic... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2015 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~ A Valentine’s Day to Remember...

What an amazing story. I love it. Please write one more chapter. I would love to see Mickey drop dead from shock seeing them together.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yep... Coming right up, I've decided to continue this one... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2015 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~ A Valentine’s Day to Remember...

Really enjoyed this one, Kathleen. I like how Gus was the one to bring them back together. Stubborn men!  Thank you for posting - and for the photos as well. I know how time consuming that can be! *Hugs* ~Kim

Author's Response: Thanks so much Kim! You know me I love to add the pics, even though sometimes it drives me crazy. Just a thought is there anyway we could have them be alphabetized? Or maybe even be able to create folders for each stories pics? I have so many posted that I feel like I'm loosing my eye sight search for them once there posted... Hugs you back, and Happy Valentine's Day! ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: soirsagrey (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2015 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~ A Valentine’s Day to Remember...

awsome and aaaaamazing (to quote Brian), simply beautiful. This story gave me goosebump and tears all in one. This is one of THE most wonderfully written stories I ever read. To me you deserve a blue ribbon straightaway. This goes on my list of favourites immediately.

I think it would be a great first chapter to a longer story. I would love to say how Brian and Justin get their revenge on Lindsay and Michael. Loved the way you incorporated Gus into this story. The love Gus has for his father was so well portrayed. I love Gus to pieces.

Thank you once again for an amazingly beautiful story and I look forward to the next piece you write.

Happy valentine,



Author's Response: Awsome and aaaaamazing Wow! Just Wow! Thank you so much, that really means a lot to me... Squeeze! Yes a follow up chapter is now on my must do list, revenge will be so sweet, and so deserved... I love Gus too, although a teenage Gus is a new character for me. But change is good... I kind of had that goosebumps thing going on when I read it through after it was completed, myself... Thanks again Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: NightRose (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2015 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ A Valentine’s Day to Remember...

I don't normally read fics when Brian and Justin have been apart for so long but I decided to give this a try and i'm so glad i did.

This is AMAZING and so lovely you had me crying.

Like Brian I really want to kill both Michael and Lindsay for what they've done but thanks to Gus things are finally the was they should of been all along.

P.S. This would be a really good carry on story.

Author's Response: Oh I'm totally with you, I have a hard time reading stories with them apart for very long, and I really, really hard time when they're with other lovers... I'm a true shipper, so it's kind of funny that I wrote an angst fic, I must be spreading my wings a little. I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. I've has such positive response that I just might have to start another chapter... Again Thanks Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2015 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ A Valentine’s Day to Remember...

Lovely. I always wanted to believe that after season 5 the boys would find their way back to one another however long it took. Only one other thing to say - dealing with my own petty, spiteful family member, who tells lies to get want she wants, I want to kill Mikey for adding to the time they spent apart.

Author's Response: I truly believe that their love is so strong that they'll always find they're way back into each other arms... Sometime it just takes longer than others, but my stories always end with a reunion, and reunion sex... I'm a total romantic... I'm so sorry that you have to put up with a real Mikey in your family, at least in fanfiction we can always torture him in some ungodly way... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2015 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ A Valentine’s Day to Remember...

great story i love the mikey bashing and he & lindsey should be told stay away kim

Author's Response: Thanks Kim, I so agree Michael and Lindsay need to be put in there place... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

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