Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2015 08:13 PM · On: Baby It's Cold Outside

Thank you for this cute, fun read. *Hugs* -Mandi

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2015 04:56 PM · On: Baby It's Cold Outside

Cute story.  Nice to see the playful side of B&J

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2015 01:34 AM · On: Baby It's Cold Outside

Cute!

Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2015 12:07 AM · On: Baby It's Cold Outside

lol love it    kim

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2015 10:47 PM · On: Baby It's Cold Outside

It is amusing, and I get that you are going for a short response to a prompt. I am biased, because I much prefer more detailed pieces, but for a light laugh this is entertaining. I think you could have edited out the first hundred words at least, so that there was more space and description for the sex. But I am more into one-shots/multi-chapters, so that is just me. 

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2015 08:55 PM · On: Baby It's Cold Outside

This is wonderful :) I can always count on you to deliver us something humorously sweet with just enough heat to leave us wanting more. ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2015 08:33 PM · On: Baby It's Cold Outside

Nicely done.  I can hear them singing the song.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I enjoyed writing this a lot. 

Huge Hugs xx

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