Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Third Lesson
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2015 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

Like the way you turned this around.  Wouldn't mind reading more about Justin

managing a wheelchair.

 

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2015 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

On the whole, a steady story, although I felt the narrative lacked depth in some places. The "I love you" part didn't really grab me as much as I'd have hoped, particularly for a story that strays away from the Canon. That said, I did like Justin's optimism even after learning he was paralyzed; that sounded very much like him. Your portraya of Brian I felt required much more development, particularly building up to the dramatic "I love you". But the plot is interesting, and I am glad you had a shot at it. 

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2015 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

very nice story :) I am glad that Justin is okay. :)

Reviewer: taurus (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2015 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

Good start. I always like the loving Brian. Please continue.

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2015 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

Tears and smiles! That was good.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2015 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

:) 

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