Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2015 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

So sweet and so very Brian!  Loved this!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2015 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

What a delightful look at Justin's first Christmas without his family.  You write it so well.

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2015 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

In general, I liked this. The ending might have been a little flat for me- in that you could have included some more introspection from Justin. That might just be personal preference, as I like one-shots where the character really goes deep into themselves. I did like this plot very much; I find that a lot of writers seem to miss the gold mine of plot ideas from the Canon itself, and you made up for that. Of course, Justin's transition into the family wasn't going to be easy and it makes perfect sense he would miss his parents. The reader is rightly moved to indignation with that scene you conjured up of Justin worrying that Craig would take away Molly's present because it came from Justin. Very nice touch there indeed- well done. What is also significant is Brian offering comfort to Justin; even at these earlier stages in canon, his gut reaction was to empathise before he reverted back to pretending he was hard as nails. He was definitely the right character to cheer Justin up. So, in future stories, don't shy away from adding a little more development here or there. That said, I liked reading this. 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2015 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

sweet story, very enjoyable.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2015 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

What a wonderfully sweet and poignant story we sometimes forget that Justin was only just 17 and he had been so loved before. Great insight into that part 👍👏

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2015 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

I enjoyed your story and the gentle reminder to cherish what you do have.

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