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Reviews For You Are My Sunshine: A QAf Fan Fiction

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2014 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 5: Perfectly Fine

I love Brian! He'll work his tail off to get Justin's art out there. I wouldn't want to be Justin's manager! Brian wants revenge!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2014 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 5: Perfectly Fine

What does Brian plan to do and will Justin appreciate it? Nicely done chapter.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2014 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 5: Perfectly Fine

Brian although his intentions were good, has placed both he and Justin in a sticky situation...one that Justin might not take too kindly to. He has to realize though that Brian did the right thing and what was in his best interest.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2014 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 4: Wanna Dance?

Love this chapter. A protective Brian! A nosy Michael. A snarky Ted. Emmett is adorable, love his concern. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2014 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 4: Wanna Dance?

Mikey is asking for trouble trying to pry...it's best if he lets Justin reveal it when he's ready.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2014 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 4: Wanna Dance?

That was certainly a short chapter, but I don't think I'm allowed to say that to anyone since some of my fics are even shorter. LOL

It's good that the gang seem to have realized something is wrong without Justin having to relive the event by telling them at Babylon.

"really just a set up chapter until I can think of what to do next" I'm not sure if you are saying here you don't know where your fic is heading, and hopefully I'm wrong, but I would like to, maybe, offer you some advice. When I wrote my first multi-chapter fic I had a beta called AL and I must say she gave me some advice that I really appreciated and still follow. She told me to have the story completed before publishing it, even if it is just plotted out. I don't want to interfere here; I'm just trying to hand on what helped me. I think anyone who publishes their first fic as a multi-chapter fic is very brave. Maybe I've totally got it wrong and you are already an accomplished author of fiction. Sorry if I have. I am really enjoying your fic so I look forward to wherever you take us.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 3: What happened in New York?

Poor Justin.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 3: What happened in New York?

Brian really made a bg leap, though I'm sure it was a correct one. How are you planning to fix this? Will he see a shrink? Brian is soooo understanding. I love it.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 3: What happened in New York?

Hmmm so we your loyal readers were right...the question is what happens now that Brian knows?

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2014 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 3: What happened in New York?

OOO! i AM SO SORRY i WAS RIGHT. POOR JUSTINE NOW HE WILL REALLY NEED BRIAN TO OVERCOME THIS TRADEGY.

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 3: What happened in New York?

I had a feeling this what was happened. You could have developed this a little more in places, given the subject matter. It will be interesting to see how Justin deals with this.

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 1: Welcome Back, Sunshine

Interesting. Dialogue very much in character here. Wonder what happens next.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 3: What happened in New York?

Oh dear poor Justin he has been raped and now he has PSTD

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 3: What happened in New York?

I'm relieved Brian knows what happened, but I'm still very frightened for Justin. At least Brian is somewhat equipped to help Justin through this traumatic event and he is able to reassure Justin it wasn't his fault.

Thank you for the speedy update.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2014 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 3: What happened in New York?

:(

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 2: Just Relax

Oh dear poor Justin and Brian

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2014 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 2: Just Relax

he was raped?! not telling brian, big big mistake.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 2: Just Relax

Okay. There was a clue in there somewhere. Don't tell me his manager took advantage of him. Will he tell his mother or will Brian find out first.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 1: Welcome Back, Sunshine

Sooooo. What happened? I'm on the edge of my seat here.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 2: Just Relax

Okay so what happened to Sunshine? Did his manger arrange a gang rape?

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 2: Just Relax

Oh no, this doesn't sound good. I'm surprised Brian didn't pushed Justin more to reveal what actually happened, as I'm sure he doesn't believe him when he says he is just tired.

If you have more chapters already written can you please update soon. Thanks. I know, I can be pushy sometimes. LOL

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 1: Welcome Back, Sunshine

Welcome to MW, I hope you enjoy it here.

You already have me intrigued as to what happen to Justin. It sounds like he might have gotten away from Sap, but now his manager has done the same thing to him. I really hope Justin isn't positive. Fingers crossed.

I'm glad I have two chapters and I can read on; thank you for such a quick update.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 2: Just Relax

Hmmm... now we have a hint....

Great start!!

Reviewer: Ness (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2014 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 1: Welcome Back, Sunshine

Woo hoo! Can't wait to find out!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2014 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 1: Welcome Back, Sunshine

I am soooo hoping you update soon because I just have to know what happened to Justin during his stay in New York.

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2014 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 1: Welcome Back, Sunshine

OH oH !! DRUGGED, RAPED, CONTACTED HIV. What is the big secret and why is he home? You have peaked my interest on this one. Should be fun finding out.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2014 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 1: Welcome Back, Sunshine

Glad to see you here on MW! TAG

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2014 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 1: Welcome Back, Sunshine

Wecome to Midnight Whispers! Thanks for posting your story on here. Intriguing beginning; I love a little angst and mystery mixed in with the romance.:) I'll be looking forward to reading the rest of this.

And if you need any help of any kind, please don't hesitate to let Bob or me know. And if you desire a banner to be made, we have a list of talented banner makers ready to help you.;) Thanks again for joining the site, and for posting. *Hugs* ~Kim

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