Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2017 09:08 AM · On: It Began

Kiss me like you never see me again.  that was powerful.   i'm enjoying the humor.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2017 08:58 AM · On: It Begins

You know that's one thing i never thought about.   i mean i watch TWD all the time and i never really thought about the air smelling of death.    Rick and his crew never acted that way.   Loving the humor in this, when do they get Brian?  God i hope they get Brian, Justin can't always be the victim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2016 10:00 PM · On: It Ends

Goodness, you had me scared. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2016 09:55 PM · On: It Falls

Okay is Brian next on the Zombie list?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2016 09:52 PM · On: It Rises


Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2016 09:46 PM · On: It Continues

Oh no!  What does that mean for Justin?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2016 09:40 PM · On: It Stills

There's dye and there's dying.  At least we know Ben and Hunter are still with us.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2016 09:30 PM · On: It Moves Forward

Well, we know what happened to Todd.  How's it going.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2016 09:26 PM · On: It Began

Wow!  Hope they make it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2016 09:20 PM · On: It Begins

I'm not a big fan of Zombies.  However I am a fan of your stories.  Hope they find Deb and the family at the diner.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2016 06:33 PM · On: It Ends

I liked it.  As I was reading, I was hoping that  that one of the guys was only having a bad dream. Great job and sooo happy you decided to complete this fic.

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2016 01:43 AM · On: It Begins

Loved the story. I love zombies and QAF so I couldn't help but love this. Great end too. Thanks.

Reviewer: Manado (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2014 10:50 AM · On: It Moves Forward

Still curious what you have in store for Brian and Justin, I just wish that they all are  survivors! lols 

Author's Response:

You shall soon find out. ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Manado (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2014 10:42 AM · On: It Began

God it's awesome! I'm currently watching the walkingdead  and now you have this story uploaded on the site! perfection!!!! I'm a fan of Z-movies/shows/stories haha 

thanks for sharing, now i'm continue reading the next chapters! 

Author's Response:

Hi Dony, I am happy you are reading my story. I too am a walking dead fan, practically my entire family watches it, including Grandfather LOL. I hope you continue to read and enjoy it. *Hugs* -Mandi

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2014 06:31 AM · On: It Ends

Well, that was fun.....LOL Love conquers all. And strangely enough it reminds me of a game I used to play with my grandson - Plants vs Zombies. Jaak had a fascination with exploding zombies - probably a boy thing.....LOL

Author's Response:

Hello Monica, I am glad you considered this a fun read. That makes me smile :) LOL yes, boys love things exploding. I prefer the more romantic side of zombies, they deserve love too. :P Thank you for reading and reviewing. *Hugs* -Mandi

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2014 07:10 PM · On: It Ends


Author's Response:

I am happy that you enjoyed this one. Thank you kindly for reading and reviewing. *Big Hugs* -Mandi

Reviewer: GuitarsAndPoetry (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2014 02:39 PM · On: It Ends

I adored this ending! So clever.;) thank you again for sharing your words. They were spooky, gruesome, funny and romantic. It was a lot of fun to read. :]

Author's Response:

I am happy you enjoyed my words. And I thank you for always supporting my stories, your reviews are Kind, Inspiring and much appreciated. :) HUGS

Reviewer: GuitarsAndPoetry (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2014 02:36 PM · On: It Falls

Wow this was intense, so well written, loved the poured honey in the sun/eat his promise kiss lines the best. I'm convinced you have the soul of a poet. No matter what you seem to come up with your writing style never changes . Thank god as it is a very unique beauty you should be proud of. -Tina :)

Author's Response:

Tina, you are too kind. I cannot thank you enough for this lovely review. *Hugs*

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2014 11:08 AM · On: It Ends

Hey Mandi :)

"forever they would remain together...until they fell apart"  Aww

"with love in their hearts and brains on their tongues"  Eww

Okay, apparently zombie speak has entered my brain/s and I can only express myself in interjections.  LOL 

I'm a little sad we didn't get the "I still feel him inside me" denoting a Toppy Justin, in the diner, with the gang all watching.  Clue/cluedo, anyone.  LOL 

I absolutely adore that this is all a Halloween tale by Justin as I didn't see that coming.  I love it when an author can surprise me.  I'm extra happy :))))) that you kept them in character even at the end and you weren't tempted with the easy "I love you" ending.  Bravo, on another fine piece of entertainment.

Cheers :)

Author's Response:

Hi Flossee! Your reviews always make me smile. Sorry there wasn't any zombie 'relations' LOL; but I'm glad I could surprise you! :) I couldn't pass up the chance of a Halloween 'tale' and of course I'm always a sucker for happy endings. I give to you a gigantic thank you for reading and reviewing this story. I appreciate it. -Smiles & Hugs-

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2014 08:53 AM · On: It Ends

Loved it.

Perfect for late Halloweed night!


Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this story. Your support is truly appreciated. Smiles & Hugs-Mandi :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2014 08:46 AM · On: It Falls

"...before he went to eat his promised kiss."

I like the way this is worded. I didn't expect that Justin would actually bite Brian.

Oh, that HIV theory was a bust, lol.

Author's Response:

I always try to think of new ways to word lines, I am pleased you liked it. Yep, Justin just couldn't help himself, Kinney is delicious. ;)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2014 08:29 AM · On: It Rises

Achingly painful to read and so beautiful. Somehow you've made a zombie story romantic.

Author's Response:

I am glad you think it's romantic. :) I tried.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2014 08:21 AM · On: It Continues

"Justin's strangled cry hit the foremost vulnerable spot in the diner…Brian's heart."

Love that line.

Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2014 08:13 AM · On: It Stills

I'm wondering if HIV is the reason those two are still alive.

Author's Response:

What a clever assumption. Thank you for continuing to read this one. :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2014 08:12 AM · On: It Moves Forward

"Curl & Dye"


Author's Response:

I wish I could take credit for Curl Up & Dye, but it is actually a salon in my hometown of Berlin, MD. It's stuck with me since I first went there LOL. Fun fact: It was used in the Julia Roberts movie Runaway Bride when the movie was filmed there, the director loved it so much he kept it in the film. :)

Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2014 03:51 AM · On: It Ends

This was a great story to read! Such a cool idea.


Author's Response:

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it! *Hugs*

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2014 02:25 AM · On: It Ends

Zombies in love. . . It's so sickeningly sweet! 

"…Let's fuck like it's the end of the world." Brian commanded instead.

Loved it! Thanks for my Halloween treat! TAG

Author's Response:

LOL yes, Justin can be a bit of a schmoopy snoopy sometimes, but Brian always brings it back to S.E.X. I am happy you enjoyed it, thank you for reading and reviewing. *Hugs*

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2014 02:02 AM · On: It Ends

I really enjoy this tale Mandi, your prose is so wonderful :) thank you for sharing! 

Author's Response:

Hi Alois! Thank you for your support throughout this story, it meant a lot to me. :)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2014 12:27 AM · On: It Moves Forward

'He addressed the barely recognizable trick. "Hey Todd, How's it going?" He asked.

"Grrrrr—uhh-ahhh." It replied.'

Hah! Love it! TAG

Author's Response:

I am glad you loved it. I giggled when I wrote that part. :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2014 10:19 PM · On: It Ends

Well, this was very creative, Mandi, but I especially adored the last part when they were in bed. You do have such an amazing way with words.  So glad your 'mo-jo' is back in full force!  Happy Halloween to you, too.  Hope we are treated to many more stories to come from you. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Thank you Kim, for reading this one. I appreciate the support you always give me, and other authors. I am very excited to be able to write again, as I have many future story ideas; hopefully I can get them out. :) -Smiles & Hugs- 

Reviewer: GuitarsAndPoetry (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2014 03:33 PM · On: It Rises

I see Michael is in his ever present half Italian half drag queen role. Lol so much of this chapter was chilling, I am excited to read how you conclude this creepy wonderful Halloween tale. :)

Author's Response:

Yes Mikey is always a bit of a drama princess, it can't be helped. ;) The final two chapters will be up tonight or tomorrow at the lastest. 

Reviewer: GuitarsAndPoetry (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2014 03:29 PM · On: It Continues

Justin having a goth phase haha I can picture it. :) This chapter was a sweet reunification, you know until 'the incident', everyone's so in character no matter the universe you stick them in. Really enjoying this story.

Author's Response:

I can picture it too. LOL I'm glad you think they're in character, I always try my best to do so. Many thanks to you for following this one. :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2014 01:23 PM · On: It Rises

OMG, 'I survived a zombie fic t-shirt'.  that's hilarious.LOL  I already have a t-shirt that reads "NOT DEAD" but it isn't a zombie one. :D

Please hurry back, as I can't wait to see the men do the horizontal tango where Justin's body parts start to fall off.  Hey, if I got this far in to the fic I would appreciate a little zombie action of the B/J kind as a reward, or the aforementioned t-shirt.  LOL 

This is the best Halloween/violence fic I have read and I am invested now until the end (even if I am in denial about Justin's predisposition).

Cheers :) 

Author's Response:

'Not Dead' well, that is a fun little fact to learn about you. Hah. My husband has a t-shirt that reads: 'somebody else', I sometimes pretend he's Gale instead. ;) As for some Zombie sexy-times LOLOL I don't know if I'll take it quite that far, but the idea is hilariously brilliant! "I still feel him inside me." could take on a literal, hysterical meaning. Anywho, thank you times a million for continuing this story. :D The final two parts will be up soon.

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2014 09:52 AM · On: It Rises

OMG, that was intense...I hate to see Justin turning into a zombie. I hate to see Brian in pain. But I love where you're taking this! The three last lines here are so intense. I can't wait to read your prose written and the beauty of it all. Because that's how I feel when I read this. It's an horror story and yet, it's fillled with beauty and love. Thank you for writing it :)

Author's Response:

Thank you kindly Alois, for complementing my writing. I can't describe how much your words motivate me to keep going. I cannot thank you enough. :) *Hugs*

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 06:20 PM · On: It Stills

Well at least two of the gang are still alive.  Need more asap!

Author's Response:

Two more chapters coming right up! :) Thank you for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it immensely. ~Hugs

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 05:34 PM · On: It Stills

**** smiling **** I love this so much :) 

Author's Response:

Your smiling makes me smile! :D Thank you for following this one. ~Hugs~

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 05:23 PM · On: It Moves Forward

I really love this. I love the melting of pure drama, the way you describe it, mixed with some hilarious prose. (Todd and a sticky Brian Kinney, aha)

Off to read the next chapter:)

Author's Response:

Thank you, I was very happy to read this review, I felt a bit aprehensive mixing these different tones. I hope I am pulling it off. ~Hugs~ :)

Reviewer: GuitarsAndPoetry (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2014 03:11 PM · On: It Stills

I loved this chapter. The intimate little moment between the boys was sweet. Also your insights on the new world compared to the old one was very well done. You always impress me with your way with words. Excited for more. -Tina

Author's Response:

I appreciate your kind words Tina, thank you for always supporting my stories. ~hugs~

Reviewer: GuitarsAndPoetry (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2014 03:02 PM · On: It Moves Forward

this is getting better and better with each chapter, it's amazing how poetic you remain even when you're writing horror. Some really great lines in this one. And your little antidotes of humor are delightful. Hey todd haha I enjoyed the whole Todd/Brian exchange! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you, glad I could make you laugh. :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 07:45 AM · On: It Stills

I made it through two chapters without falling off the edge of my seat.  Yep, you had me there the whole time. 

I love the humour you have instilled in this fic as it is the one thing that keeps me breathing, due to intermittent bursts of laughter.  "You know Todd, I think I preferred when you wanted me for my body, not my brain." The Todd part is classic. 

OMG, I love that Ben and Hunter are alive, alive and not dead, alive.  

Cheers :)

Author's Response:

Hi! I'm glad you made it through two more chapters. I feel at that the end of this fic I should print you up an 'I survived a zombie fic t-shirt' ;) I hope you continue to follow this one. Your reading and reviewing means a lot. Thank you again. :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 02:49 PM · On: It Began

Hey Mandi :)

I can honestly tell you I have read these first two chapters through the gaps between my fingers.  I have only ever watched a small portion of a zombie movie and the ones that could love or care about others ended up turning human again.  I really have my fingers crossed if B/J get bitten this will be their salvation.  Or, and I normally dislike endings where it was all just a dream, I would love this to be the case here.  Yep, I really am that wimpy, still I am going to try and stay with you.  If I can't I will come back and read the end then go back to the other chapters.  LOL  Hey, don't judge me harshly as I'm only reading it because you are the author.  :)

Cheers :)

Author's Response:

Hello Flossee :) I am very humbled that you have chosen to step outside of your comfort zone to read my words. No worries, I never judge. This story gets spookier but I do firmly believe you will be pleased with the ending. Thank you for reading and I hope you stay with me, for any chapters you choose to read. LOL ~Hugss~ :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 03:28 AM · On: It Began

Forgot. LOVE the banner!

Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm currently in the process of re-designing the ones for all my old fics and future ones. I appreciate your appreciation of the banner work. They're fun to make :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 03:27 AM · On: It Began

"Now, these four were not trying to claw past one another in search of their next meal."

Intriguing. I still don't understand why they couldn't have gotten a car. And I hope someone is carrying a torch... Oh man... See, that's why I don't read these types of stories. I get too caught up in them, LOL.

Author's Response:

The world is so silent that the engine running and such would be loud enough to draw the attention of the undead with their heightenend hearing. He's probably got a light in his backpack of tricks somewhere  I'm glad you are reading this. ~mandi

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 03:14 AM · On: It Begins

I'm not a huge zombie fan, but I will gladly give yours a try. So far, this one has my interest. I'm curious if the entire gang are now zombies. it's not clear to me in this first chapter.

Author's Response:

It's nice to hear you are willing to give this a go. You will come to find out what's become of the gang, I hope this keeps your interest. Thank you for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 01:56 AM · On: It Began

Interesting that the undead seem maybe not so undead because of love...can't wait to read more :) thank you

Author's Response:

You are very perceptive ;) I'm so glad you are enjoying it. ~hugs~

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2014 08:19 PM · On: It Began

Eeek! So.Good.

Author's Response:

Gasp! So. Happy. :) :) Their horror continues soon, hope you will too. ~hugs~

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2014 07:29 PM · On: It Began

So the zombies are evolving?  Will there be someone at the diner when they finally get there?  Are are they truly two against the world?

Author's Response:

For the moment they feel it is defintely just the two of them, but I'll tell you that some-living-bodies await them at the diner. :) Thanks again for reading this!

Reviewer: GuitarsAndPoetry (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2014 04:51 PM · On: It Began

oo I loved the spooky imagery in this one. That surveillance tape was something straight out a horror movie. I'm always impressed with how you shape your words together. They're everyday normal words but you somehow make them seem brand new. Your writing style is completely unique from anything I've ever read. Not just in this story but in them all. I am so ready for more of this. Thank you for once again sharing your words with us. I can't wait to see what happens. P.s this banner is crazy fun! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for such a wonderful review. I'm too pleased you are liking this, and also my other stories. Nice to hear you appreciate my word placement, sometimes i feel that's a delicate feat.~:)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2014 03:22 PM · On: It Began

Another interesting chapter, Mandi. I could see this in my mind's eye.  I have never really read or watched anything about Zombies (except Michael Jackson's "Thriller"), so this will be a new twist for me. Liked how Justin stopped Brian just long enough to tell him he loved him. Sweet and angsty.

Will be looking forward to the next part. Thanks! *Hugs*  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Wow, so you are really stepping out of your comfort zone with this, for me. That's amazing, thank you. I grew up in  a family of horror fans, we used to have big neighborhood haunted houses in our house every Halloween. Lots would volunteer and it was always so much fun. I've never attempted to write an actual horror story before so this is a first for me too. This will get dark before it gets better.  I hope I don't scare you away. Thank you so much  for another review. :) :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2014 05:47 PM · On: It Begins

Wow.  I didn't think I would like this.  But I do.

Author's Response:

I'm relieved to hear that. I was and still am a little skeptical as how this would be percieved. I know it's not the norm but I really wanted to do something for Halloween. I do hope you'll continue with me. It's a little strange but Ill tell you it does end happily. :)

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2014 03:34 PM · On: It Begins

Okay, I'm hooked!

Author's Response:

Yay! I love hooking...wait. :) I'm excited to have you joining me for this one! ~hugs~ Mandi 

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2014 02:57 PM · On: It Begins

Hi Mandy,


First of all, I want to say I've read many of your fics in the past, and your unique style is so wonderful! I'm thrilled you're coming back to grace us with a new story :) You have a gift with words, I can see and most importantly feel everything you describe, either it's when you use humor or drama. So first, thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.

Secondly, I will read your other story 'kiss me deadly' as soon as I have more than two minutes to myself, but I couldn't help myself when I read the summary of this one. Even the summary is too well-written lol.

And of course, I absolutely love it and want to read more :) There are so many things and sentences I love here, if I had to list them all, this review would become way too long :)

Thank you!

Author's Response:

Hello Alois! Thank you for taking the time to share such kind words. It's truly incredible praise and I am honored to be on the recieving end. I'm glad you have read previous works and I am stoked you are giving this a read and sharing your thoughts. Big hugs~ :)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2014 05:14 AM · On: It Begins

Looks hilarious! Can't wait to start reading! TAG

Author's Response:

Hi TAG! Nice to see you joinnig the fleshy feast. This will prove a few adjectives throughout, one of which will certainly be humor, I can only hope another will be enjoyable. :) Thanks for stopping by ~hugs~

Reviewer: GuitarsAndPoetry (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2014 04:33 AM · On: It Begins

oh my gosh, what is this awesomeness? Haha your summary and a/n make me giggle. This is really well written, not surprisingly. The imagery you pen is so entrancing. It's like that age old love story: boy meets boy: boys die: boys un-die: boys still love. Classic. :p so, are they going to find a cure at the end? I'm on board for this. Let's eat. :)

Author's Response:

Classic...lol. Thanks for opening this and giving zombies a chance. :) This will be an odd sort of adventure before it comes to what I can promise (without giving too much away) will be a happy ending, I do so love those. I'm glad you'll be following this. ~hugs~

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2014 03:54 AM · On: It Begins

Well...this is certainly different - LOL!   I so love your way with words, Mandi.  Meals on Wheels - ha!  It will definitely be interesting to see where you take this. Looking forward to the rest.

So glad to have such a talented writer back! *Hugs*  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Ha, yes 'different' is certainly a word we can call this.I love Halloween and this story just would not leave me alone. Thanks for giving it a go. Here's hoping someone else likes it with me. I say,again, thank you for your warm and welcome back to this fandom. I appreciate your kind encouragement. ~hugs back~mandi

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