Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Inevitable
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2014 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 4

Poor Brian, having to deal with Hobbs, an adolescent Justin, who had to deal with Gus!  I'm kinda surprised that Brian is considering having another child.  Like it.  Mikey seemed a little ticked off.  Oh he of little faith.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2014 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 4

I like that Justin seems to have power over Hobbs.  He isn't scared to the point of being incapacitated which seems to be the theme with many fics at the moment. 

I am also enjoying the fact you haven't made JR and Gus children that can do no wrong.  I like that they seem to be normal and it was a nice touch that they missed each other.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2014 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 4

Just read all 4 chapters while I had breakfast. Great reading. Both boys have grown a great deal. A future with a baby in the household - lots of good story lines would come with that.

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2014 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 4

I love the wish of Brian "having a family with Justin ". Look forward to next Friday!!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! Brian is looking forwrad ot having a family with Justinn too. :-p

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2014 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 4

Oh wow! What a pleasant surprise that Brian wants to expand his family with Justin by his side.

Author's Response:

Yes, he's grown up enough to understand how important famly is...especially, giving Justin what he wants. :)

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