Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was cute- some parts could actually have been edited out, like a description of what they ate. You could also have integrated the lyrics of the song into the story, instead of tacking it on at the end. Otherwise, from a story point of view, nice to see Brian's evolution- the present at Babylon seems just the very thing he would plan. Nice. 



Author's Response: You'll see I have tendency to describe their meals a bit, it must be my wish to be a great cook... He, he, he... I know what you mean about integrating the lyrics, I did a much better job on 'It's Not Good-Bye.' I prefer to write Brian as the person I thing he really was or evolved into... There's so much emotion behind his actions, that he just can't verbalize... Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2014 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

Now this is a birthday that made sense.  Love it.



Author's Response: Brian finally slowed down and paid attention to what Justin liked and wanted... Just wanting to please Justin was a big step for Brian... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2014 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

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Author's Response: Thanks its was made by my friend Viv ~ ForeverBM... She also did my website site on livejournal; http://7wildwaysup.livejournal.com/ Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: jay (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2014 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great story. I loved the concert as a gift



Author's Response: Thanks so much, it's great that Brian finally figured out how to surprise Justin, and make him happy... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2014 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nice story and I am so glad you put my obsession--Adam in this story. I have seen him on tour with Glamnation and with Queen several times. He is da bomb. The video is geat.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it... My beta, Judy is a big Adam Lambert fan. She's seen him in concert many times and she's always posting pics and concert reviews on her journal... I love the video too... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

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