Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2016 05:34 AM · On: Epilogue

Absolutely Hilarious. Loved it and hate to see this tale end.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2016 12:25 AM · On: The Adman

This will be my first fractured fairytale and the first chapter has me raring for more. I'm enjoying your AU world already...

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2015 02:24 AM · On: Epilogue

'Mikey was found mummified in duct tape and Emmett was in the bathtub. Drew was found rolled up in the Persian carpet.' I've been to that party! I don't remember much but I think it was fun . . . Great epilogue to your epilogue. So how does it feel to finish another one? TAG

PS. Alladdin, please, with hypnosis powers added in for fun!




Author's Response:

Mmmmmmm....you tempt me....Nasty lady! Unfort. due to the underwhelming response to J and the Beanstalk's MC storyline, I'm not sure I should mix hypno and QAF again. I'll see what I can do with Aladdin but I did have another idea first and I'm just so glad to have finished this sleeping pill that I think I need a break. Wish I was having summer fun like you but just not in the mood.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2015 02:19 AM · On: Epilogue

I'm glad to see a wrap up of what became of Ryder.  Nice job.  I would have liked to have known more about Brian and Justin's party.  Who taped Mikey?  I'd like to thank them.  And just where did Mel wonder off to?  Enjoyed this story!!!

Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2015 05:53 PM · On: Resurrection Day Part 2

Nice cliffhanger. This story is absurd...in a good way. lol You sure do have a humorous style all your own. 'If looks could kill, Brian would have been a hit man.' -You speak the truth. *Hugs*

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2015 02:02 AM · On: The Adman

PS. I still vote for Alladdin for your next story. Pleeeeeeeezzzzzzeeeeee! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2015 02:01 AM · On: Resurrection Day Part 2

Nice machinations Brian! And lovely cliff hanger there, Jon! TAG



Author's Response:

thank you very much. Short epilogue to follow

 

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2015 01:07 AM · On: Resurrection Day Part 1

What the heck is Brian up to now? TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2015 12:49 AM · On: The Offer

Oh good! It wouldn't be a QAF Fairy Tale without the appearance of someone dressed in black leather and the now obligatory pickle joke! Yay! I'm satisfied now. Thank you! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2015 10:58 PM · On: The Chill Pill

I need one of those pills! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2015 07:37 PM · On: Dating and Tricking

Shakin' things up, huh? Brian's the one who wants more while Justin's being all business as usual. Nice! Who knew Brian would get all queenie over the fact that his meat . . . Loaf wasn't being adequately appreciated? And all Brian's excuses for why Justin wasn't at the meeting - Somalie pirates, aliens, rougue elephants - hilarious! So, now what? TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2015 07:16 PM · On: About a Diner and Dating

"You put the body in homebody" - Brian's body is welcome in my home any day or night! TAG


Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2015 07:02 PM · On: Seven with One Blow

Love me a good literary allusion - C.S. Lewis and Lewis Carroll in one chapter! You cleaver little boy! Oh, and let's not forget that Tolkien reference earlier! Simply marvelous, darling. My high school AP English teacher would have given you an A+! Of course the Scooby Doo reference in the middle of the sex scene threw me a little - you lose a half point for that one! Lol! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2015 06:06 PM · On: The Repeat

Ah yes, sexual bribery - you fuck me and I'll do your art work - the perfect basis for a loving, long term relationship! Hehehe. TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2015 05:44 PM · On: The Adman

So, I don't remember the shoemaker fucking the elves in the version I learned as a kid . . . It all makes so much more sense now! TAG

PS. Justin's pretty and all, but NOBODY is better than Legolas - just wanna be clear on that point! 

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2015 05:42 PM · On: The Adman

Damn! I must have missed a posting or two and now I'm gonna have to go back and start reading from the beginning again! Which, admittedly really isn't a hardship cause I love me a good long story . . . But, I guess you'll just have to put up with all those extra 'hits' and reviews - poor author! Lol! Here we go . . . Again. TAG

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2015 04:41 AM · On: Resurrection Day Part 2

What an enjoyable banquet!  Now let us hope the twins headed Ted's warning.



Author's Response:

Thanks hon! And...let's hope....bwa haha...

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2015 04:25 AM · On: Resurrection Day Part 1

Well, that was interesting.  What does Brian have planned?  Justin has more patience then I would have.

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2015 03:19 AM · On: Resurrection Day Part 2

<snickers evilly>

The Author

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2015 03:10 AM · On: The Offer

Brian manages to get a lot done in a day.  It helps to have an elf around.  Now where do we go from here? 

Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2015 05:41 PM · On: The Chill Pill

'One of them caught the eye of a dinner plate and together the dish ran away with the spoon out the door, which was open for some reason.' -LOL The whole dream sequence was very clever and entertaining. Happy to see Justin having a change of heart. Hope Brian finally finds his dinner. ;P *Hugs*

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2014 12:31 AM · On: The Chill Pill

I'm glad the ads came out.  But that dream was a doozy.



Author's Response:

glad you liked it. I wasn t sure if it was going to be stupid or if it was appropriately "dreamy" full of the right surrealism...if you get my drift. Sorry for taking so long and this is to everybody... I haven't written anything in about a week....or more.

Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2014 01:31 AM · On: Dating and Tricking

Well that escalated quickly. They are both being drama princesses, but I'm sure they'll get it together. You have a quirky sense of humor all your own, I giggled a lot at this chapter. The whole listing lies, and using the microwave to store his lube lol. Especially this line: "You should never assume anything...unless it's the position," haha. :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2014 12:25 AM · On: Dating and Tricking

I just love this story!  This is so great!  Finally someone gives to Brian what he has been handing out all along!



Author's Response:

thank you! Very gratifying to find someone who agees with me. I know we all love Brian but...canon wise well....he's an a$$hole!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2014 11:37 PM · On: Dating and Tricking

Justin is very unforgiving isn't he?  What does he plan to do?



Author's Response:

Yes he is. Not sure what s going to happen here  but we'll think of something.

 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2014 10:54 AM · On: Dating and Tricking

I know this has nothing to do with Maxwell Smart, but "would you believe" it is his voice I am hearing.  Brian is hilarious with his lies.  I wonder why they didn't believe all those well thought out falsehood. LOL  "Would you believe - I love that part?" LOL No true; I really do.  His queen out was equally comical.

Random comment; OMG, meatloaf is haunting me today and I'm not necessarily referring to the meal. 

"The only way I'd do anything for you....is if you were asleep while I was doing it." Yep, there is more to Justin than the description we already have.  Inquiring minds want to know, soon pleeeease.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Glad you liked that part. i think I went a little overboard with him making up stuff but it was so fun I couldn't stop.

This may seem strange but I'm equally mystified as to what's going to happen.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2014 08:04 PM · On: About a Diner and Dating

What a delight.  When you got to the part where they were in the diner and we learn that Justin spoke Japanese, I was bouncing in my chair.  When he told Emmett what his little asian cupcake was really saying I LOL <3.  Fabulous!

Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2014 07:27 PM · On: About a Diner and Dating

Poor Emmett but I still couldn't ever not find that funny. lol It's cute how (not)giddy and (not) excited Brian is awaiting Justin's arrival. Man, I hate suprises that have to be a suprise. :P



Author's Response:

I know....I'm not sure why i put that bit in about Emmett. yet. This whole story has me very....detached from it for some reason. I'm not really enjoying writing it, not like Mountie or The Merman. Maybe it's the constraints to remain on canon, i don't know. But we'll see what we see.

Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2014 07:03 PM · On: Seven with One Blow

Well that got a little dark there, thank goodness for the little elf that houses the strength of seven dwarves. I guess he really is a ninja lol. I played a game once where the character goes off screen  and the fight is all sounds. It amused me then and it amused me now in this. If i was Brian I might be a little terrified of Justin lol.Especially if he thinks Brian is just using his talent. Then again, if he screams in a shaggy voice he can't be too scary. 

Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2014 06:45 PM · On: The Repeat

'Like he would ever break his no repeat rule./'I would never do that'. Brian really does like to mislead himself. Good job staying true to the elves and the shoemaker with him getting more orders. Justin certainly drives a hard bargain (Insert silly sex pun here). Wonder what has Brian in such a tizzy...

Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2014 06:36 PM · On: The Adman

And God help him....he let himself be played with.<This enire ilttle man/boy insightful paragraph was really good. Super clever inclusion of the pilot scene's song. Also, I sent you an email about the banner, I'm not sure if you've gotten it. This story is off to a promising start. :) 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2014 11:23 AM · On: About a Diner and Dating

OMG; absolute truth, when you wrote ssss-elfish my mind went straight to the Shellfish joke and lo and behold it was only two lines away.  LOL 

What could Brian's surprise possibly be for our virtual ad cobbler/elf/martial arts expert/multilingual/shoe licking/artist?  Not eight easels surrounding the bed.

Happy Halloween right back at ya.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

No it s not more easels. But that's all I'm saying.

 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2014 10:13 AM · On: Seven with One Blow

Hey Jon :)

It has been an absolute delight to catch up with your fic.  There are so many references I don't know where to start so I will just tell you I loved them all.

I can't wait to read the explanation to; "What the fuck is this?"  Evil indeed; your word, not mine. LOL

"Knowing what Justin was" I assume the explanation to this piece of dialogue is to come.  Sorry; for some reason today I'm worried I'm missing the obvious and I hate thinking others are understand what I'm not.  D'oh. LOL If this is explainable without giving away the plot I would appreciate the help. :)

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

I m glad you can't wait....Seems to be a general consensus. Glad I made a decent cliffhanger for once. 

 

As for  "Knowing what Justin was..." well I thought was implied. Sorry about the confusion. Justin is a martial arts expert and his body is a lethal weapon capable of unarmed mass destruction.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2014 02:58 PM · On: Seven with One Blow

Aaargh!  Bad Jon! LOL!  Thoroughly enjoying this.  I am now caught up, so I can go back to what I should be doing.;)  This is great! Will definitely be along for the ride. Still loving this fiery Justin!:)*Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Yes Yes!!! I'm evil!!! Blah! Blah Blah! buy me an eyepatch and a fluffy white cat!  Glad you got caught up. Hope you'll keep going for the ride though. Sorry if it s a bit of a wait between chapters. I've been writing in spurts lately.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2014 02:29 PM · On: The Repeat

It was too soon. It was forever.  (Lovely line here!)

He had cooked their snack, had an ass that wouldn't quit, was clean, polite and sucked cock like a Dustbuster.  (LOL! Loved that description!)

 

I'm really enjoying this feisty, cheeky Justin who is keeping Brian on his toes. Loving this, Jon. This may be one of my favorites of yours.;)  I shouldn't really be taking time to read this, but can't resist.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thanx for this review...Loved those lines too.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2014 02:13 PM · On: The Adman

OMG, Jon, this is great! I love your sense of humor.;)  And now I have Divine's song in my head, playing over and over again...!  Loved the 'creamy filling' line, and how you are comparing Justin to an elf. It fits so well here. And the 'sleep kissing' part was ingenous!  I'm going to look forward to this one.;)

BTW, if you want a banner (would love to see that!), if you look at my profile, there is a list under one of my MW posts about people who are willing to do banners for you.  Although I suspect Marny or someone else may already be working on one.;) 

Looking foward to reading the next chapters! And congrats, too, on being the featured story author for the month. Well deserved, my friend. *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thanx for the compliments, I sure need them.  And thanx for the banner suggestion I'm....jeeeest  about ready to start asking about one. I wanted to wait until the latest chapter as   you probly found out it contains several key exposition points that needed to be told before a good banner could be  done. But now that it is I will be making my way to that post....post haste! ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2014 08:24 AM · On: Seven with One Blow

Reading this was a delight.  Having Justin a martial arts expert was amazing.  Now what was it Justin saw????



Author's Response:

Thank you. But you'll have to wait and see...  no spoilers

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2014 07:45 AM · On: The Repeat

Good job.  The shoe tie in was excellant and making Justin a pool shark was something else.  Now you just have to let us in on what THAT LITTLE FUCKER did.

I can see that like your other stories this one is going to be a favorite.



Author's Response:

you'll just have to wait and see. And by this time...you already have...Hehehehe!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2014 07:43 AM · On: The Repeat

"his dick that was so hard it rivaled diamond" Well I must say, that's pretty hard. LOL 

Brian driving and having sex, stone cold sober and clean, and finding it different; this insight is priceless.

OMG, Justin wore Brian out. :D  I hope Justin's ad has those horrible shoes on a naked sleeping Brian, as that would certainly make them more appealing, or is that just my imagination that went there.  Haha

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2014 03:56 AM · On: The Adman

I really like this.



Author's Response:

sometimes the simplest of reviews are the most profound. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 09:56 PM · On: The Adman

usually not into the fractured fairy tales - but I love this one so far!

I can see Brian striving to stay in his 'I'm always right - and I'm always in control mentality while becoming more than a little in need of all things Justin...the artist - the boy - the lover - the friend.

How will Brian take it when he realizes that he might owe a great portion of his success - and more than he can cope with - his happiness -  to the blonde beauty he can't get enough of?

this could really be fun -anxious for more!

Charle



Author's Response:

thanx for your feedback...Reviews kep my fingers itchy ;) As to your question....we'll have to find out together...Not sure where thiis is going but hoping it'll be a bit shorter than my previous few...A 22 chapter Beauty and the Beast  got a bit ridiculous.

Keep reviewing and let me know what you think! Thanx Again!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 09:40 PM · On: The Adman

Oh, this is goooood!  Just think if they'd done this in the series.  Keep 'em coming.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 10:42 AM · On: The Adman

I'm so pleased with all that Brian is going through he only drove as fast as legally possible; we wouldn't want him speeding while driving under the influence of drugs and alcohol.  LOL 

"He thought he'd be a man....he was only a boy...He wanted to be a man....now he was only a toy....." oh, for a minute I thought Justin was going to turn into Pinocchio.  I know; I'm weird, which has been well established by now. :D 

Update soon please.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

thanx for the Pinnochio insight... that was really clever, I hadn't thought of the parallel. It's actually from the song they play during that scene. I wonder if they had Pinnochio in mind too....

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2014 08:49 AM · On: The Adman

Yay! A new story! Can't wait! TAG



Author's Response:

Yup! Any thoughts on the chapter? Good bad, sad, maybe?

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