Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2016 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 1 My man.

Wow, that summarizes them so much! Well done!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Very glad you like it!

A big hug, Fatima.

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2014 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 1 My man.

Yep .. That definitely works for me :)



Author's Response:

Hi Carol! 

I'm glad you like it:) 

Thank you for your comment and I'm sorry that it took to respond. 

A big hug! 

Fatima.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2014 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 1 My man.

Hello Fatima!

Loved this fic, and I like the fact that all along , Brian and Justin were only reffered to "he" and "the other man", and that it's only almost at the end of the story that their real names are revealed, it's sort of a mirror of the build up of their excitment too. 

Hugs:)

Fran 



Author's Response:

Hello, dear Fran! 

I was very happy to hear that you have enjoyed this new history and also how I wrote it. I really wanted to focus only on the action and not the characters. It is as you described: looking through the mirror of excitation of the two (I really liked that description). 

Sorry it took to respond to your comment, but I had some setbacks and could not do it before. 

A big hug, my dear! 

Fatima.

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2014 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 1 My man.

Wow, that was beautiful. The "older man, younger man" thing was repetitive, but I think it was necessary to maintain the third person passive voice at the time. It wasn't really a problem, notn when you described their desire, passion and love for each other, and there was that beautiful sex scene. And the ending was exquisite- beautiful paragraph after they greet each other in bed. Lovely writing, well done. Very well done.



Author's Response:

Thank you, my dear! 

You are correct. Some terms that were repeated were deliberate and I used them for the reasons you guessed. 

I'm so glad you let me know that liked my story. I also really like the last paragraph of the story. 

A big hug! 

Fatima

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2014 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 1 My man.

Wow!  What a difference.  It's a lot like the original but more detailed and a tad easier to read.  I could not done as well, and English is my only language.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry, my friend, but I was wrong when I posted the story and ended up posting the original I wrote in English (this is not my language and I use Google and the dictionary to write in English), for this reason, the reading of story was so difficult. That is why I am eternally grateful to my Beta (Predec2). 

Thank you for reading the story again and leave another comment. 

A big hug! 

Fatima.

Reviewer: Jo (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2014 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 1 My man.

I really liked this.



Author's Response:

Thank you Jo, for letting me know you liked my story. 

A big hug! 

Fatima. 


Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2014 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 1 My man.

:):):):):)

Author's Response:

Thank you Tamara for letting me know that I made you smile.:) 

A big hug! 

Fatima.

Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2014 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 1 My man.

Thank you!

Orhida



Author's Response:

You're welcome, my dear! 

Thank you for letting me know you liked my story. 

A big hug!

Fátima.

Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2014 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 1 My man.

great story need to changethe hers to hims  kim



Author's Response:

Thank you, Kim! 

I am very glad to hear that you liked my story. 

A big hug! 

Fatima.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2014 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 1 My man.

It's nice to see that Justin is still excited by Brian coming home from a trip!



Author's Response:

I think the boys are always excited with each other, no matter how much time has passed. Thanks for reading and commenting. 

A big hug! 

Fatima. 

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