Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Hobbs and Sunshine
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2017 11:38 AM · On: Epilogue- The day he lived happily ever after

I have actively avoided this story ever since I discovered QAF because  why would I want to read about Justin and that murderous villian, Chris Hobbs. For some reason I decided to be open minded and start chap one and was hooked by the end of it.  I loved the friendship that developed between the two teens.  I was even amused to read the jealousy that Brian couldn't hide. But most of all I loved the way you handled the Prom scene. It was genius. I am glad  I was brave enough to take a chance on this story  that will now be placed on my favorites list. 

 



Author's Response:

This was a thing I knew would be an issue for people, but I am so glad you decided to give it a chance.

The idea of Justin and Chris has always intrigued me and I was surprised with how this story actually turned out. My Chris and the real Chris are now two seperate characters in my mind, because I came to quite like my version of him. 

It is incredibly inspiring to read your thoughts on this story. You brightened my day! Thank you so much for your idea and for your review!

xoxo

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: February 29, 2016 12:57 PM · On: Epilogue- The day he lived happily ever after

Wow… what an epilogue. I was both sad and happy, it’s such a bittersweet ending. I’m happy for Chris, I love his boyfriend, but most of all I *love* how he and Justin are still friends. Oh, how I wish it was like that in canon! Terrific ending, incredible story – thank you so much for it! I’ll love to reread it in future. I had really great time reading it and I’m going to miss it so much!



Author's Response:

I am so happy you enjoyed it!!! 

I didn't expect to like dane as much as I did when I wrote about him, but I really love him and chris together. I couldn't have ended it without chris and justin being friends.

Thank you greatly for all your support throughout this story. It is people like you that inspire me to keep writing. :)

xoxo

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: February 29, 2016 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 13- The day he ended it

Hi there! I was so glad to see that this wonderful story is finished. I love it, I love how unusual and refreshing it is.

Brian is so protective and caring. I still feel a little sorry for Chris, but he did screw everything up. Brian is right in his advice.

Well, reading about everything from Chris’ perspective made me upset and sorry for him :( He’s not a bad person, but he’s definitely very confused. My heart broke for him when he cried. And especially after Justin rejected him. It was well deserved, but, well… sad.

Great chapter!

 



Author's Response:

Hello! 

I am glad you felt the emotions I was trying to project. Chris really was just a confused and scared teenage boy.

Thanks for your thoughts :)

xoxo

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2016 11:14 PM · On: Epilogue- The day he lived happily ever after

Hello there!

Thank you for this story, it's quite unique and gives a different perspective on what could have happened between Justin and Hobbs, if Hobbs hadn't succumbed to his fears and the hate he had learned from a young age for gay people. It was great going in Hobbs' mind and see how petrified he was to be found out. He was so endearing at times and sometimes quite infuriating.

I have to confess I wished that more had happened between Justin and Hobbs. It's because you did such a great job showing us their friendship, complicity etc. It was nice also to see Justin with his own life, exploring things by himself. Thanks again.

Hugs,

Sorcha.

 



Author's Response:

Hi there, Sorcha! :)

I am so thrilled to read your thoughts on my first story! I appreciate you taking the time to read it and develop a response to it.

 I was looking for a story like this and when I couldn't find one I decided to write one that explored chris' sexuality. I wanted to portray him as a realistic teenage boy, hence the endearing and infuriating factors ;)

Honestly I did consider getting chris and Justin together at the end but I didn't have the heart to break Brian and justin up! I would have also written more scenes between chris and justin but I really wanted to conclude the story and wasn't sure how I would otherwise drag it on for longer, although I would have loved to have continued it. 

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me :D

xoxo 

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2016 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 13- The day he ended it

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Yay!!! :)

xoxo

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2016 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 12-The day everything turned to shit

Loved it!



Author's Response:

You're the best :)

xoxo

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2016 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 11- The day things started to change

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and commenting

xoxo

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2016 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 10- The day he learned some more

Loved it!



Author's Response:

And I love your reviews! 

xoxo

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2016 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 9- The day he was caught staring

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!!! 

xoxo

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2016 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 8- The day he boned...twice

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Woohoo!!!

xoxo

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2016 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 7- The day he was questioned about it

Loved it!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2016 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 6- The day(s) he was ignored. Big time.

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your support :) 

xoxo

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2016 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 5- The day Brian got hit...then Justin did too

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your reviews :)

xoxo

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2016 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 4- The day they made a deal

Loved it!



Author's Response:

I'm happy you are enjoying it

xoxo

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2016 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 3- The day he told Brian

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! 

xoxo

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2016 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 2- The day it happened again

Loved it!



Author's Response:

I'm glad 

xoxo

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2016 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 1- The day it happened

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

xoxo

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2016 10:56 PM · On: Epilogue- The day he lived happily ever after

I liked this journey of self discovery for Hobbs. It is a hard road for some dealing not only with the usual teenage angst of entering relationships and impending adulthood, but also trying to understand and accept the reality of sex and their own sexuality. Very empathetically portrayed and I liked the friendships gained and maintained years later. I look forward to your future posts:-)



Author's Response:

I am beyond pleased that you enjoyed my story,  which became like a child to me! What you said about the difficulty of teen angst and sexuality is completely true and exactly what I was trying to communicate. I'm so happy that is what you got out of it. 

Thank you so much for your support :)

xoxo

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2016 08:58 PM · On: Epilogue- The day he lived happily ever after

Very nice ending my friend.

Author's Response:

Thank you kindly my friend :) 

xoxo

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2016 02:44 AM · On: Epilogue- The day he lived happily ever after

What a unique and interesting QaF AU! I just discovered your story yesterday and powered through. Couldn't even take the time to leave comments because I was so engaged by your story.

I like the way you show Chris discovering himself, with Justin's help, and turning into a hero instead of a villain. I especially like the way they've become fast friends and go to each other for advice. It's also appealing that Chris and Brian are friendly (once jealous Brian recovered his equilibrium). :)

I really like the HEA, that Hobbs and Sunshine are the best homosexuals they can be.

One question: Did Hobbs state his sexuality to the Pittsburgh Steelers when they recruited him? I'm curious because that's still dicey for athletes.

I'd be interested in reading about Chris and Dane's first date.  I'm especially looking forward to your Brian and Justin stories.

Well done!



Author's Response:

Wow! What a wonderful review! 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and give me your input. I really did want to depict chris as a hero with deep flaws and fears to overcome. I am glad that you got that. I really wanted the boys to be friends in the future for this story, so that's how it turned out! :) 

Chris is out of the closet, but he doesn't really openly talk about his sexuality because it doesn't define his personality,  it's just a part of him. To answer your question, no the football team does not know about his homosexuality,  but it is possible for them to find out in the future as he doesn't hide it.

I'm glad to know you'd be interested in chris and dane's first date.  Thanks so much for your kind words! :) 

xoxo


Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 07:07 PM · On: Epilogue- The day he lived happily ever after

So, this is the end... What can I say except congratulations for finishing your first story!! I really enjoyed this immersion into Chris' mind and I'm happy that he finally embraced who he really was. Thank you Cait! I will be looking forward to more stories from you :)



Author's Response:

I in turn would like to thank you for your support and kind words throughout this story. I have not yet gotten around to reading your latest story just yet, but as soon as I have time to spare I will begin reading it :) 

xoxo

Reviewer: chouchou (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2016 02:39 PM · On: Epilogue- The day he lived happily ever after

I loved this fic. I'm glad that someone wrote about Chris feelings and made him becoming a good person.I loved the friendship between him and Justin. It was a very good idea.

 



Author's Response:

I really appreciate the fact that you thought so and that you let me know. Thank you for understanding this story and for reading it! :) I really did want to explore chris' feelings in this fic 

xoxo

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2016 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 13- The day he ended it

Oh, Chris... seriously? Doing like nothing happened? Can't wait for the next part, Cait, as always :) I will be sad to let this story go, you had offered us somethong quite unique!



Author's Response:

It is true that Chris' plan was not well thought out! I'm incredibly happy that you are enjoying the story! The next chapter will be out on either monday or tuesday. Stay tuned!  :)

xoxo

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2016 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 13- The day he ended it

still loving this story, thanks for the update.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) 

xoxo

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2016 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 13- The day he ended it

I honestly saw the summary of this story and thought meh, I won't enjoy it... HOW WRONG WAS I?? I love it and it keeps on getting better and better.



Author's Response:

I am so glad that you changed your mind ;) thanks for your review! 

xoxo

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2016 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 13- The day he ended it

Uh oh....this does not look good at the moment.

Author's Response:

Not right now, no. Chris' true self will be revealed next chapter ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2016 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 12-The day everything turned to shit

Wow....just...wow. I just read this from beginning to this current chapter and admittedly I didn't think things would get this deep between Justin and Chris...Justin really should have listened to Brian and Daphne.

Author's Response:

Honestly, I didn't really know things would get this deep between them either at first. But as my story began to progress I saw it heading in this direction. Chris has feelings that he is afraid of dealing with. If you're worried about how things will turn out, never fear. Stay tuned ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!!

xoxo 

Reviewer: chaval (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2016 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 12-The day everything turned to shit

J'espère que Brian va être obligé de se découvrir et d'admettre sa jalousie face à Justin et à tous ses amis.

Merci de ne pas avoir abandonné cette histoire.



Author's Response:

Merci d'avoir lu! :)

xoxo

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2016 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 11- The day things started to change

I love jealous Brian <3



Author's Response:

Don't we all? ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2016 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 10- The day he learned some more

I hope they don't end up together LOL, it's hot, don't get me wrong, but I just want Justin to teach Chris his ways and then be done LOL



Author's Response:

Justin just wants a friend, but Chris doesn't realise that he wants more ;) Never fear, and read on

xoxo

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2016 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 8- The day he boned...twice

Oh no, Chris is gonna fall in love with our sunshine, isn't he?



Author's Response:

Just like Brian, Chris is not immune to Justin's charms. Or his ass. LOL!

xoxo

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2016 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 6- The day(s) he was ignored. Big time.

How hot was Justin shoving Chris down onto his knees? OMG rawr!



Author's Response:

Haha, I'm glad you thought so. Sunshine taking control! ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2016 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 12-The day everything turned to shit

Hi Cait! I'm really enjoying this story immensely. It's so interesting to see Chris as Justin's friend and fuck buddy, and realizing his feelings, and all the implications. The scene at Woody's was just perfect, reflecting all his confusion and fears. And I love a jealous Brian and a friendly Justin. The characters feel real to me. I can't wait to see what happens next! I really don't know how Chris is going to evolve, but I hope he will not let his fear win. Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hello, there! I can't tell you how happy it makes me to know that you are liking the story :)

I love Chris and Justin as friends as well, but poor Chris likes him as a LOT more than a friend and that really scares him. I like that he's not predictable ;)

Thank you so much for reading and for writing a review!

xoxo

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2016 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 3- The day he told Brian

I kinda love that Justin is the experienced one here :)



Author's Response:

That was how I wanted to portray him in this story. Thanks for the review :)

xoxo

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2016 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 2- The day it happened again

As much as I hate Hobbs for what he did, this is amazing. He definitely had the hots for Justin, but he was too frightened to admit it, after being told his entire life that being gay was wrong.



Author's Response:

I am glad you are enjoying it :) xoxo

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2016 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 1- The day it happened

Ooooooh this looks very interesting. I definitely thought that Chris had the hots for Justin :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so! thanks for reading :)

xoxo

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2016 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 1- The day it happened

Hi Cait!

I'm so happy to see an update!!! I will reread the story as soon as I have the time and leave a comment on the last chapter soon. I've missed this story :)



Author's Response:

Hi!! I really do appreciate to telling me this :) happy reading!!

xoxo

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2016 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 12-The day everything turned to shit

I’m so glad to see and update from you! I missed this story.

Chris and Justin are getting more and more adorable together. I love how you depict them, you show wonderfully and realistically how Chris’ more romantic feelings are turning to friendship. I like seeing his new courage and determination.

Aww, jealous Brian is amazing! I suck in every moment when he ‘s being possessive of our blond.

Oh… it seems Chris isn’t willing to let his feelings for Justin go as quickly as I believed. Damn, I don’t know how their next meeting will go! Chris needs to grovel if he wants to get Justin’s friendship back… he was a total asshole.

Thank you for this great chapter, I look forward to the next one!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to write a review!

I really do appreciate you sharing your thoughts and I am beyond thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter. It is people like you that keep me motivated the continue to write :)

I know it has been a long time since I last updated, but I have already begun writing the next chapter because I don't want to make you guys wait so long anymore. So hopefully it won't be too long until I can finish this little story of mine that I have come to love.

Brian really is afraid of losing Justin to someone else, so it is easy for him to get jealous ;)

Chris' feeling for Justin run deep and true, but it scares him to bits! He's never felt this way before and he is afraid of being gay; of what people will think of him. That is why it is so hard for him to accept himself, but you will find out more about that as the story comes to an end. I quite like writing their friendly interactions as well ;)

xoxo

 

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2015 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 11- The day things started to change

Fascinating and different. I just discovered this story and am really enjoying it. This is first time of read about Chris as Justin's closeted fuck buddy.  I do hope Chris won't bash Justin (or Brian) in a fit of jealousy at the end of the story. I'm curious as to whether he'll come out or, possibly, be outed.

It's interesting to have Chris be Justin's first experience as a top. Justin's still totally in love with Brian, but he has developed a friendship with Chris, although I don't think Justin would leave Brian for Chris. I'm hoping their friendship will survive, that (after graduation at least) Chris will be proud of being gay, and that Brian will admit to his feelings for Justin. Brian and Justin's relationship can be open; that makes sense since neither is ready for more.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

It's great that you took the time to read my story and think about it! Thank you very much!

I really hope you are enjoying it :)

It may be a while before the next chapter comes out I'm afraid, because I'm incredibly busy right now, but it will get done I promise!

xoxo

Reviewer: Like you work (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2015 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 11- The day things started to change

Can't wait to read more you are super hope you ok and really hope to read more soon 



Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting. Yes, I'm alright, never fear! I am just really stressed out at the moment (real life is crazy busy!) I will try my hardest to get the time to write soon ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2015 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 11- The day things started to change

Hi Cait! This is so good. I love to see your take on the three characters and I love their evolution. It's all very believable and I can see them reacting that way. I can't wait to see where you're going after that :) 



Author's Response:

Hello my dear, I am glad to hear from you! :) It is wonderful to know that you are still reading and that you are enjoying it! Honestly, at this very moment, even I can't wait to see where it goes from here!

Thanks for the support ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Britin77 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2015 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 11- The day things started to change

Damn, I sure do like a Jealous Brian .He's not taking Justin and  Chris "relationship "too well and finding it hard to keep his possecessive nature in check. It will be interested to read how it it unfolds in the next chpaters.

I am beginng to like how their relationship is delevopling and please that Chris broken up with his loose girlfriend to focuse on the cute,gorgouse blond .

 

More chapters please:)



Author's Response:

I am pleased to know that you like where this is going ;)

Thank you for reviewing! I will post more when I can

xoxo

Reviewer: Lindsey (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2015 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 11- The day things started to change

I have completly and totally fallen in love with your writing. QAF was an amazing show and it's like you've brought it back. "CUSTIN" IS REALLLLLLL. I am currently forcing all of my QAF-loving friends to read this. I cant wait for more! 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your exciting and kind words. I am thrilled that you like it so much and that you are sharing it with your friends. I can not tell how happy that makes me :) Thank you for brightening my day with this lovely review. Also, encourage those cool friends of yours to review as well! ;)

I hope I can get more to you soon, but unfortunately I can not promise anything definite with my busy life!

xoxo

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2015 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 11- The day things started to change

Wow, it seems our Chris is turning into a complete homosexual! I love how you show the way he slowly gets more and more courage to be who he is. Justin has had great influence on him so far. I wonder what happens next.

I *loved* Brian and Justin’s part! It was touching and hot. Brian’s jealousy is obvious now, just as his fear to lose Justin. You described it wonderfully, I can feel that Brian’s falling harder and faster for Justin now, when he believes he might not have much longer with him. Thank you, it was a great chapter!



Author's Response:

Indeed, Chris is slowly becoming more and more comfortable with himself and who he is; even if he doesn't realise it! It is not all good, however. He still has a long way to go.

As for him and Justin, they are good friends, but there is always time for relationships to change, whether it be in a good way or bad way (hint hint). Justin is beginning to let himself be friends with Chris, rather than act like he means othing to him as he did previously. Justin wasn't exactly nice before in that sense, but he is getting better.

I felt this story needed more Brian and Justin scenes, so that explains the one I gave you. I am glad that you liked it! :)

I am excited to show you what happens next. It brings me joy to know that you like reading this story of mine.

Thank you for reading and for posting a wonderful review

xoxo

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2015 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 10- The day he learned some more

I feel almost sorry for this girl with a beautiful name Marlissa. I also feel sorry for Chris, but he should realize it’s wrong to use another person – he doesn’t even like her! That must be horrifying for any woman.

Oh-oh, I think now that Justin let Chris top him, things will get worse. Chris will be even more obsessed.

I *love* jealous Brian! It was both funny and exciting to see how Justin shared his thoughts with Daphne. I totally agree with him, it seems Brian starts to get possessive!



Author's Response:

Chris does know that he is using her but does not feel as bad as he should about it. I agree, Marlissa deserves better than that, although she is not being honest either ;)

You are right; Chris will desire Justin even more after their naughty fun.

Brian does not like the posibility of another man having feelings for Justin!

Thank you so much for sharing your thought ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Britin77 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2015 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 10- The day he learned some more

I am so glad to find there's a new chapter to this story as i am throughly enjoying it.

 

Its werid to read how Hobbs is enjoying his sexual eduction with Justin and seems to be fallinghard for the cute twink.I cant blame him. I wonder where it would leaves Brian.

Look forward to next chapters and hopelly less Hetero sex but more hot gay sex:)



Author's Response:

I am pleased you enjoyed this chapter!

Yes, I suppose it is quite out of character for Chris, but that is the point after all.

I can tell you things will start to change from the next chapter.

Sorry about the hetero stuff involved, but it has to be if Chris is not ready to admit his true sexuality and self.

I can also tell you that there will indeed be lss hetero moments from this point on.

Thank you for you review ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2015 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 10- The day he learned some more

Glad to read this chapter! Can't wait for more ♥



Author's Response:

And in turn I am glad that you read it! ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Alois (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2015 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 10- The day he learned some more

Happy Easter to me indeed 😊😊😊 I was sooo happy to see your update and as always, I want more!!! Thank you for this story Cait, I promise you I will be patient lol. I can't wait to know how it turns out for the three boys here...:)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for reading and leting me know you enjoyed it!

Hopefully I will have time evry now and hen to write !

xoxo

Reviewer: adam (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2015 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 9- The day he was caught staring

Love it really like it hope to see it get more well hot between Chris and Justin teaching him all the tricks love you work



Author's Response:

thank you dear!

Yes. there will be more fun between the boys ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: don (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2015 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 9- The day he was caught staring

wondering when will we get a new story really loveing you work



Author's Response:

Real life has had me swamped with little writing time! Do not worry my dear, I will NOT give up on this story! I am going to finish it if it nearly kills me! I am so pleased you like the story, so that is why I am dedicating it to all my readers such as you because I loooove you! I am terribly sorry it has been so long!

xoxo

Reviewer: shaun (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2015 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 8- The day he boned...twice

Hi just wondering when will we get a new story really loveing you work hope to read more soon and thank you.



Author's Response:

Hello there! I am glad you like my story! I am incredibly sorry for the long wait but real life has got so so darn busy! argh! I wish I had more time to write. I will post a new chapter as soon as I have time, but unfortunately I can't tell you when that will be

Thanks for reading and commenting!

xoxo

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2015 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 9- The day he was caught staring

Hi!:) I loved this new chapter, it was amazing – it was so funny and adorable, how Chris was staring at Justin all the time, and how he then looked away in embarrassment :) Daphne is great, I laughed at all her attempts to make Justin admit the truth.

And of course, my favorite part of the chapter- Brian’s jealousy! I enjoyed it sooo much, poor Brian obviously doesn’t know what to do with his feelings and these confusing emotions. He hates the fact that Justin let Chris fuck him. And when Brian hates something, he becomes an asshole.

Chris is still in denial, though. I wonder when he’ll accept he has a big crush. And I can’t wait for him to meet Brian!

Thank you, great chapter – and I hope you had wonderful holidays!



Author's Response:

I am overjoyed that you are pleased with this chapter. Personally, I didn't think it was very good, but your encourging words are fantastic to read ;)

It makes me happy to know that reading my story brought you entertainment.

We all know Brian as a little possessive when it comes to Justin. I wouldn't say he is confused by his emotions- deep down, he knows exactly what they are and why they are there, however, he just refuses to acknowlede them!

It is true that Chris is in denial and will be for a long time to come. I can't really say much more, otherwise I will give the story away. As for the meeting, I will reveal that in their initial meeting there will not be much interaction between the two. I just hope I live up to your expectations!

Thank you for reading and reviewing- it makes my day! Happy holidays right back at you :)

xoxo

Reviewer: Lover (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2015 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 9- The day he was caught staring

I like that in this story everything is in character. Justin is still in love with Brian and he doesn't really care about Chris. Loved Brian in this chapter. 

You've done really well :)



Author's Response:

I am thirlled you like this story. Your support means a lot.

I hope you know I truly am writing this story for you- my readers.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read my story and for reviewing.

I hope you enjoy what is to come ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: chaval (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2014 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 9- The day he was caught staring

L'histoire est toujours passionnante.

Je te pardonne car c'est Noël, mais ne nous fais plus attendre aussi longtemps pour une mise à jour.



Author's Response:

Merci d'avoir lu!

xoxo

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2014 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 9- The day he was caught staring

I was so happy to see an update of this. Merry Christmas to me indeed ;) I still love this story so much. I absolutely adore what you're doing here. I can picture everything in my head and every character is so greatly personified. Brian's reaction is so...Brian! And Justin is great here. It makes me feel I'm watching season one all over again :) can't wait for the next one! Thank you Cait for this great story and for being such a good author and supporter. All my wishes to you and your family again 😊



Author's Response:

I can not tell you how wonderful your words are to read! Thank you very much for taking the time to read my story and submit a review. It is wonderful to know that I've got some support out there.

Thank you for the Christmas wishes; right back at you!

I really do hope that you are enjoying my little go at a fanfic story. I think it's great that you think Brian's reaction was very him. I think so too ;)

Thanks for being so lovely :)

xoxo

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2014 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 8- The day he boned...twice

I'm more and more in love with this story. Write soon the next chapter ♥



Author's Response:

I'm glad.

Believe me I feel so bad for the long wait between chapters. I am just SO darn busy!!!

I will tell you that I have started the next chapter and SHOULD post it within the next 2 weeks.

Thank you for sticking by and reading anyway ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2014 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 8- The day he boned...twice

I am really starting to relax with this fic.  I was so worried about the ending I had forgotten to appreciate the ride.  I'm totally enjoying your writing and original story line.  It's such a delightfully different view of Chris. 

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! If you are happy, I am happy :)

xoxo

Reviewer: chaval (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2014 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 8- The day he boned...twice

J'attend la suite avec impatience.



Author's Response:

Garder la lecture ! ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2014 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 8- The day he boned...twice

Hi Cait!

I was so happy to see an update! I really like this chapter, but it's not really a surprise ;) So, I really love what you are doing with this story, and how you are depainting Chris here. I find him very interesting. I also love Justin for being carefree in his relationship with Chris. Very interesting too. I can't wait to see what you have planned for them. By now, I feel like it could go very well, or very bad. Either way, I will patiently (I will try to anyway) wait for your next update! Thank you so much for this unique story my friend :) and big hugs to you!



Author's Response:

Thank you kindly me dear!

Your encouraging words are so fantastic! Since you reviewed, I am now obliged to love you forever! ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 7- The day he was questioned about it

I like this chapter as it seems like Justin might soon realize Chris has feelings for him.  If he doesn't I can see they may be set on an unaltered path to the prom.  I hope not.

Cheers :(  



Author's Response:

Only time will tell....

Thank you for reading and for your review

xoxo

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 6- The day(s) he was ignored. Big time.

Oh, I love their plan to ignore Chris and make him mad.  I liked the fact they had it all worked out.  It looks like Chris is the one that might get hurt from this non-relationship as he seems to have feelings for Justin, yet we all know Justin's feelings are only for Brian. 

Yay, Chris at least stopped Justin from getting a beating.  It's a start.  

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Hehe, Justin and Daphne can be evil geniuses when they really want to be.

Like I have mentioned before, Justin has this way of unintentionally casting his little spell on people.

Chris doesn't want to fuck up his chance of getting to be with another man, especially when that young man is Justin Taylor

Thanks for your insightful reviews, I love reading them ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 5- The day Brian got hit...then Justin did too

When Justin wanted Hobbs to help him find relief from his shit day I thought for sure Justin was channeling Brian Kinney.  I could almost hear Brian's voice and not Justin's.   These guys are hot together and it's fun to read about Chris' new sexual experiences.  Justin is sure to turn him in to the best homosexual he can be. 

The ending was as expected.  Did Justin really think Hobbs would stand up for him against his friends?  Now, let's see what the fall out is for them both.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Chris Hobbs has a long way to go before he becomes what is deemed a 'good' homosexual.

Justin loves playing the role of Brian as he looks up to him.

I agree that the ending was expected. There is no other possible outcome at this very point in time for Chris

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 4- The day they made a deal

"I want us to see each other like that. No bullshit. Just sex crap. In secret."  This is a perfect line, as it is definitely how a high school student would talk. 

St James certainly looks like it is going to be fun for Justin, although we all know that equilibrium never lasts long for Brian or Justin.   I just hope Justin and Chris get in a little more fun time before things changes. 

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Hah, well If I know anything about teenagers, it's the way they speak.

Justin and Chris will have fun. Nothing more...

xoxo

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 3- The day he told Brian

This Chris seems a whole lot nicer and his sexual innocence/shyness is almost endearing. 

I love that Brian was proud of and encouraged Justin; that is so Brian Kinney.  :D

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

I am happy that you think so

xoxo

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 2- The day it happened again

I don't mind Chris and Justin together; I just worry "what if" won't change the outcome.  If I thought it did I could relax, but for now I worry.  LOL

I wish Daphne was a little more discreet. 

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

'What if' can mean a lot ;) Keep reading and you'll find out.

Justin has a way of charming people. Chris is no exception.

Daph is your typical excitable teenage girl!

xoxo

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 1- The day it happened

"Inspired by the gap-filler fic, 'Hobbs gets a Hand' by soul1essharpy" Firstly, I would just like to say how refreshing it is to see an author who is inspired by another, admit it.  So many would say it is a coincidence and take credit for the idea.  I am thrilled you haven't done that.  Just recently another one of my ideas was copied, and yes you guessed it there was no mention where the idea came from, although it is very obvious.  So kudos to you Cait.

I tread with trepidation as I read this as we all know what Chris Hobbs did; although it is OCC so I will move forward.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Well, I am pleased that you have decided to give my story a shot.

I am not a person who takes credit for ideas that aren't entirely my own, so I figured since this first chapter of mine was quite similar to the other fic I should mention it.

It's nice that you appreciated that

Fear not, as this story might just turn out differently to how it did in the show ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2014 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 7- The day he was questioned about it

Ah, so now we know the real reason Chis went after Justin. 



Author's Response:

Indeed, my friend

xoxo

Reviewer: Lover (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2014 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 7- The day he was questioned about it

Oh I didn't find it boring at all. I love to see how the characters think and all the talking they do :).

Not at all a bad chapter :). Hope to read from you soon, because this story is addicting.



Author's Response:

I am so thrilled that you are enjoying my story. :)

Thanks for the review, much appreciated

xoxo

Reviewer: Lover (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2014 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 6- The day(s) he was ignored. Big time.

I noticed just now the new two chapters :) What can I say? Go Justin, go! Lol. He's totally the top, but don't tell Chris ;)



Author's Response:

Haha, thanks! Chris has no idea what Justin's got in store for him

xoxo

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2014 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 7- The day he was questioned about it

Hi Cait!

This chapter wasn't boring, rather interesting. You portray Justin as a real teenager with not a lot of consideration about what he is doing with Chris. I'm really interested in where you are going to take this... So, looking forward to the rest of your unique story my friend :)

 



Author's Response:

Hiya! It is great that you found it interesting. Thank you for reviewing, I love reading the comments I get and yours are always very encouraging.

I'm expecting this to finish up in around 16 chapters, give or take (It will most likely end up being less). 

So stay tuned, as there's plenty more to come

Hope you have a lovely week ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2014 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 7- The day he was questioned about it

On no, this chapter wasn’t boring at all – I loved just like I loved the whole story. I’m one of those people who are very interested in Justin/Chris relationship – I don’t know how to explain it, but I always re-watch scenes with them in the show, especially in the first season. Even when Chris is furious with Justin, his eyes are full of such longing, such desire that it raises goose-bumps on my skin. Very interesting couple. I love how you captured Hobbs’ violent, passionate temper, how you described his feelings for Justin. He’s in deeper than he thinks – I wonder what he would do if Justin got tired of him and left him. And I guess it will happen – Justin agrees with Brian, at one moment he’ll want to stop losing his time.

Details about Chris’ girlfriend are fascinating – it’s interesting to watch how Chris tries to make himself like her, but can’t. All his moments with Justin are mind-blowing – I loved how Justin turned his aggression into passion after the hand-job, and how he tortured Chris with his indifference later, after the incident with Mark.

I can’t wait for the next chapter! Actually, I like Chris so much that I want him to find his happiness, with Justin or not.

Thanks for a wonderful, unusual story!



Author's Response:

Hello my dearest,

Wow! Thank you so much for your kind and inspiring words. This is honestly the best review I'v ever gotten. I am so very glad that you are enjoying it :D

I am interested in the Justin/Chris paring also. I don't exactly 'ship' them, I just find them...interesting! I was looking for a story like this, and when I couldn't find one I decided to write it myself.

Chris still has a lot of personal growth and self discovery to do, so you will be seeing that with the rest of the story. I would say I plan for there to be around 16 chapters max, quite possibly even less.

Thank you so much for your review, you made my day! Thanks for putting a smile on my face :)

xoxo

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2014 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 6- The day(s) he was ignored. Big time.

Hi Cait!

I love this story. And I'm really glad with your storyline. I was scared Justin would do something stupid and would expose Chris, but I much prefer your take on this. Great job! I will be looking forward to your next chapter :) Thank you!



Author's Response:

Hello my dear!

I am so pleased that you like it! It is fantastic to know that. Have a fantastic week!

xoxo

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2014 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 6- The day(s) he was ignored. Big time.

It goes to show that while Hobbs is just a sideline with Justin, he's not a sideline to Hobbs.  At least he stood up of Justin instead of looking the other way.



Author's Response:

Exactly right, my friend :)

xoxo

Reviewer: j.j. (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2014 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 5- The day Brian got hit...then Justin did too

Ops. Chris you are so going down! Justin is going to kick your ass hopefully lol.

Hope to read from you soon :)



Author's Response:

Heh heh, I am happy that you liked it ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2014 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 5- The day Brian got hit...then Justin did too

Ok. Yeah I kinda expected it to happen, well at least I expected a betrayal. Chris didn't disappointed me, now did he? I can't say that I would have done something though. It was a shit situation ... Oh well I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Hooray! People like me! Hooray for you ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2014 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 5- The day Brian got hit...then Justin did too

Not stepping in is in line with Hobbs character and fits perfectly with this story.  Love how you fitted the attach by Craig in here.



Author's Response:

Thank you oh so very much dearie ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2014 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 5- The day Brian got hit...then Justin did too

Hi Cait!

So, are we surprised about Chris's reaction here? No. But it's interesting that he feels guilty afterward, as the Chris Hobbs of the show definitely wouldn't. Not sure Justin will give a shit, though... 

And I loved the interaction with the boys at the beginning of the chapter! 

Great chapter, thank you!



Author's Response:

Hello sweet one!

I am glad that you found this chapter interesting ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Lover (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2014 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 4- The day they made a deal

Yes, really good chapter :) now you just have to post the next one.


Hope to hear from you soon! 



Author's Response:

Thanks and you may ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2014 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 4- The day they made a deal

I'm really surprised, but I'm liking this fic!  I wasn't sure how I'd enjoy this considering it's Hobbs, but it's really well done.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Keep reading!

xoxo

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2014 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 4- The day they made a deal

So, yes, it's too short! LOL. Can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

haha, I will post a new chapter soon ;p

xoxo

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2014 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 3- The day he told Brian

So, as always, I love your characterisation here. Brian is very well in character and I really enjoy Justin and Chris's relationship here. Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks lovely! xoxo

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2014 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 4- The day they made a deal

Can't get over how much this would have changed the series.  I like it.



Author's Response:

Thank you my darling ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2014 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 2- The day it happened again

Hi my friend! I finally have a little time to give your story a try (I really shoud go to bed now, LOL) and I find it quite interesting. Chris Hobbs as an asshole is a sure thing in many fics and I find it refreshing for you to explore his character in a different way. I can't wait to see where you are going with him in this story. I also love your writing style. So thank you :)



Author's Response:

Hey there, lovely!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I am pleased that you like it! Stay tuned ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: j.j. (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2014 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 3- The day he told Brian

The fact that Chris actually touched Justin is very important. We can say that he's definitely a different guy now. Maybe he will come to accept his homosexuality? ... yeah, I think it will be a while ...


But now you're not going to abandon this story right? It would be such a shame, cause it's really well written and I love the characterizations. Brian is perfect! 


Hope to read from you soon!



Author's Response:

Hiya, lovely,

I am very pleased that you like this story! I wasn't sure how people would react to it, but you are making me writing it so worth while.

The next chapter will be up within the next week, I promise. I have just been so busy the last couple of weeks with exams.

I like that you see the significance in Chris touching Justin. I didn't know if readers would pick up on that.

Thanks for reading and responding ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: j.j. (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2014 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 2- The day it happened again

Oh god but they kissed! No they practically made out! And they done stuff ... Loved it :)


You're writing the characterization of Chris really well.


What's next? Gonna read the third chapter now.



Author's Response:

It's so great that you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: j.j. (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2014 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 1- The day it happened

So I really like your idea :). Chris Hobbs is a character that I hate but at the beginning of the first season i told myself 'oh that's cute he's a crush on Justin.' Then he was an asshole ... but I'm really interested in your story!


Now I am going to read the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

Glad you think so ! ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Lover (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2014 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 3- The day he told Brian

Please do continue cause this is really good! I hate Hobbs, but maybe you can redeem him? Waiting for the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, friend! I will post the next chapter within the next two weeks. Sorry for the wait, I am just so busy!

xoxo

Reviewer: Shaun (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2014 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 3- The day he told Brian

Hi i like you work a lot and hope to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, hon ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2014 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 3- The day he told Brian

Interesting.  Chris crushing on Justin who is crushing on Brian.  It all fit in perfectly.  Brian's advice sounded so like him.  Great job.



Author's Response:

thanks doll xoxo

Reviewer: Britin77 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2014 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 2- The day it happened again

I am really enjoying this fic and even i am not a fan of Chris, you are bringing out his human quailty. Justin is such a naughty tease.its not suprise Hobbs cant resisit him.Look forward to the next few chapters.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. Ypu have no idea how glad I am that at least some people seem to like it. I will be posting the next chapter very soon ;)

Reviewer: Jerri (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2014 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 1- The day it happened

This stor so far is very good. It's something different  for a change. Can,t wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you, lovely. So glad you like it ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2014 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 2- The day it happened again

Ahh, you've made some changes.  That's good.  Just follow your muse.



Author's Response:

I shall ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 1- The day it happened

I normally don't read Hobbs stories, but you've made him human so I'll be following along.



Author's Response:

Thanks ;)

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