Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Too Busy to Fouk
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2015 05:37 AM · On: Off the Menu Items

Sexy fun! Just discovered your stories and would really like more in this series. I hope you're still writing in the QAF fandom.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2014 11:04 AM · On: Off the Menu Items

Well, that was fun. I was looking for something to read that I hadn't caught up on - RL gets in the way at times. At first I thought it was a AU story and then it turned out to be a game. Way to go to keep the sex life interesting. I wonder what Justin said to Debbie to get her to hand over the key to the dinner......?

Author's Response:

I'm glad you were entertained... and surprised at how the story turned out. Everyone seems to bbe wondering what Justin said to Debbie, but I'll leave that up to you to decide :)

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2014 06:21 PM · On: Off the Menu Items

nice story :D



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Twinkminded (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2014 05:08 PM · On: Off the Menu Items

I love it. It took me a while to decide if they were playing a game or not. I loved them being in the diner. I would love to know what Justin told Debbie.

I can't wait to see what you come up with next.



Author's Response:

Oh good, I wanted you to have to read for a bit before deciding whether or not they were playing a game. So that worked out just right I guess. Thanks for commenting :)

Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2014 02:45 PM · On: Off the Menu Items

I loved it! It was cheeky, sexy and funny. Well done, keep writing ;) xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks, I love that you thought it was cheeky! xoxo

Reviewer: rhonda (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2014 06:26 PM · On: Off the Menu Items

very fun read . enjoyed it very much



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2014 08:58 AM · On: Off the Menu Items

That was great .. And more would be a bonus



Author's Response:

Thanks, and there will be others.

Reviewer: Britin77 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2014 05:56 PM · On: Off the Menu Items

I throughly enjoy this hot short fic.  It would be great to read more chapters.Hint,hint.



Author's Response:

Cool :) I do plan to write other short ones like this and make it a series.

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2014 11:30 AM · On: Off the Menu Items

This was increadibly sexy and very funny, even despite the fact that the summary was not very good. In your next instalment, try and come up with something that is more attractive. Because the story was far superior to the cover, so to speak. I loved your rendition of Brian- certainly did justice to this character. I also liked Justin's cocky teenage act as well, standing up to Brian. I always thought that Brian became attracted to Justin because Justin refused to be chopped liver and you brought that across so very well. There were some problems with the timing of the story- you said that they had only fucked twice, and yet Justin and Brian seem to remember things they could not possibly have in such a short amount of time. If Brian only just recognized Justin, it doesn't make sense that he would remember Justin being a really good cook in his house. That is, unless there is a back story you haven't revealed. Be careful with timing. Otherwise, I enjoyed this sex scene very much- I could see myself with a camera right the way through. Definitely some of the bext sex I have read for this couple. Very well done overall. 



Author's Response:

I definately see what you mean about the summary. I'm going to edit that to make it better. As for what you perceived to be innacuracies in the timing; that was intentional. Brian and Justin were pretending to be minor acquaintances/old tricks, but in reality they were the familiar Justin/Brian couple that we know from the show. The innacuracies--like Justin knowing Brian's no carbs after 7 rule--were them slipping up during the 'game' so to speak. At the end these innacuracies become more obvious because the two of them drop the ruse and head home together. I'm pleased as punch that you thought the sex was well written. I do worry about that. Thanks for your thoughtful feedback, very much appreciated.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2014 11:26 PM · On: Off the Menu Items

* giggles * love this one. Can't wait till the next story in this serie.

 

* hugs *

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 04:23 PM · On: Off the Menu Items

Oh this was clever and had me totally thrown for a loop right up until the very end...what had little Sunshine said to Debbie to let them play this delicious game. I'm really looking forward to more of this series ;)

Author's Response:

Well I'm glad you didn't catch on until the end, that was my goal ;) YOU decide what Justin said to Debbie, lol! And there will be a good number of additional one-shots for this series. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2014 04:41 AM · On: Off the Menu Items

I would lo e to know what Justin told deb.   More in the series would be fun



Author's Response:

I have a good number of additional on-shots planned for this series. They all nvolve Brian and Justin in unusual roles--some role-playing, some not. As for what Justin told Deb, that's up for you to decide!

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 07:49 PM · On: Off the Menu Items

******

I LOVE this. And Justin's shirt

Fouk, that's just too god ...;)

thank you!******

Forgive the slip, I wanted to say it was so GOOD, but that's an interesting slip...;D

And please don't mind my mistakes, sometimes I have to write a review three times before having it right :(

Congratulations for this great story. I will be waiting for more :)

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Alois, I don't mind the slips at all; I appreciate the kind review. And haha, I'm glad you thought it was 'fouking' good.

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 07:28 PM · On: Off the Menu Items

I LOVE this. Ans Justin's shirt

Fouk, that's just too god ...;)

thank you!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: QaFfangirl (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 05:55 PM · On: Off the Menu Items

So Justin's shirt says "too busy to fcuk" which is the french connection-uk logo.  I'm not sure if the change was intentional but I love the story.



Author's Response:

I did not intentionally change it, lol. I always thought it said "fouk." That's so funny And I'm glad you pointed I out. I guess even as a snotty teenager, Justin was a label queen, lol. Oh well, I think the story still works with the fouk, don't you? Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2014 03:19 AM · On: Off the Menu Items

Love it! Excited to see that there will be more in the series!



Author's Response:

Hey that's so great that you liked it :) I'm definitely doing more of these, and soon.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 02:45 AM · On: Off the Menu Items

Cute. Wonder what he told Debbie.

Author's Response:

I'll leave it up for you to decide. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 02:35 AM · On: Off the Menu Items

I like this!  You actually had me going.  So they had some after diner delight. 



Author's Response:

Oh yes ;) this entire series will see Brian and Justin in a bunch of role-playing scenarios. Glad you liked it and I'm glad I had you going!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2014 11:09 PM · On: Off the Menu Items

excellent! 

I love the way they play around together



Author's Response:

Thanks! This was one of the tamer ones I thought of. I've got lots more planned.

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