Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Consequences
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2014 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 26

Hi Alois! 

I was happy by reference to Daphne. I like her very much as I had commented to you and would be happy to see more of her in its history. 

I love the way you wrote Debbie. That was so perfect. You portrayed perfectly. 

It's great that Brian is out of his self imposed isolation and let your family back to your life. 

The scene on the porch was so exciting in many ways. Brian needs to learn to trust again to be able to open your heart again, even to Justin (at that time, to believe that Brian rapprochement with Justin scare you even more). 

The love is still there. Brian and Justin only need to learn once more the path that will lead them to rediscover and trust the feelings they share. 

A big hug, my dear. 

Fatima.



Author's Response:

Hi Fatima!

Again, thank you so much for your support and your comment :) I'm so glad you enjoy it!

*big hugs to you!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Vicky (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2014 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 26

What a great chapter !! First of all, I loved you portrayal of Debbie !! She is by far one of my fav characters of all times ! She's so special!! . As usual you were able to show her exactly as she is.In your story, she did what we all know she would have done. She can't mind her own business when it comes to his boys :). Hats off to you once more !!

B/J in the backyard brought many memories back but at the same time, their interaction here shows how much life has changed them and how everything we go through shapes who we are. This story just gets better and better with each new update !!

I feel like I STILL need closure and I need to know what made Aidan make the decision he made.I STILL would love you to write a story after this one in which  there's a happy ending for B/A :)

Looking forward to the next one :D

Big Hugs :*



Author's Response:

Hi Vicky!

*** smiling ***

I'm really glad you like it. I understand many readers still need closure about Aidan and I can only say all will be explained before this story ends... ;) Thank you as always for your support!

*big hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2014 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 26

* waves * I'm still here, still reading, still enjoying every chapter you write, still missing Aidan I want him back with Brian. I'm glad Justin takes it slow.

Sorry for not commenting the last chapters. I've been busy with applaying for jobs. And yes last Thursday I've got good news ... About three weeks I'll be in the classroom again, teaching math.

 

* big hug *



Author's Response:

Hi Marian!

It's so good to hear from you. I'm glad you're still enjoying this story, even if Aidan is not here now :(

And sooo glad to hear about your job! Congratulations! I'm so happy for you :)

***big smile***

*a special hug to you my dear friend!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2014 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 26

Justin really is all grown up isn't he .. :)



Author's Response:

Hi Carol,

He is, isn't he? ;)

Thank you for your support again :)

*hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2014 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 26

Well, it's good to see the boys at least talking again. Hopefully this is a continuing upward trend between them.

Author's Response:

Hi Tamara!

Yes, it's good to see them talking. Hopefully, as you say, they will become closer a little more each time they see each other ;)

*big hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: Miki (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2014 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 26

chapters are too short too far between need more



Author's Response:

Hi Miki!

Thank you so much to let me know how much you enjoy it :) More as soon as I can, I promise!

*hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2014 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 26

It's nice to catch up with what Justin's family and Daphne have been up to.  At least Brian is not shutting himself away and seems willing to try to be friends.



Author's Response:

Hi my friend!

Thank you as always for your comment and your support. I'm glad you're still enjoying the ride :)

*big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2014 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 26

I so love this chapter I'm freaken glad their talking thanks again alois



Author's Response:

Hi Tash!

Thank YOU for your support :) I'm really glad you enjoyed this chapter!

*big hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2014 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 26

Awwww... Love their words on the porch.  Perfect



Author's Response:

Hi Gina Marie,

I'm glad you like it ***smiling*** I took a great pleasure imagining that particular scene.

Thank you for yur comment my dear friend :)

*hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2014 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 26

Wow a slow thaw is happening I think 👍

Author's Response:

Hi Chris!

You're right ;) It takes time, but eventually, they're going to reconnect for real :)

Thank you my friend for you comment, I really appreciate it!

*big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: cinto (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2014 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 26

Aloïs, ces deux hommes me feront toujours vibrer!! et là, j'ai encore vibré grâce à vous. Merci pour ce premier lien entre eux.  Et quelle fragilité dans ce moment unique! Je pense que c'était très dur, très difficile pour Justin de trouver ce très fin équilibre, comme s'il marchait sur un fil suspendu. J'ai adoré Brian qui ne ferme pas la porte, cette fois, et qui même tend la main au bout du chemin sur ce fil suspendu.

Je me demande juste comment ils vont réagir s'ils apprennent qu'iden est venu voir Justin à la galerie pour lui suggérer d'être près de Brian. La manipulation, ni Brian, ni Justin n'aime ça...

Merci pour votre histoire.



Author's Response:

Bonsoir Cinto,

 

Merci à vous de me faire partager vos émotions, cela me fait très très plaisir! Je vous promets que tout sera révélé en son temps ... ;)

Bien Amicalement :)

~alois~

 

Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2014 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 26

Even better than the last chapter! I am really enjoying this story. I liked Brian and Justin's conversation a lot. And the part about Debbie was a nice touch ;)

 

xoxo



Author's Response:

Hi Cait!

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy it :) I'm always anxious to know how each chapter is going to be perceived by the reader, so your support helps a lot.

*big hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2014 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 26

Awesome!  Brian is thawing a bit and is letting the family in including Justin.



Author's Response:

Hi Shari!

I'm glad you like it :) You could do my resume for each chapter ;)

Thank you my friend for your support and your comment!

*hugs*

~alois~

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