Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Consequences
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2014 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 25

Hi Alois! 

I finally got to read the new chapters. 

It is sad to see how Brian is suffering, but your reaction to all that had happened is very understandable. He does not understand what took Aidan to leave, he feels abandoned and that is what is affecting him more. 

I can see the reasons why Brian to stay away from everyone, including of Justin. I'm really liking what you did not take the two together immediately. It's been a long time in which the two stayed away and we need to build your relationship back to something that is real and not just a way to compensate and alleviate the pains of each. 

I really like Ted. He is one of the most interesting characters in the show after Brian for me. And you were brilliant at portraying their friendship with Brian. 

I really like the friendship relationship between Brian and Ted. It's one of the things I like about QAF and one of the few reasons that cause I still watch Season 5 without me feel so frustrated. The 513th episode is a case apart. 

I hope you bring Aidan back. A closure of her story with Brian and it is clarified the reasons for his departure is required. 

I  still love very much your story and you're doing an amazing job. 

A big hug from Brazil, Fátima.



Author's Response:

Hi Fatima!

Thank you to share your thoughts with me :) like you say, I couldn't imagine Brian and Justin together right now, without it being a kind of crutch because of Aidan's leaving. Brian and Justin has too much respect for each other. Their relationship has to grow up again.

As for Ted, I love his character and his relationship with Brian, so, I'm really glad you enjoy the scene between them here!

*big hugs to you my dear friend!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2014 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 25

This is so weird but I'm having trouble letting Aiden go .. and I'm beginning to realise I probably won't be able to until I know why he felt he had to leave. I know I said I didn't need it .. I was wrong. Agreeing with his choice is neither here nor there .. I certainly never 'agreed' with Justins decision ... But the not knowing feels like limbo. Justin gave Brian closure and that enabled him to move on and fall in love again and I think for Brian and Justin to stand a chance he ll need that from Aiden too. I like your pacing .. It feels real, this story always feels real .. thats why I love it.



Author's Response:

Hi Carol!

I understand your feeling completely and I'm pretty sure it's shared by a lot of readers. I promise you I won't let this story end without closure about Aidan's leaving. I won't say when or how, in order not to reveal too much, but be assure everything will be in the open. However, I can't promise it will be soon.

Thank you as always, to share your thoughts with me and to let me know you think it feels real. I hope you will like what's to come :)

*big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2014 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 25

More please!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi Shauna!

*** smiling ***

I should be able to post the next chapter soon ;)

* big hugs my friend*

~alois~

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2014 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 25

Love love love Ted.  I always loved his relationship with Brian.

Good to see Brian reconnecting with his family.   



Author's Response:

Hi Gina Marie!

I agree, Ted can be so amazing in a way. I love his character.

thank you for your comment, and your support, as always! :)

*big hugs my friend*

~alois~

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2014 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 25

great chapter   cant wait to  see the next update



Author's Response:

Hi Sandy!

Thank you for your kind words :) I'm currently, like, right this minute working on the next chapter, so, it shouldn't be too long ;)

*big hugs my friend!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2014 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 25

Hi my friend! Even though I always get a sneak peek first, can't help actually leaving a review in hopes this will put you at 300. Congrats on all your feedback to this unique story!  I will be looking forward to how you progress B & J's reunification. *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim!

OMG...

And thank you :) I still can't believe you are the 300th comment I receive for this story. I couldn't have imagined this for one minute when I first started writing it. I don't need to say to you again that this story wouldn't be as good if not for you, my dear friend. You are the best support I could have hoped for. Thank you so much

*big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: cinto (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2014 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 25

Aloïs, j'ai adoré ce chapitre pour deux raisons. La première est la relation Brian/Ted; je la trouve bien plus constructive qu'avec Michaël. Et plus efficace.

La deuxième est Brian lui-même; ce type me donnera toujours plein d'émotions, cette fois à travers votre fiction. Ses pensées dans sa Corvette révèlent la force de ce personnage; il est blessé, il a peur, il s'est coupé de tous, c'est difficile mais il prend le risque encore une fois; et ça, prendre le risque, je crois, depuis toujours que c'est à Justin qu'il le doit.

J'aime cette fiction parce que vous respectez les personnages. Ils ne sont pas parfaits, juste humains. Merci.

 



Author's Response:

Bonjour Cinto!

Merci pour ce retour. J'apprécie moi-même énormément Brian et Ted dans le série. leur relation évolue tellement au fil des saisons; Ted est un des personnages que j'affectionne particulièrement.

Merci pour votre beau compliment concernant le côté non parfait, mais humain des personnages. C'est exactement ce que je souhaitais  refléter dans cette histoire lorsque j'ai commencé à l'écrire et à imaginer les scènes de vie entre les personnages. Je suis donc ravie par votre commentaire!

Bien Amicalement :)

~alois~

Reviewer: toniu (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2014 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 25

Today was one of those days when you wish you never got out of bed. I was nice to immerse myself in the story again. It was a great relaxer.

I feel bad for Brian. He is hurting. I like that the feelings he had for Aiden were real. I am also happy he's not falling into happy ever after with Justin.

Each one of them has grown. Brian isn't that tricking, drinking, pill popping asshole anymore. He was in a relationship. Something that doesn't go away over night. He had let go of Justin.

Justin isn't a child anymore. Though he held onto Brian emotionally I feel he should have to work at getting Brian back.

I also hope you bring Aiden back. Brian may need closure to be able to move on with Justin.

Thank you for this story. Paiting patiently for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi Toni!

I'm trully happy this chapter helped you to make your day a little better :) You're right, Brian and Justin have both grown up a lot. I hope you will like what's to come :)

Thank you for your support again, and for the comment 

*big hugs my friend!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Vicky (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2014 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 25

I Loved it !!I would've loved more if you hadn't included soo many thoughts and more action though :( I know they are necessary but I'm just to anxious lol

Brian's interactions with Ted during the show were priceless and once more, you've recreated the characters, their personalities and relationships in an amazing and  believable way :).Thank you so much !!It helps me to miss them a bit less.

Apparently there's light at the end of the tunnel :D. I know it's gonna take time but seeing Brian starting to open up and reconnect with his family is a start :)

I so want/need to know what's gonna happen.Please don't make us wait too long!! 

Thanks again for this story !!It makes my day whenever I see you've posted a new chapter.  Hugs and kisses :*



Author's Response:

Hi Vicky!

I'm glad you like it :) I know there are many parts in this story where I develop characters' thoughts inevitably, and I seem so slow to make the plot evolve...LOL

I'm also glad you like Ted and Brian's interaction here. I always love them in the show and I try my best to do the characters justice, it's not always easy! Knowing this kind of scene in the story make you miss them just a little less is a big compliment for me. So thank you :)

And thank you so much for your kind words, I'm so thrilled you still enjoy it! ***smiling***

*big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2014 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 25

A glimmer of Brian moving on and accepting "help" from the family.  Thanks for another great chapter.  



Author's Response:

Hi Shari!

"A glimmer of Brian moving on and accepting "help" from the family". You resume it perfectly. Thank you my dear friend for your support again. I'm thrilled you like this chapter. Brian's journey for another part of his life is just beginning...

*big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2014 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 25

Perhaps Brian is finally on the road to recovery.  It's so nice that Ted was able to get through to him. I know that he's not going to jump into a relationship anytime soon, the pain is still fresh even if it has been many months.  Do we ever find out why Aidan had to leave?



Author's Response:

Hi my friend!

Brian is slowly heading toward the road to recovery, but it will take time, you're right. We will find out of course why Aidan had left, but right now, the next chapters will be centered on Brian and Justin's lives and how they will reconnect after so many years.

Thank you so much again to support this story :)

*big hugs my friend!*

~alois~

Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2014 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 25

I love it! I love it! Yes yes yes! Woohoo!

3 cheers for you, my dear! Hip hip hooray! ;)

xoxo



Author's Response:

Hi Cait!

Wow, thank you for this great comment ***smiling widely*** I'm so thrilled you enjoyed this chapter :)

I have to run now, but I am also so happy to see your post, hip hip hooray back to you :)  I will read it later tonight when I will be back home!

*big hugs my friend*

~alois~

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2014 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 25

Oh I think we are getting our boys a little bit closer d84;a039;👍

Author's Response:

Hi Chris!

Yes, definitely :)  It will take time of course, but we are getting there. Three months has passed since their first encounter so, they are going to talk eventually ;)

Thank you my friend for your comment, I really appreciate it!

*bg hugs from France*

~alois~

Reviewer: Miki (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2014 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 25

Too short....need more.. Who was man in gallery in Paris ? What's going on with Justin we know he would be thinking about things he just can't be stay away or be friends forever the cosmic pull between the two cant not be there regardless of others 



Author's Response:

Hi Miki!

Thank you for your support! I'm currently working on the next chapter. I hope you will like the rest of the story and B/J new relationship...

* big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Miki (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2014 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 25

Please more chapters sooner



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2014 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 25

My emotions are still mixed here. Maybe once more is revealed then I'll have a better understanding of things.

Author's Response:

Hi Tamara!

More will be revealed in the next chapters concerning the new relationship that is going to grow between Briand and Justin. I seem to have troubles to make evolve the plot in a faster pace. I hope you will like what's to come!

Thank you, as always, to take the time to read this story and to share your thoughts with me :)

*big hugs my dear friend*

~alois~

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2014 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 25

Loved this chapter thanks again for another good chapter......... Are we going to see Aiden again in this story  Thanks againd84;a039;



Author's Response:

Hi Tash!

LOL it's big!I love it ;) Thank you for your comment my dear friend :) Concerning Aidan, we will know more of course, but for now, the next chapters will explore Brian and Justin's new relationship...

*big hugs*

~alois~

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