Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Consequences
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2018 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 21

Darn Justin, he cannot wait to ruin Brians live even more



Author's Response:

you don't like Justin, do you? LOL He's a good man here, and wants the best for Brian :)

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2014 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 21

Masterfully done .. I didn't feel that was rushed or contrived at all. Also knowing the reason Aiden's leaving is suddenly unimportant.... I know he loves Brian more than anything and I also don't feel he s choosing something else instead of Brian. I may be wrong but my gut feeling is that he's trying to spare Brian a greater pain and I believe on some level Brian knows that, as with Justin.  At this point I find I am more focused on what they have shared rather than what they are losing. One uninterrupted great love lasting forever is seen as the ideal but realistically how often does that happen. Once I got over my whole 'why on gods earth would anyone leave Brian' mentality I finally began to understand what I think you're trying to say and I find I am no longer obsessing about the people Brian loves leaving him .. Rather I'm appreciating how deeply he is loved in return and that holding on is not always the right and best thing to do :(

Justin's return feels like a balm .. I had forgotten how much I love him.

This story really is destined to be one of the greats .. and interestingly the song that inspired my all time favourite B/J fic (Kinnetically Charged by SATURN) 'A Different Kind of Pain' is never far from my mind when I'm reading this .. :)



Author's Response:

Hi Carol!

First of all, thank you. Your POV here on B/A or B/J could summon the story for me.  I objectively understand and agree that things here are unfair, even rushed in a way...but your point is so right. Each character in this story, Brian, Justin, Aidan acts out of love. They truly believe what they are doing is the right thing because they love their partner so much. They want the best for the person they love. We, me as the writer, and you as the reader, could debate of course of the fairness of it all. Are they right? Couldn't they fight more? Is it fair? But you get it, that is not really the point I'm trying to convey here. However, I admit I totally understand readers POV too and sometimes, I myself forget the more general meaning when I respond to a review. LOL But I think it just proves that we feel things along with them!

I love Justin too. So really, there is no side B/A or B/J for me even if I love to see readers involved in one couple. The story is about love and life, which can be painful and beautiful too.

And thank you so much about the compliment on this story. I don't know neither the fic you are talking about (is there a link?) , nor the song (I will go on youtube!) but thank you for sharing this with me. I myself have listened to so much songs while writing this story, I could come up with a list at the end lol I love music, so when a reader want to share mith me a song which make him/her think about this story, it's always a great pleasure!

*hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: Miki (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2014 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 21

I didn't think I would like Brian involved with another... And while invested - I am a believer in the soul mates ... And a huge fan of Brian in all his imperfect perfection...

cant wait to see how it ends.. Emotionally invested in the b j reunion 



Author's Response:

Hi Miki, thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. We will know more about Justin's return soon :)

*hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: Miki (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2014 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 21

Please do not leave us hanging long - completely cannot wait



Author's Response:

Hi Miki!

thank you so much to let me know you are envoying this story, I'm always thrilled, as every writer, to see a new reviewer :)

I will post as soon as I can in the next few days...

*hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2014 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 21

How very Brian of Aiden .. if my guess is right, and I kind of hope it isn't, this is a reason for leaving Brian that I can fully understand. Justin's coming home .. Justin who? I am now so emotionally invested in Brian and Aidens relationship that the prospect of a B/J reunion at Aiden's expense no longer holds any appeal. Who would have thought it :)



Author's Response:

Hi Carol!

What??? LOL. Now, I'm going to fight for Justin to gain Brian's heart again, who would have thought, indeed ;D

I'm glad you're still here, even if the ride is painful right now. I myself love Aidan, so, these chapters are a little difficult to write. Argggg!!!

Thank you my friend!

*hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2014 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 21

I really like that you have kept michael as a good guy in this story. I have read so many stories that make him out to be a big jerk, but you have stayed true to his character as the loyal and understanding friend. Nice work ;)

xoxo



Author's Response:

Hi my friend,

And thank you. I know I'm not a majority here, meaning I don't dislike Michael obviously. And I do think he is important to Brian, so in this story, I wanted to give him a chance to be a real friend.

I'm glad you like this aspect of the story :)

*big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Oz_ondi (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2014 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 21

Sorry missed something on previous post.

Loving this story & Brian with Aidan. I think the dementia is probably genetic and Aidan is heading the same way as his sister. Something in the chapter where she died got me thinking, only my thoughts, but this sounds ominous for Aidan having the same as Olivia?.

"A sense of dread comes over him, as he thinks of what Olivia’s death really means. It means he can’t run and hide anymore. He has to face his own truth, even if it’s the last thing he wants to do. He just hopes that fate will spare him. If not… life will never be the same"

I am really looking forward to the rest of the story. I would be quite happy for Brian to stay with Aiden, they are a good match, probably more so than Brian with Justin. Plus they have now been together longer and they truly love and are in love deeply with each other. Which way to go eh!!! Up to you but I'm really enjoying the writing, keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Hi!

First of all, thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. I'm always thrilled to see new reviewers enjoying the ride ;)

Your thoughts are really interesting . That's one possibily about what is happening to Aidan. I'm not going to agree or deny by this point, but I love seeing people's guesses on it. So thank you for sharing this with me:) I will reveal what is going on of course, but not sure when yet. My muse is definitively playing with the nerve of the readers right now LOL

And also, thank you so much for your support on this story!

*hugs from France*

~alois~

Reviewer: missy (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2014 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 21

Wut? LOL! You are killing me with the cliff hangers :D

Thank you for the update and I am really enjoying the story:)



Author's Response:

Hi missy!

I know I'm bad LOL It seems I can't help myself ;)

I'm thrilled you are enjoying this.

***big smile***

*hugs from France!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2014 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 21

You're breaking my heart, haha. Can you please just never stop writing for this 'verse? Please? 

Poor Brian. He truly has given all of himself, yet again, only to be left. Again. I know, I know, Justin is returning. Blah blah blah. Haha - just kidding. I'm excited for his return I promise. I just want the best of both worlds - Brian with Aidan, and Brian with Justin. Is that really too much to ask for?! ;)

As per usual, this was another amazing and truly emotional chapter. I know it's kind of weird, but every time I hear the song "Amnesia" by 5 Seconds of Summer, I think of this story. Every. Single. Time. Clearly the whole Brian/Aidan dynamic is now a permanent part of my (sub)concious thinking. 

I'm dying to know what is going on in Aidan's head. Clearly he's working through some demons, etc. And again, there's poor Brian. Most likely finding some way to blame himself. I just want to give him a hug and tell him it'll be okay. I guess Michael has that job taken care of though. Even though I wanted B/J reunited in the end, I could have easily pictured B/A going strong for a decade and more. You've just made them into such a strong couple. 

Keep that muse of yours going :)

-Tiffany



Author's Response:

Hi Tiffany! Oh God, thank you so much for your words. I just listen to the song you're talking about, because I didn't know it and wow, it's amazing to know you think of this story when you hear it :) Just fu**** amazing...

Aidan... the poor guy is going through a lot, my muse really didn't spare him until now. and Brian, well, I understand completely your feeling.

Justin is going to be a more present feature real soon. It's time.

I do think about writing an alternative verse after this story. I will ask the readers at the end if they are still interested, it's a promise.

Thank you!!

*hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2014 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 21

Oh my I started crying over the conversation between Brian and Aiden. My feelings towards  Aiden was growing I don't want him to leave. And for Justin I'm so glad my boy is coming back . Beautiful and sad chapter



Author's Response:

Hi Tash! This conversation between Aidan and Brian was one of the most difficult I had to write. I do have to listen to sad music to write that way, Fortunately for me, I am a weel-adjusted person in my everyday life, with a great family (my husband support me a lot), or I swear writing this could be more difficult. Writing emotions is exhausting!! And yes, your boy is coming back soon!

Thank you as always for your comment :)

*hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2014 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 21

Do you know what your doing to me LOL I get so nervous reading your story 



Author's Response:

Hi Tash! Sorry LOL, being nervous is not good for your health ;D Have you seen Marny's response to you?

**** big hugs ****

~alois~

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2014 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 21

okay so Aidan is slowly making his exit. My guess is he went to Justin in April while he was in Africa, hoping that by the time he is through with his stinit, Justin has made up his mind. And he has. Great sacrifice by Aidan here that's why I love him. Well, it is still painful but your excellent writing made it bearable. I'm happy Justin is back but I still welcome an alternative ending at a later time. Thanks for this chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi my friend! Yes, painful is the good word for these chapters. It's hard to write too. And thank you for your "excellent writing" comment, it warms my heart. I'm thrilled you still support the ride :)

*hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2014 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 21

I'd still like to know what Aidan is thinking.  What's wrong.  Then there is the surprise ending.  Justin's moving back!!!



Author's Response:

Hi my friend! What is Aidan thinking indeed? and yes, Justin is moving back, it is going to be interesting to see all his friends' reactions over his return...

Thank you as always ***smiling***

*hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2014 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 21

Surprise! Justin is back!

Unfortunately, if what I am thinking is wrong with Aidan, Brian is definitely going to need Justin's love and support.

 



Author's Response:

Hi samcdee! So you DO have an idea about Aidan's reaction... That's interesting ;) And you might be right about Brian and Justin, even if it won't be easy for them.

Thank you to share your thoughts with me, I'm thrilled you're still here with me :)

*big hugs!*

~alois~

 

 

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2014 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 21

Why does everyone Brian loves leave him?  If I were Brian, I'd say to hell with both of them!  Ugh!

So Aiden went to see Justin during those 3 months? That seems very calculating. Why would he want Justin to go back to Brian? To make it easier for him to say goodbye?

Ugh again!  lol

My heart goes out to Brian in this chapter.   No wonder he doesn't believe in love, just fucking.  :-)



Author's Response:

Hi Gina Marie!

You're absolutely right to feel that way. Brian is truly hurt right now and he has every right to be...

It's so painful to write and yet, there is a reason of course for Aidan to react that way, but Brian doesn't know it. is Aidan going to tell him though?

Thank you again to share your thoughts with me. :)

*big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2014 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 21

Poor Brian...I had a feeling this would happen :( I don't think Aidan is coming back and with Justin coming back to the states, anything is bound to happen...I wonder if Mikey will tell Brian about Sunshine's return?

Author's Response:

Hi Tamara!

Yes poor Brian... We will know what Aidan is planning in the next chapter, but yes, Justin coming back to the States will definitively change everyone's life. About Michael, we will know too real soon :)

Thank you again for your support my friend :)

*big hugs from France!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2014 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 21

@ Tash:    "Me again this review has nothing to do with the story lol I just want to know who that beautiful man is on the banner "

 Hi Tash! LOL I honestly don't know, you would have to ask Marny :) She created the banner and proposed this beautiful guy as Aidan based on the description I already made. In other words, she read my mind ;)

 *hugs*

~alois~

 LOL Alois did descripe Aidan in the first chapter as shaggy hair -  green eyes man I googled those five words and thadaa you find Aidan ... the "really ugly guy on pinterest"

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Marian, thank you for your answer to Tash, I absolutely  love the thadaa part LOL ;D

Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2014 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 21

Poor Brian.

But as nice written this chapter is, you revealed nothing...What's going on?

You're such a fantastic writer with wonderful ideas. You definetly know how to keep your readers at the story:) My usual plea...please post the next chapter soon.



Author's Response:

Hi Kathrin!

Yes, poor Brian. I love him and yet, I seem I like to make him suffer... I think (and hope) it will be my most ansgty story because I suffer with readers over it lol.

Thank you for your praise about my work. It's such a great compliment for me (I'm currently sporting a stupid smile on my face) And I'm not sure yet when all will be revealed... My brain is an evil friend right now ;).

I will post as soon as I can. thank you again Kathrin to be such a great supporter of this story, I truly appreciate it.

*big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2014 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 21

* blushes * I'm still here reading all your beautiful, powerfull and painfull chapters, for Brian and Aidan. Poor men. Sometimes I don't know what to say. But Ithis is the story I read right away, I drop everthing. Think this would be a wonderful film.

 

Why does Aidan leave? * sigh * poor man, why doesn't he speak about it with Brian. And poor Brian, he doesn't deserve it that... again ... a man is leaving he so loves.

Hmmm don't know if I want Justin back before Aidan. Justin will comfort Brian, but that will hurt Aidan. Aaaggrrr * sigh ... and grins *  Why can't they live like a threesome. Good idea.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Hi Marny!

It's so good to hear from you :) You're absolutely right...Poor men... I have to admit these chapters are hard to write. The plot is in my head for such a long time  that I can't back down now, but even for me, it's really painful. If I write another story after this one, it would be definitively a funnier one lol

So why does Aidan leave? Good question...;) There is a reason of course, but I'm not sure yet if it will be revealed rather sooner than later... Yes, my muse is definitively evil ;)

A threesome, aha, that would have been an idea lol It could have been hot ***smirking***

Thank you for letting me know you still enjoy the ride my friend :)

* hugs *

~alois~

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