Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2014 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 8
OMG, I don't usually read other peoples reviews and I should stick to that policy. I just read IcedCupcake (Jessie) review and my heart is now being ripped in two. I want Brian with Justin and I don't want Justin hurt, but I like Aidan and he doesn't deserve to be hurt either. Now I don't know whether to be happy Michael kept them apart or sad.
You did a great job on your first sex scene my friend; kudos to you.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: I can only promise one thing. If I write another story after this one, I will NOT be the evil writer again LOL
Thanks for your support my dear friend :)
~alois~
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2014 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 8
Well it's difficult to see how two tops are going to get together, but I know you'll manage somehow. This is all Mikey's fault, he should have kept his big mouth shut.
Author's Response: Yeah, Michael has always had a big mouth :)
Thank you my friend :)
~alois~
Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2014 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 8
Hmm...well, let me start by saying I get what you're doing and totally respect it. And I also think you're doing a great job! That being said... It physically hurts me to read this because I can't imagine Brian loving anyone else like he loved Justin. And if he does, I feel it cheapens the love they had for eachother...I operate under the thought that they're soulmates. For me, there is no one else for either of them. So I think I'm going to have to sit the rest of this out. You did say there would be a reunification. So I'll stop by again when it's over. I hope you understand that this is nothing to do with your writing, ideas, or anything. In fact, it's because you're doing such a good job that I'm getting upset, you've made it so believable and I prefer to live in denial. So, I wish you luck and I'll see you again at the end! <3
Author's Response: Hi Icedcupcake!
I trully appreciate your review. And I really love you saying you prefer to live in denial, because you think all of it is believable. it means a lot to me even if I'm sorry if this upsets you :)
You may not believe me but it's kind of hard to write this story sometimes lol I think I am crazy ;D I also think all of Justin's fans must hate me right now LOL (Just kidding!) Just so you know, I will try all I can not to cheapen Brian and Justin's love for each other, and I really hope readers will feel it, even considering that Brian lives something with someone else
Thank you so much for giving in a try :)
*hugs!*
~alois~
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2014 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 8
Hi, Alois - still here and still enjoying your story. I like the way you described the two men in this chapter - how they are different, and how they are alike. There are distinct differences between them, but they complement each other in a way. I find it interesting how Brian has become attracted to another man that is so different than Justin, too, although I admit I DO miss him in this story. I wonder when he will be making another appearance? I assume it is after the two men are physically intimate.
I actually thought it would happen in this chapter when you placed the NC-18 warning on it, but I actually llike the slower buildup of their relationship.
I will be looking forward to the rest of your story. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Hi Kim,
You're right, Justin will reappear when Brian and Aidan will be together, but it's not going to be anytime soon...:( Brian and Aidan's relationship is still evolving and they are not going to be together right away.
As I said in a previous review, you could almost consider that I write a story in two parts. So, if you're ready to wait, I promise you Justin will come back... Just not know...
Thank you for your review, as always, I trully appreciate all your comments about the evolution of the characters :)
*Hugs*
~alois~
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2014 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oh dear I do like Aiden I really do! But he isn't Justin and everyone is going to get hurt. But then again I don't want Brian sad and lonely oh dear I am confused lol well done
Author's Response: Hi bksbracelet!
I know, all Justin's fans want to tie me up right now lol. I understand your feelings really.
Brian and Aidan's relationship is going to evolve for quite a long time and Justin will reappear eventually, but not in the next chapters. You could almost consider a book I and II for this story in a way
Thank you again for taking the time to tell me what you think :) And sorry for the emotional ride! ;D
*Hugs*
~alois~
Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2014 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 8
Chère Alois,
J'aimais beaucoup le chapitre nouveau.
C'est exactement somme il doit être. Brian a se transformer avec Justin. Mais c'est toujours le même Brian. Trés bien écrit.
Aidan est un homme trés adorable est sympathique. Il est une bonne ideé de lui être en beaucoup de peine. Ainsi ce deux ont le temps pour developer une amitié avant le sex:)
Considerais ce compte-rendu en francais comme un hommage à ta conte merveilleux.
Meilleurs salutations d'Allmagne.
Kathrin
Author's Response: Chère Kathrin,
Merci beaucoup pour cette merveilleuse prose, vous n'avez pas idée à quel point cela me touche...
Et en français, c'est encore plus merveilleux!
A très bientôt :)
~alois~
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